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Reviews for I Almost Had You

By : Hideki LaShae
  • From zombiebait86 on November 04, 2007
    O.o?!? so confused! did it say this was an ending?!?
    J-chan
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  • From PaperDoll on November 03, 2007
    Continue~ I need to know more of what's happening between Seth, Seto, and Joey. ;-;
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  • From melodyz07 on October 22, 2007
    Wow!!!! Great story!!! I really can't stop saying that at each review because this story is so incredibly good and well done. I really like how things are evolving. And yay! finally Seto has begun to move to get his puppy. Well I have though that he will stop the kiss between Seth and Jou but at least it made him realize that he likes Jou... And by the way, it was so sweet to see Jou and Seto together in the garden. They really are so cute together^^ I wonder what will happen next. Please update!
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  • From PaperDoll on October 21, 2007
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  • From setoswifey on October 21, 2007
    Sweet! I sense a love triangle evetually brewing! I love how original this is. I do hope to read more soon.
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  • From smalvina on October 20, 2007
    good chapter
    How about seto/seth fight? or maybe seto/jou/seth ;) ?
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  • From PaperDoll on October 18, 2007
    Dude! Update this story it is so intense and tear-jerking! Please update, I can't stand cliffhangers! >w
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2007
    loving the story its very heart warming and romantic. personally i think that u should keep writing more chapters and have jou stay in egpyt with seth becuz the past seth and the furture jou just seem to fit. i have nothin agaisnt seto but in this story jou and seth should be together becus so many people have missed jono and hes even left behind his younger sister and cousin so i think its only fair that they get a second chance on a happy life with jou. i know that jou future family and friends will miss him but i think they'll understand where jou's heart rightfully belongs.
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  • From darktoy on October 15, 2007
    Cheers for the cliffhanger! Now, we both know that it's both likely AND unlikely for the kiss to happen. Because:

    A) It's still too soon in the story to get the smoochies (XD)

    B) Someone might come callin' (Seto might be passing by and do a side remark about dogs mating rituals)

    C)They are at an open, a perfect place for a kiss. But also a perfect place to get the crowd to go wild (ever imagined what egyptian fangirls might be like?)

    D)Bakura might be watching the movement on the palace, and might take the shot to take down the priest (but it's also unlikely considering th fact that they know Jono is dead, so there would be a shock)

    E) Jou is still unsure of Seth's aproach. So he would most likely push him away for fear of being used as a replacement.

    Whatever happens next depends on the situations later. For example: If Seto were too see what happens, he might go into a berserk kinda mode.

    I'll be waiting for more! Hope this little analysis that shows my state of boredome at 2:22 in the morning might help you on something.

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - v on October 14, 2007
    YOU MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LEAVING US WITH A CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MMMMMOOOOORRRRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From melodyz07 on October 14, 2007
    WHERE IS SETO??????????????? He can't let Seth take Jou away from him like that!!!!! Please update!!! By the way, BEAUTIFUL story. Great plot. fluent style of writing. And it's getting more and more interesting. I'm really looking forward for next chapter. Don't make us wait for too long!!!!!
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  • From smalvina on October 14, 2007
    Love your story!
    Seto should stop this kiss ;)
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  • From ANON - Luca on September 18, 2007
    PS: I also love the clever insertion of Phil Collins lyrics. I hope it was intentional. O.o
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  • From ANON - Luca on September 18, 2007
    Yay! Fast update! :) You've made my day and it's only 8 am! xD Keep up the fast, good writing!
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  • From melodyz07 on September 17, 2007
    I LOVE your style of writing... and the way you describe Seto and Jou. These two first chapters are so interesting!!! This story is so great. I'm really beginning to get addicted to it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I loved the part of the notes between Jou, Yuugi and Ryou... it's really cool and when Seth was following Jono's ghost...it's so sad. I really feel sorry for them. Anyway, everything was so good... so well written. You re doing a great job with this story. I really wonder how you are able to alternate so well between modern time, ancient time and the dreams. And the many details that you add. It's really very good. Anyway, I hope that we will see next chapter what Seth did and especially how things will ecolve between Seto and Jou. Please continue!!! and update faster!
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