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Reviews for Fleeing the Shadows

By : tavia454
  • From tinkletimekelly on September 08, 2007
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOh! Suspense! Looking forward to the next chapter.Later.
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  • From ShadowGM on September 08, 2007
    Here I am! reviewing again! ^_^
    I'm sooooo sorry I took so long to answer your mail. Please don't think I gave up the idea, I'm still very excited about it, only these past few days were kinda complicated. I won't bore you with the details, but anyway, now I'm as good and happy as ever ^_^.

    And there you go with another great chapter. I like the fact that it won't be love at first sight for once (gods know a crimson-eyed person would , at least, startle me ^^U), they'll need to learn to trust each other. Also, I tend to like it more when Atemu isn't all that good... you know, like when he's a nice guy but with a short temper (well... U like what you did ^_^UU)
    um.. well, it's six o'clock in the morning here, so I don't have a lot of coherent thoughts in my head. I'll answer your mail as soon as I shower to wake up completely ^^. I guess the main point of this review is saying I liked the chapter ^_^ now I want to see what Yuugi's reaction will be when he wakes up!!
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  • From catti on September 08, 2007
    Laughs...you are such a tease...now remember no typing while drinking..or you will have a mess to clean in the morning...*giggles*...now where did you get the word 'cataleptic'...I like it, it rolls nicely off the tongue...this story is truly awesome..even though in my current state I have to reread the whole thing to remember it...laughs...*rolls eyes*...still putting spatulas in the wrong drawer, catti
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  • From ANON - lo on September 06, 2007
    Now this story is getting exciting!
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  • From DragonSpeaker on September 03, 2007
    oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh you're sooooo good!!! I've yet to see any type of fic you can't write. This is great, please continue!
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  • From ANON - Angel_dove on September 03, 2007
    Awesome story! I love it so far keep going
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  • From LeilaLogan on September 03, 2007
    *sweatdrops* leave it up to Atemu to make Yuugi faint like that. Stupid temper of his. Hello! Future lover y'know! Fainting should only accur from extreme amounts of pleasure! *crosses arms* He can really be an idiot at times.

    Well, great story so far. Ghe, I can just see Atemu bending spoons out of boredm *snickers$* Poor spoons. Well, Update soon!

    Moony
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  • From ANON - Trikki on September 03, 2007
    Love this, I can see real potential in it!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on September 03, 2007
    YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to more. This already has that "feel" to it. The one that made "Impossible Standards" the story it turned out to be. Keep writing, I'm sure you'll be fine.
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  • From ANON - Evil Pharaoh Atem on September 03, 2007
    ZOMG you must must must must MUST continue this story!!! if you dont...ill cry!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaaase please continue! i stopped playing WoW to read this chapter! you know how hard that is to do?? if no one else begs for you to continue, please do it for me??!! *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 02, 2007
    Awesome chapter. I love it. I think you are doing great with the story. I definitely think your villians are evil enough. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lasae on September 01, 2007
    That was great; well-written, in character and such an original premise! I can't wait to Yami as a cop. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Evil Pharaoh Atem on August 30, 2007
    WOW Tavi!!! yet another Awesome creation you've made here!!! i cant wait to read more!
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  • From Sacuna on August 30, 2007
    Wow! I love the way you write, it makes it easy for the story to come alive. I've read very few stories written this way, which is such a pity. I shall wait for the next chapter in barely restrained anticipation. ^_^

    - Sacuna
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  • From DragonSpeaker on August 29, 2007
    Yea!! This will give me a distratction from the fact the "Impossible Standards" is done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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