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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From ShadowGM on October 12, 2007
    Great chapter! ^_^ I'm so happy when I read one of these. Finally Yuugi and Atemu are togheter! yay!
    on a sidenote: "ouch..." was the only thing I could repeat when I read the description of the corpse. And I shivered. Several times.
    update when you can ^^ your chapters are well worth the delay
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  • From MangaForever on October 12, 2007
    me love dis
    more more more
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 12, 2007
    Great chapter. Atemu needs to practice his control. I'm sure he'll be needing it. I'm glad they are getting along better.
    Raphael is in trouble, I hope they don't hurt Isis and Shadi.
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  • From LeilaLogan on October 03, 2007
    Did I mention that Atemu can be a pain in the ass? I mean, he finally kisses Yuugi and he's freaking holding back!!! Okay, so it's against a bunch of rules and ethics but that's really not the point right now. The point is that he needs to continue his molesting and have his way with Yuugi *nods* yup, that's the point.

    And those thugs are idiots, leaving a body to burn while rain is coming. I mean, come on! You could just see it coming that the rain was gonna make the fire go out and the cops would have evidence cuz the body wasn't completely burned to a crisp! Idiots. Why are minions always this dumb? Seriously, they need brains.

    Hmm... I wonder how Yuugi's gonna respond to what he'll be reading int he wacko book of evil rituals... they should so name the book that *grins* Seriously though, maybe if Yuugi knows what's going on and still wants Atemu, our favorite crazy-haired cop will finally get over the fact that what they're doing is against the rules and blah blah blah and have his way with Yuugi... remind me to once more bug you about that on Sunday, given that you're there. I sswear, natural disasters and all the other things that happen are just trying to interfere with us talking over MSN, and with me going bowling again the time has actually become shorter... yeah, we need to do something about that.

    Anyway, I'm off to read my Naruto manga and once more overexert my eyes with it like I did yesterday. I'll cya - hopefully - Sunday!

    Moony
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  • From ShadowGM on October 03, 2007
    Finnally! ^_^ a new chapter! This time I really felt like I had waited forever ._. even though you didn't take longer than usual...
    Ha! so things are starting to move a little between Yugi and Atemu ^_^ yay for that. I particularly liked the whole kiss scene, your writing was dynamic and personally I almost saw it in my head as if it were a movie.
    That's what I wanted to say ^_^ now the more I read this story, the more I'm starting to really picture it in my head as if it were a movie playing, I hear the dialogues and all. I insist that your writing got more dynamic ^_^ I love it.
    I'll be waiting for the next chapter, this ritual thing is really interesting, things are fitting little by little...
    don't change the rythm of your story, it's great like that, it's one of it's biggest qualities: you don't reveal too much, but just enough for us to wonder and try to investigate with the characters...
    thanks for this chapter ^_^ see you!
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  • From ANON - lo on October 02, 2007
    This is great! You really are going somewhere with this story and mystery. Great job.
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  • From MangaForever on October 02, 2007
    me love dis fic
    pls update again soon
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  • From tinkletimekelly on October 02, 2007
    Great chapter! Glad Yami and Yugi started to get together. Glad they found the body. Glad that Yugi is being let into what was and is going on in his own life. Am looking forward to what this all means. Thanks for writing. Later.
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 02, 2007
    I love it. Poor Yugi, at least he got to talk to Jou and know that he's okay. I hope Yugi comes to a better understanding by reading the book. Atemu sounds so confused and desparate.
    I feel bad for the sacrifice but he may be just what they need to break the case. Great chapter.
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  • From DragonSpeaker on October 01, 2007
    WOOOOOOO! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From LeilaLogan on September 25, 2007
    *grins* so Atemu is sleep-molesting Yuugi huh? He really should stop trying to suppresss his feelings for Yuugi *snorts* the idiot. And a hero worship thing? Yuugi just also got declared an idiot.... great, they'll fit perfectly together *sweatdrops*

    And WHOOT! ANZU'S DEAD! *grins* Now that's cause to celebrate, so who cares if I already knew that was coming. Party time! Yuugi´s gonna freak over it though... even more than he already is. Guess he found what was really going on huh? Tsk, he should've done what Atemu told him. Then again, being the idiot he was just pronounced as, of course he wouldn't listen.

    Oh! And Jou and Seto really hit it of great huh? *laughs* I can jsut see Seto pulling Jou out of the car and Jou immediately trying to kill Seto off for it. Can't blame him for it though, not in this freakish situation. For all he knew he was about to get killed... well I think he actually was if that cop hadn't been there but that's beside the point.

    Well, that's about all I have to say apart from Great chapter! Cna't wait to read the next one, and update soon! (yes, I finally got to say it!) Hopefully cya Sunday.

    Moony
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  • From LeilaLogan on September 25, 2007
    Now why do I have a feeling I missed a chapter here... *blinks* damn, how did that happen? I check aff.net daily and I actually missed this... *caoughs* anyway, on to the review for the chap I missed. Anyway, go Yami for breaking through to Yuugi at long last! Now the smut can begin XD okay, so maybe they're not even close to that stage yet but I can dream ne? My dreams are good *nods* Can't wait until they actually do get toether XD Now onwards to the next chapter! I would say update soon as I always do... but that would be poinless since I still have a chapter to read. I'll save it for the next chapter. ONWARDS!

    Moony
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  • From ShadowGM on September 24, 2007
    for some reason I love the idea of Atemu twisting spoons XD makes me laugh. I'll just keep on repeating that you lead this story with great talent. And now I want to know what was it that Yugi saw ^^U. I hope everything went alright for you and you solved your problems, I know we barely know each other but if you want to talk about something, just to get it out of your chest I'll be there to listen and try to help.
    On a brughter note: do I really need to say that I enjoyed this chapter inmensly? ^_~
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  • From DragonSpeaker on September 24, 2007
    Ahhhhh, this fic is wonderful!!! I hope everything gets better (emergency wise). Can't wait for the next update
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  • From MangaForever on September 24, 2007
    me like dis
    pls pls update soon
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