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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From LeilaLogan on February 07, 2008
    *holds up carrot ana attempts to sweet talk plotbunny into being more helpful* Please mister rabit? Please be nice to Tavi for me? *arm almost gets bitten off* DAMNIT! YOU STUPID FUCKED-UP EVIL SPAWN OF HELL! GO BACK FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!

    *coughs* okay, ignore that little outburst ne? Yes, let's. On with the review! Lotsa info here. Oh~ Info! I do hope that it gets them somewhere though. So far they're pretty much compltely blank on the actual important details. Oh well *grins* makes it all the more entertaining to see them struggle really. And I do like to see the characters struggle to a point where it's torture for thme (A) Evil? Sorry, I have no idea what you're talking about *nods*

    And Seto should've just said he and Jou had sex. Seriouly, an answer like that would've given really funny reactions probably. WOuld've loved to se that one...

    Well, let's see how much info Malik and Mariku are gonna squeeze out of that Dox guy, and how much Seto and Jou get gather up without Jou blowing his cover. I'll cya Sunday and g'luck!

    Moony
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  • From LeilaLogan on January 19, 2008
    *nearly faints* okay, I actually read the entire lemon even though Atemu being this submisseve and scared is really... well I've skipped lemons for lesser things than that so see how much i do for ya? Yes, I'm just that good a person (A) And of course I'm not boosting my ego here. Whatever made you think that?

    But anyway, before my ego grows to size of the one Seto has, let's go on to the review ne? But of a filler chap if ask me... but oh well, lemon. Who cares about fillers if there is a lemon in it, ne? Lemon was good, you know my objections, so I'll shut up about the rest. For the rest, good chap. Hope to cya tomorrow on MSN!

    Moony
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 16, 2008
    Great! I'm glad Atemu finally agreed. He was so fearful. Yugi really helped him over that fear. Really hot and good.I hope they can balance their powers now. I hope Ryou did just as well.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 16, 2008
    Yayeeeeeeeee to semme Yugi, boohoo to wimpy Atemu. Well done all round. They'll probably at it all night. Hot chapter! Adieus till next time.
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  • From catti on January 16, 2008
    DAMN that was hot!!!!
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  • From LeilaLogan on December 30, 2007
    First off, let me give you my condolences about your father and friend. Í'd been wondering why you hadn't been on for a while and i had the nagging suspicion something really bad was up, but I guess i was hoping to be proven wrong *sighs* I hope you're doing okay...

    Then to the actual fic. I really didn't think the chapter sucked at all. Sure, there were some points that could've been better but it really wazsns't bad or anything. You got the a lot of plotholes fixed XD go fixing plotholes! Though I do feel for those guys... And Atemu being married and having a kid? O.o;; damnit, BAD ATEMU! YOU BELONG WITH YUUGI! BAD PHARAOH! *coughs* yeah...

    As for the lemon... well in any other circumstances I'd say yes to it but if you still need to write it and you don't feel up to it, you really shouldn't. I'm all for smut and all that but I doubt you're in any state of mind to be writing it right now.

    Well, I'm off to bug people over MSN. I hope to see you online again soon!

    Moony
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 30, 2007
    Great chapter. They will make a believer in Seto yet. I feel bad for Shadi. Jou, at least, saved Seto but for how long.
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  • From ANON - Evil Pharaoh Atem on December 30, 2007
    i want teh lemon!!!! I love this story so much! please continue! wonder if yami/yugi remember anything from their time as pharaoh..well yami's BAH...yeah i love how this story has so much potental to go in any direction you can think of..there isnt one way it has to go so far.
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  • From ANON - lo on December 29, 2007
    Nice work! I thought this was a fine chapter we were able to get a more detailed backgrand and the story still progress the story.
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  • From catti on December 29, 2007
    HELL yeah!!! lemon!!!!
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  • From catti on December 28, 2007
    Tavi-sama sensai...Im sooo sorry about your father and your best friend...Kami what a month, ne?..For you to update this story is an honor and a commitment...you are a loyal writer, friend and companion to do this for your readers...we, I, greatly appreciate it...please let me know when you are ready to go with our story...miss you greatly...but totally understand your circumstances...catti
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  • From tinkletimekelly on December 28, 2007
    Yup. I think we could all use some lemons at this point. Good job on the chapter, though. Thanks for writing. C ya.
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  • From LeilaLogan on December 12, 2007
    Traitor? Okay, why have I not been told about all this yet? I mean, that the rest of the people reading this don't know is one thing but ME?!?!?!!?!?! *pouts* that's just mean. Interesting though, actually managing to put in this muh of the original series, while it's suh an AU fic... will you teach me? *puppy-dog eyes*

    Oh, and remember that I game I was making Bianca play last Sunday? Well I'm playing the seond part of it AND IT'S TRYING TO KILL ME! I swear, if I didn't have a walktrhough to fall back on... Golden Sun would definitely manage to kill me some way or another. And yes, this is the game I'm gonna make you play ^^ nice ne? Of course I'll make you start with the first game, which is less hard, but we'll get to the second part *grins* AND THEN THE GAME WILL TRY AND KILL YOU INSTEAD OF ME!!!MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel Dove on December 11, 2007
    AHHH! I want more!!! LOL Gosh I'm so addicted to this story. Keep going and I give you the credit. You are a very strong willed person to keep balancing everything. THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING!!!! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lo on December 11, 2007
    How about some praise, this is really good. I love how the story is shaping up.
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