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Reviews for The Garden

By : Oceans11
  • From wiccacat18 on November 15, 2007
    Could you places write more to this story soon. I would like to see an ending to it. It is a good story and you are good at your works but it needs more to it now.
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on October 27, 2007
    I can't even describe how damn GOOD that ws. I've seen fics where Yami and Yugi are brothers before, but I've never actually seen the element of religion introduced, just general social values. You write beautifully, descriptively, and with a certain flow that only comes to people with natural talent. This story is like poetry in motion, from an author not afraid to confront taboo issues, something you rarely see nowadays. Should you choose to continue this story, I'd wholly appreciate it if you could email me when you update, and I shall be sure to review. Many thanks.
    ReaperRain
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 24, 2007
    Good chapter. I am glad they are not letting religion or family stand in their way. I love it.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on October 20, 2007
    Wow! That was fun to read. Love AtemuXYugi. Keep writing, please.
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 20, 2007
    O_O! SO. FUCKIN. HOT! Dear gods woman, it was a simple blow job and you got me bothered! Oh man, I'm gonna be in real trouble when they finally have sex together...can't wait. :D

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  • From ChibiBerry on October 20, 2007
    Yugi is sweet giving a confession like that...haha. I love this couple and Im so glad I found this story, good job writing this! Looking forward to more! :)
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  • From ChibiBerry on October 20, 2007
    OH! I love your writing style, not too fast not too slow, very good. Atemu and Yugi are so sexy! *drool*
    Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ChibiBerry on October 20, 2007
    I think that ur first chapter was very well done, it certainly captured my attention, good job!
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  • From blackberry on October 19, 2007
    WOW!!! I mean really WOW!!!!!I love that chapter.It was really well written.I loved yami and yuugi's feelings for each other plz update soon Im looking forward for the next chap. see you later ;D
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  • From DragonSpeaker on October 18, 2007
    This is soo amazing!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From catti on October 18, 2007
    This is a great story...done quite well...its alway a little daunting doing an incest story and having it come out well and people liking it...have you by chance read Catacombs of Sin by Lechan?...you would like it...catti
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  • From ANON - Abriael (Abi2) on October 16, 2007
    Oh, wow, and wow again. I love the twins twist (hehehe) and the difference in looks. I can so see Atemu with curly hair, and *ooooh* is it nice. I don't know what I expected, but this damn well goes above and beyond. It's erotic, yet detached at some level. Sensual, with just that wonderful side of reality and thought-process that most fics lack. I admit to reading waaay more of these type fics, but this is just wonderful. I love the imagry of the migranes, it makes me think that you suffer from them too, just because the details are something that many would pass over.

    All in all, this is probably one of my favorite Ocean works, well written (as always) and so hawt. Oh so freaking hot. Keep it up, I've favorited it, so I'll be checking! I havent gotten to the two new chapters on ffnet, but I'll get there soon! I've put them off again, in favor of finishing my paper for history- I put it off till the last minute as usual, but it's half my grade, so I figured I better do well, ne?

    Molto benissimo, mi buon'amica!
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 08, 2007
    I KNEW I recognized your writing style! and I really like this story so far, I can't wait for you to post more. will you e-mail me when you do? my email is Emeraldfairy18 @ hotmail. com (Remove spaces)
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  • From blackberry on October 07, 2007
    Hi Ocean!! Im blueberry90 from ff.net and I don't know what to say about that story but I think I liked that and you should know Im willing to read all kind of story you write(of course they must be about Atem and Yugi :D)
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 07, 2007
    Good chapter. I think they have found what they were missing in their previous sexual encounters. I hope their family doesn't find out.
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