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By : undercoverme
  • From sweetciel on May 19, 2007
    *applause* Spell binding and very well written. Just one question....there is going to be more right? A nice lemon for the masses? Please say yes *begs* Great job ^_^
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  • From on May 18, 2007
    dear shelly
    you have every right to call me a bitch and brat and even worse....i'm sorry I never check my e.mail.no one sends me anything there since I don't have a family and the reason is because I couldn't be home when my sister died......i'm not asking to forgive me or anything......I deserved that.and all I'm asking is to please take care of her when my sister died of canser i should've been there but I didn't I sayed back and let my mom go down alone...now you see all the thing that matters to me is reading and drawing(and that's that).......I never should've said that but I did so I promise I will do as you say and never review....I ansewr youre sister's e.mail but plz do tell her I/m sorry and please tell her I hope she'll be ok.....
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  • From catti on April 29, 2007
    Okay...this story is soooo...f@#king awesome...I know that there are only nine chapers as you stated that in the beginning...so where is Chapter 9?...getting impatient here...laughs...ive always been the in patient one in a relationship...please update...please?!?!?!? catti
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 18, 2007
    Good chapter. I can't wait to see Joseph's reaction to all of this. he won't be happy.
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  • From Wicabeth on April 17, 2007
    *snickers* I still love the chastity belt on Yugi XD Kinky and cute
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  • From transferterminals on April 15, 2007
    I love this fic!! Please update soon. ^^
    I hope Jou's evil grandfather gets what's coming to him. >:[
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  • From Wicabeth on April 10, 2007
    Shelly! I'm so glad you're posting here too!

    You already know full well that I love this story, but of course, it's gotta be good writing in the genes ;D
    I'm just sorry I didn't review sooner. If you chat with Maggie she'll tell you (left her a note) that I was gone last week and just got back last night.

    *skips off to LD to read chapter 8!*
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  • From Chikky on April 08, 2007
    I hope you update very very soon... I really like this story ^^; Can't wait for update ^^~
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 06, 2007
    Poor Jou, I can't beleive how badly his grandfather treated him. I hope he can get his memories back.
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  • From Anon on April 05, 2007
    ^_^ it still rocks my socks off update please ^_^
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 05, 2007
    Good chapter. That bastard, he wasn't looking for an heir he was looking for a younger body. He's trying to make himself immortal. I wonder what Rebecca will do with her new knowlege. Update soon, please.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 05, 2007
    Good chapter. Seto will do anything for Jou. I'm glad Jou decided to trust him. He also was ataking himself off the drugs. That was a smart move until he missed his half doses. I love it.
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  • From JessicaM on April 05, 2007
    YAY!!! A real doctor! the bird flu was a nice touch, and its nice to see Becca is not a raging psycopath like her hubby.
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  • From Sammei on April 05, 2007
    Ahh, I can't handle it! This was a real nail biter of a chapter for me. I'm not sure if it was the possibility of Seto getting caught, of their cover being blown, finding the pills. Just wow. Great great chapter. I'm glad that Seto's doc is good and decent - but hey, he's got connections and ways to get the best, right? Poor Jou.. I'm also really glad Rebecca found out the truth. I just can't help thinking that something is going to happen to blow Seto's cover, and then perhaps he'll need the rescuing? Oh, I hope not. Is the "special guest" on the plane that guy from the gorey chapter? Suppose I'll find out. I just hope justice gets served. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From on April 04, 2007
    sorry baby.I've been busy reading youre sister's wonderful story.you tow are hard to handle togather..!!! now I really don't think seto get out of this alive that basterd of jou's grandfather will kill him for sure.....and rebecca ? i feel sorry for her you know...thank god jou has seto to save him or els he whould end up like that!!!! come on now you wanna update or what?next week I have all the works of this planet on my shoulder so plz finish this fic in this week some how...love kisa
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