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Reviews for Artists Of The Floating World

By : Oni
  • From helewisetran on September 03, 2008
    I'm sure u notice this already but u missed one chapter for this story which u posted on fanfiction long ago.
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  • From hsosborne on September 02, 2008
    awww, love the chap, and glad to see you're back with the fic
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  • From helewisetran on September 02, 2008
    will there be male preg in this story?
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 01, 2008
    Loved it. The lemon was great. Of course, Yugi is worried about Ryou. He, being who he is could do nothing else. I hope he can just be happy. Ryou needs to be okay, he deserves to be happy, too.
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  • From helewisetran on September 01, 2008
    u update, yay!!!!!!!!! It has been forever. Plz don't make us wait this long next time.
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  • From ChibiBerry on September 01, 2008
    Aww, this chapter was so adorable and sweet! I hope things don't get too bad for them...Anyways, Thanks so much for the update, I was so happy when I sa w another chapter had been added. I really enjoyed reading this chapter, keep up the geat work! Lol...I can't wait to read more, I'm so impatioent..8D
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  • From zombiebait86 on January 12, 2008
    AH! no more chapaters,**bounces around**so wanna read more! damn you its like crack!
    J-chan
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  • From kati on November 26, 2007
    okay this is bugging me... you make yugi and ryou out to be complete girls, and, well, THEY'RE NOT. This is a very well written fic in that it flows and the imagery is fantastic, but the characterisation is honestly terrible. They . Are. Not. Women. They. Are. Men. Yeah, some guys are more feminine than others, but seriously, you even wrote, 'You will always be the EMPRESS of my heart.' ???? 'EMPRESS'??? Yami sleeps with the guy, you think he'd at least be able to tell that he had a dick and not a vagina. You use words like 'willowy' and 'soft' and that image is just so wrong for the men you're writing about. You also make them both out to be complete pussys, thinking about nothing except 'their one true loves'. I know what it feels like to be in love and it can be pretty consuming, but I'm a woman and even I'm not that poetic and whimpy all the time. Just cause Yugi and Bakura are supposed to be the more feminine ones, that doesn't mean that they wouldn't desire to enter their loves bodies' like their loves desire them. Men don't want to be fucked all the time, they want to fuck another too. I'm just saying, perhaps you should be writing in the M/F section? Because this would be an extremely high class fic in that fandom. This is not a flame, BTW, its called constructive criticism, and I really think you need it here. I know I'm a pretty crap writer myself, and don't think I coudl do any better, but there you go. Its probably too far into the story by now to change anything, but please, in any chapters youare writing at present, GIVE THE MEN SOME BALLS AND AN ACTUAL PERSONALITY OF THEIR OWN.
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  • From ChibiBerry on November 23, 2007
    OH, THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD! I can't wait for the next chapter, you're sotry is just so interesting! Please continue writing, I'm looking forward to your next update!
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  • From DragonSpeaker on November 11, 2007
    I still stand by the fact that this is an amazing idea, its so nice to see a refreshing, out-of-the-ordinary story! Keep up the awesome work!!!
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  • From sglily on November 10, 2007
    I like this story - especially the Ryou-sided sections. I found it so very interesting that he was captivated by quick glimpses of Bakura... and it seemed that the thief had his eye on a very pretty Ryou as well. Ryou must really have been smitten if he cherishes such small encounters and then actually envisions himself running away with Bakura. The idea of Ryou... and Yugi... as geisha is very different and I find it intriguing. Yugi has met and managed to snag the one he truly loves in a way. I wonder who Ryou's first experience was with... Ryou is so unhappy. He's not with the one he loves, he's miserable with Malik, he's losing his best friend who had remained by his side from the beginning... Hopefully there is something bright in his future! Nice story!
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  • From Shuman on November 10, 2007
    Thanx for teh update!!!
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  • From CodyMThomas on November 10, 2007
    YAY Updates! You really need to post more of these and soon, I'm beginning to get hooked!
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  • From dragonlady222 on November 10, 2007
    Yugi and Ryou have a very rare friendship. They understand each other so well. I hope they can see each other a lot. It won't be the same but it will be something. Maybe you can have bakura come back and bring Marik with him. He could fall in love with Malik and they all could run away together. It wouldn't disgrace anyone if they ran together would it? Good chapter.
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  • From ChibiBerry on October 27, 2007
    oh suspense!, can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry up and update? does *puppy eyes* :)
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