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  • From rclay on April 04, 2007
    i am so glad that seto and the others came to joey's resuce.
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  • From tash1021 on April 04, 2007
    awww that has to be one of the greatest escapes i have ever heard
    of
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  • From Sammei on April 03, 2007
    ...wow. Did NOT see the whole transferring consciousness thing coming at all. ^_^; It reminds me a bit of The Skeleton Key, only this doesn't scare the crap out of me. Then again, most horror movies do that to me. Anyhow. I'm so proud of Jou for deliberately cutting his meds in half like that! I really really hope this works out for the best. I do wonder how Rebecca would feel if she knew the truth.. I hope she finds out by the end of this fic. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2007
    hey could you e-mail me at bobkit24@aol.com when you update? because this is really awesome! I love the characterization and I got a belly ache from the drama... and I was breathing slow and shallow, AWESOME update soon~~
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  • From catti on April 03, 2007
    WOW two chapts one day...we feel special....but am slightly confused about the medicine and Becca and Rebecca and Joey Wheeler brain dead paragraphs....almost sounds like a Piers Anthony sci-fi novel....catti
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  • From catti on April 03, 2007
    Love it when jou goes all balistic....he is soooo damn sexy...Okay I tried really hard to picture Seito Kaiba with pouty lips, did not work...laughs...but I could see him eating squid...disgusting little critters...blah....takes like an old fisherman's boot...catti
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  • From on April 03, 2007
    wow.now it's joey that I feel sorry for...I hope seto manages to get joey out of this mess before the shitty grandfather finds out about seto's relationship with him..and just finish this story with seto killing this lying bitch. plz update soon..........love kisa(I guss there is no need to say you are officially a pro now...)
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 03, 2007
    Good chapter. I hope he keeps trusting Seto as hard as that may seem and he doesn't forget everything he learned, today.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 03, 2007
    Great chapter. Some memories, the subconcious ones are pushing forward. Just the feeling not the actual memories, this is so good. It is much more believable than if his memories came rushing back when they kissed.
    Mr. Wheeler can erase the memories but can't change who Jou is.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 03, 2007
    Good chapter. He really better watch out. Seto is even more dangerous than Gozaboro and more underestimated because of what he does in the business world. How could he be dangerous, is probably what they are thinking.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 03, 2007
    Poor Seto, but also poor Jounouchi. I think he's in a load of trouble. I bet whoever took him threatened to hurt Seto or Mokuba or even his friends. I don't think he would leave over money or power. He would take love every time.
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  • From JessicaM on April 02, 2007
    Ok yeah, I really really wanna smack this "Becca" around...stupid harlot. I was hoping 'Joey' would have been smart enough to take seto's advice and get rid of the meds but I can kinda understand why he didn't.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Sammei on April 02, 2007
    Haha, I actually ended up downloading the first six episodes of Yugioh, the season they never aired (it's got that chick with long hair in it?) a while back, and just never got around to reading it. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for it and the manga!
    This chapter was absolutely heartbreaking. I wonder how many times Jou's come to getting the truth back, only to get it wiped again. But, way to go for him turning tricky! I can't help but think that the whole "raised seam of his mattress" line is significant. Like, maybe he hid something there. Also, how upsetting must it be for Seto to realize Jou doesn't trust him anymore? Though, like he also said, you can understand his point of view. I hope that whole family gets what they deserve.. also, will we find out what's happened to that guy Seto tortured early on? Or is just permanently out of the picture?
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  • From rclay on April 02, 2007
    i am glad to see seto trying to help joey back, please update soon
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  • From JessicaM on April 02, 2007
    Wow this seems to be almost too easy, but I like it because it means that there'll be no pointless chapters that I see too much when people try to do a drama this but have no skill. You have skill. three chapters and I am rivited!

    Keep up the good work!
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