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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From dragonlady222 on March 26, 2008
    I'm glad Yugi and Bakura know the others are there. Ryou is doing great. I hope something can be done to help Shadi when this is all over. I'm glad no one else was seriously hurt. I'm glad they have backup on the way. If they keep going the way they are they mey not need except for cleanup.
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  • From ANON - Hee-chan on March 26, 2008
    O.O.......O.O

    I love this story and how you've portrayed the characters thus far. Storyline too, I can't imagine what may have sparked this wonderful plot bunny.

    Keep on going, I'm loving every bit of it and wants to read more. *demands it* *snickers*

    I'll be posting some of my Yu-Gi-Oh! Stories soon too, so check out my profile, or email me if you wishes a copy. *grin*
    -Heero
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  • From AxiaDrake on March 25, 2008
    But its such a CUTE plot bunnie!
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  • From LeilaLogan on March 21, 2008
    Okay... I really am rather late with this... and I have no excuse. All I can say is that I´ve just been too damned lazy to read ANY of my updates, so you´re not the only one I´ve been skipping ^^; damn, and I saw AoM was updated again too... damn, that's another thing I skipped and need to read 2 chaps to now... *coughs* yeah... I'll get on that... eventually.

    Ranting will now cease and reviewing will now start. Okay, so Mariku and Malik are in deep trouble... even if Yuugi feels nothing more than just a little trouble with them. Yuugi really oughta get his senses checked y'know XD I really do feel sorry for those two.

    So, only 3-4 more chaps huh? Well I guess we're really really really close to the end by now then. I know what's gonna happen people! Envy meh! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grins* Can't wait to for the next chapter... though I'm pretty sure I'll be lazy when you do update it but bleh, you know me. Cya Sunday!

    Moony
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  • From ChibiBerry on March 20, 2008
    Omg, please tell me Marik saved Malik???!! I just started reading this today..and i already finished 16 chapters! Your story si so addicting..lol. You are doing a wonderful job, please continue writing..Im waiting for more! Update soon, pretty please..this is so good. sorry im impatient. 8D
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  • From AxiaDrake on March 12, 2008
    Still just as good dear
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  • From ANON - lo on March 10, 2008
    This is a great story the suspense is great!
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 09, 2008
    I hope they will be okay. I wonder why Yugi didn't pick this event up. I hope Marik did not get shot again and it was the other guy. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - cosmic tomato on March 08, 2008
    I am so sorry...Here I am I've been happily reading this story avidly and I haven't bothered to review for a while. I was right though this IS a good story, you've managed to keep the suspense going whilst adding just the right amount of humour. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 22, 2008
    Nicely done, that was an informative chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on February 21, 2008
    Know what? I liked this chapter. So that's why I'm here reading it again, after I've caught it on ff.net. Yup..........it pretty much cleared up, almost all/any confusion I may of had. Now, I can just wait for an update, whenever. But, please do something soon. I really need something "adult" to read. Pickings have been very slim lately. I'm almost tempted to write. Gads, that would be awful.


    "Hats off, and thanks, to all writers/authors, who amuse/entertain, us, sometime ungrateful, readers(ie. ME)
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  • From LeilaLogan on February 20, 2008
    Okay, so who wants to join me in the 'Must-maim-/-kill-Pegasus' club? I mean, sure Dartz is an ass too but somehow Pegasus seems o be the main bastard so I'm just going to hate him more than I do Dartz. My club will be awesome *nods* yup, with T-shirts and caps and everything. I'll be great. XD

    Well, loadsa new info this chap. I feel for Ryou for not mastering his power yet, though I'm sure he'll get the hang of it sooner or later. So typical for he King of Thieves to have a gift like that, but that's the point to is so yeah. Hmm... wonder how big Bakura's pile of stolen things is by now... if he stared it as a kid with cookies it must be huge...

    Anyway, great chap and I hope you get some sleep soon because you clearly need it. Try just taking a random day off work and spending it by doing absolutely nothing but being lazy. I promise you that you'll feel much better after that.

    Well, I'll cya Sunday hopefully,

    Moony
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 19, 2008
    Things are heating up. They are finding clues and answers. I'm glad Yugi and Atem found his memeories. They are an important part. I know Ryou will earn his ring soon. He seems to be getting closer. He is going to need it. I'm glad Malik was warned in time. Maybe those files will help them even more.
    I hope Seto and Jou find out more in that town. Great chapter.
    Pegasus and Dartz and their whole group need to be brought down.
    I'm sad that this is ending soon. I really love it.
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  • From ANON - DR on February 10, 2008
    Well, I have to say this is interesting! I'm really enjoying it, and I hope you manage to finish it!

    BTW, a little note: If the town in Colorado is the one I think it is, it's 'Vail' not 'Vale'.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 08, 2008
    Great chapter. I really love it. So sorry for any late reviews. I am currently working 60+ hours a week and don't have a computer at work. No laptops allowed.
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