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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From dragonlady222 on December 11, 2007
    Great chapter. Yugi is more powerful than he knew. I wonder hwo the traitor is. I hope they can defeat whoever is after them. I hope your family life gets better. RL can be so terrible.
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  • From ANON - right_read_time on December 11, 2007
    Knock knock! Who's there? Cargo. Cargo who? Cargo beep!beep! (knock-knock-joke.com,for my mechanic author) So there it is, as per your request, my lame attempt at "humor". Payback, for when "Impossible Standards" became my escape from RL. Thank you. Though I miss the regular updates,it seems that I appreciate them more,when they show up (for this fic only). Update when you can. And smile when you can.
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  • From ANON - RayeMoon on December 11, 2007
    Hi! I just read the first chapter and whoo! It rocks! I'll make it through this, slowly, but I'll make it! This is already awesome. So well-written, the dialogue, the scenes! I love how Joey teases Yugi about Brad Pitt and the mention of Harry Potter, like this just happened last week in real life. No JoeyxYugi, though, I expect. Aw, well. Hot YxYY is even better, so I'll be looking forward to that. Jaa!
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  • From DragonSpeaker on December 10, 2007
    Well I'm not that awesome with being funny, but I am super-happy that you updated! You really do write well, you have the ability to use your words to paint pictures in my head perfectly! I can't wait for your next update, and I hope that everything turns better soon.
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  • From ANON - catti on December 10, 2007
    Hey, tavi-sama....awesome chapter to the long awaited update...(smirks)...couldnt help but smile that "big as a moose" comment...trying to picture that and Dwayne Johnson (the Rock) keeps popping up into my head...dont know why...but hell...he can pop up into my head any time, preferrably naked...laughs...YUMMY!!!...the affects of the white light kind of confused me but figured you would explain it...if not I would make you, laughs, just have to keep nagging as if I dont do that already...(my son would agree)...catti
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  • From DragonsDancers on November 28, 2007
    that was a very mean place to cut off the ch
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  • From ANON - lo on November 27, 2007
    Cool I love all of the action and drama in this story. Great job.
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  • From LeilaLogan on November 27, 2007
    MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!! I rule for editing! YOSH! *goes on an ego trip that lasts several minutes before calming down* okay, I think I'm calm now...for now ^^; yeah, I've had energy drink... 4 cans... can you tell? (A *coughs* anyway...

    Go Jou for being being such an idiot ^^; damnit, Atemu might be short but he's still hot and sexy so he gets away with it. Not to mention he has cool powers to make up for his height. Though i think Jou figured that part out as well by now *snickers*

    And go Yuugi! Rush head-first into the danger zone why don't you! Do any of these people know how not to be reckless? No? Didn't think so.

    Well, hope you kicked the bastard's ass at work or got him fired. I'll cya next Sundday!

    Moony
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  • From dragonlady222 on November 27, 2007
    Great chapter. I wonder if Atemu witnessed his parents death and could do nothing to stop it. I hope Yugi can stop him before he hurts someone. I just know Shad will be okay. I'm glad they are together again.
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  • From siana on November 27, 2007
    wow this just keeps getting better....

    Hey ask Moondalian about the italics...she uses them in her stories.....
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  • From tinkletimekelly on November 26, 2007
    Oh no. Did you have to stop there? Now what? Gees, I guess I'll have to wait. S'kay, guess that's why it's a suspense fic. And I decided that I like it. Looking forward the net chapter.
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  • From ANON - lo on November 15, 2007
    This was great! I love what you are doing with this story. I really like all of the action, nicely done.
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  • From ANON - catti on November 14, 2007
    tavi-sama...this is an awesome story and am so happy to have an update..well be back from disney world this weekend..will speak to you then...catti
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  • From LeilaLogan on November 14, 2007
    Tsk,you do have time to update but not to send e a mail with John's reaction to all my nice theories?? I feel abondoned *teary eyes* on the other hand, UPDATE!

    Ghe, way to go Atemu for distracting Yuugi XD That's the way to do it. Not to mention way to go Malik, Seto and Bakura. Remind me never to piss off guys who can kill without making the slightest noise; might not be good for me in the future ^^; That, or remind me never to even meet people such as those. That might actually be better.

    Hmmm... now I'm wondering what's going on with Shadi... and how the hell Atemu and Yuugi are planning to get back to the others while they have to walk quite a distance. Oh, and the guys persuing them suck, they really do. Great FBI we've got there people. Let's go after our own people! Yeah, best idea ever, yeah! *coughs*idiots*coughs*

    Well anyway, I wish you good luck with the situation at home and hope everything will be okay with your dad and the other people. I could say update soon... but that'd be rathe pointless in your situation since you have other things on your mind so yeah. G'luck with that.

    Moony
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  • From dragonlady222 on November 14, 2007
    Wonderful. I really hope your father survives. The waiting is the worst. Even when you are sure you will be shocked and upset. May God be with you and Gayle. That is my daughters name with a different spelling and I will pray for you both.
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