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Reviews for The Garden

By : Oceans11
  • From Kerstin on August 01, 2010
    I'm not a Christian, I don't belive in sins but I do believe in right or wrong. There is nothing wrong about loving when you should be grateful that there is someone who loves you. No one can choose who they love because the emotion has a life of its own, which cannot be controlled.
    Until now this story is heart-wrenchingly soft but serious at the same time.
    I was fearing the typical TBC-words at the end of the fifth chapter but am glad to read them as well because that means that you will continue writing this.
    I really do anticipate the next chapter.
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  • From heidlebergchick on May 19, 2009
    OMG! I absolutely love your stories!!!!!! i really love this one and i cant wait to see what happens afterwards. Also well done on 'Carry On' That was brillient too!
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  • From egyptiandreamer13 on April 19, 2009
    Wow tha was extremely well written. The passion and heat I felt through your words was amazing. Excellent job!
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  • From Klepto on April 14, 2008
    WOW! Good and hot! O_O Tell me there's more coming soon please!
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  • From catti on April 12, 2008
    Ocean...this is such an awesome story...I regret not reviewing it sooner...I have my own values and my own logic...this story suits me well...I have always felt that twins had a special bond that could not be broken or split apart..I can only hope that this is true now..catti
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  • From ANON - sasukichan on April 02, 2008
    wow! this is an awesome story! the boys are so cute together, and they make me laugh so much!

    still, as sweet as everything is for them right now, i imagine there'll be A LOT of complications in the future. and angst, can't forget that. i'm so scared for them. and i don't want them to get hurt or hurt eachother... it's such a huge can of worms. and the migraines... i hope they're not symptoms of some as-of-yet-unknown incurable illness...

    anyways, i think u're amazing, to be tackling so many taboos in one story. i'm still kinda squimish about incest, but yuugi and yami together is so fun to read in any form! i am trying to keep an open mind, and believe it or not, reading online fiction helps. O.o

    anyways, great story, and as always, update soon!
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  • From IntHellsing on February 27, 2008
    It's been a while since I've enjoyed a YY/Y fic as much as this.
    You're writing it simply wonderful, and I love how close they are.
    I'm eagerly awaiting more and am very glad to see you've continued writing this.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 09, 2008
    SQUUE! Oh that was so freakin hot! awesome awesome awesome! 10 stars! SQUEE! I love you soooo much!
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 01, 2008
    Great chapter. I wonder how long it will be before they are caught. It will happen eventually I'm sure.
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  • From Shiauko on February 01, 2008
    Feck. I was reading your epic story, and I was shuddering from the aftershocks of a seizure, so i couldn't really focus. I ended up redding reading one line over and over and over. But your detail is amazing and its well written so far *is on chapter 2*
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  • From sweetciel on January 31, 2008
    An original amoungst originals. I LOVE this story. The relationship worries are just so...lip smackingly good. The lemon had me blowing steam from my ears and going through rolls of tissue to stem my overactive nosebleed. You are wonderful. Great job ^_^
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 31, 2008
    OMG! Just realized this was updated. I'm beginning to wonder, how updates show up unnoticed. Sometimes I honestly think this site could use, some sort of alert system. Anyways, great chapter. A pleasant find. Thanks for writing. Would like more...please. Later.
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  • From blackberry on January 30, 2008
    OMG!!!I can't believe you updated.I was begining to think something bad happened to you.Anyway Im so glad to have you back and for this chapter,It was great.Plz don't make us wait that long again and update ASAP
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on January 28, 2008
    meow, that was hot ;) Although some con crit for you: avoid using words like 'penis' and 'anus'. They conjure, at best, the thought of some sort of medical clinic, and at worst some kind of disease. Not that you should use porn cliches or ridiculous nicknames either, but I'm certain there's another, less scientific term.
    Very descriptive, although be careful not to make sex scenes too long - sex IS about passion of the flesh after all, so it needs to be fairly fast-paced rather than drawn out (unless you're trying to be particularly romantic, which I don't think you were). You have a wonderful tension in your writing though, mainly because I'm expecting their mother to walk in at any moment. I wonder if she'd turn away in disgust or come to accept them, however...? She seems like the sort of person who'd struggle to disown her children even if they went against her beliefs.
    ReaperRain
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 28, 2008
    Good chapter. If she only knew, Gina would be mortified. They are so cute together.
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