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Reviews for Redemption

By : cybergoth
  • From smalvina on October 20, 2007
    good chapter
    good to see yugi and yami
    can you show more of Seto and Jou?
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  • From ANON - Cody Thomas on October 20, 2007
    Another awesome chapter, Duke is so evil, I just want to smack the bastard. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Meepa on October 09, 2007
    I have to say, I'm very much in love with this! There are quite a few mistakes with spelling, grammar, and repetition in places, but I still enjoy each chapter. I did notice though, that Bakura seemed really friendly with Ryou's friends. I would expect him to be a little colder, but. xD;;

    I really do like the way you're not afraid to talk about religion and stuff. That's refreshing, since a lot of people will only write about the old Egyptian beliefs/gods/etc. But you're not worried to type about the Big Man and basically everything that would piss the hell out of hardcore, radical evangelists. xDD For that, I love you. :D

    I also like how Ryou's not a total spineless wimp of a shemale. Though, I think he did blow up a LITTLE much at being watched on his date. I can understand how upset that would make someone, but he was downright ferocious! o__o

    I haven't reviewed this before, I know, and I should have, considering I really cannot remember all of what I should say, but if it makes any difference at all, I have drawn you a picture. I don't know if it would be called fanart, since it really is not a scene from this story at all, but was inspired by it? D: I wish my computer hadn't broken so that I could scan and color this with the Photoshop that I no longer have. I will find a way, eventually, but until then, you'll have to settle for a picture of the, well. Picture.
    http://i22.tinypic.com/2saxvo4.jpg
    I'm sorry it's so hard to see. Dx Even harder to make out the pencil-sketch wings behind Bakura. Ugh, sorry it's so shoddy. ;-; BUT. I think this story DESERVES fanart! Even-if-it's-not-really-fanart-but-sorta-is. 8D I would also add text to this when finished. And what inspired me, silly enough, was the whole toad/frog-to-prince conversation. xD;; My previous idea for the text was going to be something along the lines off, "A kiss for a toad, so that he may become my prince." Lawl, corny. I think I might draw some ACTUAL fanart for that one, though. This will probably just... blah, I'm rambling. @___@ -promptly shuts up-

    And so ends this retarded, jump-everywhere-at-once review.

    ButIreallydolovethisstoryandIjustwokeupafewminutesago. :D

    ~Cecilia
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 30, 2007
    GAH! Mean Evil Cliffie Teaser NOOO! Update! No cliffies, they aren't nice! I wanna read moooooore! Update update update! (Yes I'm being a whiny little bitch, I haven't slept well in three weeks so I'm cranky.) Now update before I go mad!
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 17, 2007
    SQUEE UPDATES!!!! YAY! ^_^ *Glomp* I love you!

    And Otogi is seriously starting to scare me. O_o That last line was just downright creepy! I know Bakura can't die, but he still doesn't want his life to be a living hell. And I can just imagine what Seto, Yami and (possibly) Marik would do to the mortal wretch if he's stupid enough to try and hurt 'their' Bakura or start mucking up all their hard work. Although I can just as easily see Bakura, Malik and Joey coming in with a vengeance should Otogi try anything, especially since it involves Ryou. Update more soon so I won't go mad!
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on September 16, 2007
    I love this story - it's different, well thought out and written. Please don't rush just to meet a self-set deadline, quality is better than quantity. Just one thing though, and please don't take this as a negative - do you have a beta? There are small typo errors that spell correct would not pick up, as they are spelt correctly but the word is wrong. For example: "You" was suddenly awake - "you" should read "Ryou", and "regarded 'him' soft eyes", should read 'his'. I am a registered beta on this site, and would be more than happy to give a quick scan before uploading - if you wish!!!
    Meanwhile, here's a pressie for you: http://s73.photobucket.com/albums/i223/feathersinmyhair/redemption/
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  • From smalvina on September 10, 2007
    great chapter
    Bakura was so sweet
    poor Ryo , Otogi was an idiot
    can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 03, 2007
    OOOOH! It's a DAMN good start! I loved it! I do hope you will write more soon, this is such a great story and I absolutely LOVE reading it! great job! I love you I love you I love you! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From smalvina on August 26, 2007
    good chapter
    Please write more jou/seto parts
    smalvina
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  • From CodyMThomas on August 26, 2007
    Oooooh! I LIKED this chapter! ^_^ SQUEE! Malik/Marik lovin! Thankies! I think that with the assistance of this chapter I may have figured out what Seto's secret is, but I'm not going to say anything just so I don't look like a moron if I'm wrong. next chappie soon I hope!
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  • From CodyMThomas on August 16, 2007
    Damn straight! Get to writing! I want more and I want it YESTERDAY! You teased me! How could you leave off THERE?! SOOOO NOT FAIR! Malik and Marik have some great chemistry and I'm desperate for more chappies of them 'developing' their relationship even further. Ah who am I kidding? I want to see ALL the couples 'actively developing their relationships', and I want it in explicit detail! Bakura and Ryou are beautiful together, and I am amused at Ryou turning Bakura into goo right in front of Seto, TOO CUTE! Seto defending his tea making ability was really cute too. He can boil water and not die/ blow things up/ destroy it with his holy sword, IT'S A START! Jou will have him melted and in love in no time and Yami and Yugi...I can easily see WHERE this is going, but I'm enjoying the process of it getting there so I can be patient. FOR NOW. ^_^ This story makes me happy, I am waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - randomreviewer on August 16, 2007
    Yay, you're back! Excellent chapter, it was fun to see the auras of Yugi and his friends. Please update soon! I'm still looking forward to the moment (probably very far ahead in the future) when it's revealed that Seto/Bakura are angels (and those other two are demons) to Yugi and his friends. Please update soon! ^.^
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  • From ANON - cody thomas on July 31, 2007
    Oh that's even better than him moving in with Yami! I almost feel sorry for him! And Bakura Kissing Joey was just TOO cute! I loved it! I can't wait for more Ryou/Kura interaction or how all the others and their counterparts get closer. I'll miss you while you're away, but it will make the next chapter even better if you can be rested and relaxed. Have fun on your trip!
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  • From ANON - Myra on July 14, 2007
    *cracking up* Oh god...that mental image....*shakes fist weakly* Damn you Bakura!! Auuugh my stomach! It hurts to laugh!!
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  • From ANON - Hakoro on July 14, 2007
    XD OH BY RA! THIS CHAPTER WAS SOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant waite for the next update!
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