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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From tinkletimekelly on November 14, 2007
    Dang, dammit, woman (Redneck, huh?) this story's good. Like: the confusion, the introduction of Marik/Malik, and all the "DRAMMA" that's going on. Don't git whatcha whining 'bout. This horse ain't dead yet, it's live and kicking. Yahooo! Okay, got that out of my system. Seriously it's a good story and well worth reading. Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever.

    PS. Hope your Dad is doing well. And sorry for your friend.
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  • From ANON - cosmic tomato on November 13, 2007
    Wow what can I say!! I started to read this this evening and I find it's yet another good story from the pen of Tavi...can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From DragonSpeaker on November 13, 2007
    Wow, this is wonderful! I hope everything gets better with your family!
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  • From ANON - ShadowGM on November 04, 2007
    yay! finally! Atemu getting the point! too bad poor Yugi had to be scared out of his mind to do so... Glad things are moving on with those two... but for cow's sake, can't they ever have a moment of peace? not even after their first time? XD luckily the phone call wasn't DURING the main events:
    "get out of there! now!"
    "damn, that could have a double meaning..."
    he ^^U sorry, I'm being silly. Great chapter, though we learned less about the case in itself. But even so I'm glad that things work out for Atemu and Yugi... somehow XP
    I hope you're ok, I'm glad your dad survived the operation! keep going! aja aja fighting! ^^/
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  • From ANON - lo on November 03, 2007
    This is really getting good, very exciting. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From LeilaLogan on November 02, 2007
    Yosh! LEMON! *grins* just what I needed to cheer me up again. Apparently the i-net slot on my laptop is busted so it won't make a connection too often. It's very random... but I'm just happy it's working right now. *nods* NaNo can wait until I've actually read all my updates.

    And it's great to hear your dad's okay! Congrats on that, I'm really happy for you.

    Now then, the chap was great, the FBI is being stupid, the lemon was awesome and the plot thickened! Fear it all people, the story is becoming more interesting with each chap.

    Now then, since my i-net only works randomly and rarely, i don't know if I'll be on on Sunday. I'll try of course, and I'll curse my laptop if it won't listen to me, but I doubt that'll actually do me a lot of good. Feels great to do though, so I'll be doing it anyway. Well', let's hope I don't have to ne? I hope to see you on Sunday! Cya!

    Moony
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  • From DragonSpeaker on October 31, 2007
    Ohhhh good cliffie!!!! Awesome Lemon! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From catti on October 31, 2007
    Fred Mertz...nearly laughed my head off on that name..was waiting for Desi to come through the door screaming "Luuuucy, Im home!!!"...love this story...been sneaking peaks all day at work...naughty me!!!....I call it vacation short timer syndrome....laughs...love this story but you know that dont you, tavi-sama?...catti
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  • From tinkletimekelly on October 31, 2007
    Great Chapter! Thanks for writing it. Love it. Now I'm just gushing.

    tinkletimekelly
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 31, 2007
    Great chapter. I hope your dad is doing better. I hope he takes his medications and recovers well.
    The lemon was hot and I'm glad they were both virgins. I hope Isis and Shadi will be okay and escape unharmed. I hope Atemu and Yugi go to Seto, Jou, Bakura and Ryou. I love it.

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  • From ANON - Angel_dove on October 31, 2007
    First off I would like to say that I'll keep your father in my prayers and pray that everything gets better. Second off I give you credit to be able to pull off a spectular chapter such as that. Great job!!!! I really love this chapter and don't worry the story isn't that weird or hard to follow. Thank you for updating!!!!! Hope you get a new one up soon I'm so addicted
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  • From esama on October 29, 2007
    Hoo. Very nice and original story, this one. Thank you very much for sharing it with the rest of us.
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  • From LeilaLogan on October 23, 2007
    MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have returned from Egypt and I bring a review with me! *grins* yeah, it's like 1AM arond here but I'm still pretty much awake - as can be seen by my hyper opening - so I figured I'd read this before you got around to posting a new chap. Guess you've been really busy since you haven't had time to update again since I left. Damn life and it taking people away from the stuff that really matters. Like fanfiction!

    Okay, now onto the review. Opening was really great with Atemu showing what he can really do. Dang I'd love to have those flames... maybe in a completely controlled manner so I don't accidentally burn people but yeah, the power's damned awesome. I feel for everyone that pisses him off... maybe except for Ushio and the baddies that are bound to get it later on in the fic. Hmm... maybe Anzu should come back to life and piss him off... I wouldn´t feel for her either... If she dies as painfully as Ushio did / he so had it coming - I'll probably be laughing my ass off as she dies ^^ Go shadowflames!

    And damn O.O that really is one fucked up painful ritual. I do feel for all the people who've gone through it. And the soul of the son of Ra? Remind me to bug you about that.... again, when I see you online... whenever that may be with your hectic life. Hopefully Sunday ne?

    Great chapter and can't wait to read more so go kill your life so you can write ^^ Cya later!

    Moony
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  • From DragonSpeaker on October 14, 2007
    This is great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - lo on October 13, 2007
    I really enjoy reading this story. I think you are doing a wonderful job with defining your characters. I hope to see more of the other couples.
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