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By : BakuraSenov
  • From Mystralwind on September 13, 2008
    lol, smooch. I think Mali would be inexperienced as well. He lived underground with only his clansmen, leaving solely to build up the ghoul organization. He had no other interest but mastering dueling with the cards (he and Isis played) and seeking revenge against the pharaoh.

    I can believe he took no time to even think about such things. So now that all is calm, yes.. he would wonder about things. His sexuality included. He is very very hawt, and so is Ryou Bakura (the hosts body Baku used in the cannon) but yep, I can see them being gay. At least bi/.

    Ryou had many girls hit on him and he wasn't interested, shy, but still. Bakura lived on the edge all of his existence, so even the thief king apart from Zork probably had little time for such recreation. We all like to think Baku was super experienced with that physique and at the age of 20. Maybe he had some fun. Zork is a demon/god so lust is not out of his parameter and males interacting increases the perversion factor. The fact that the other male holds a M. item and knows the secrets, makes him a valuable asset.

    I can see both the thief king and Zork learning through the modern media, just how sex can be used as a manipulative tool to keep their lovers in check, get their way, and distract people. Crafty, the dark is. This is why good shall always be defeated, good is dumb. lol just kidding.
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  • From Mystralwind on September 13, 2008
    Oh man, Malik.. chill out. lOL

    Ch 4 is a blast!

    Malik was all into it, and then he freaks. Slap* get back in there blondie! lol

    I like that though, it draws it out. Think about it, you never went all the way at that age .. not till a few months into dating. You gotta tease it, make out, dry hump, cop a feel, lots and lots of foreplay with no satisfaction. Everyone goes home glossy eyed. LOL
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  • From Mystralwind on September 13, 2008
    Ok, ch 2

    i loved the interaction and mini summaries of the arguments between Isis and Malik. So, kohl isn't make up, Malik? LOL

    I read that in ancient Egyptian times everyone wore it; from the poor to the ruling class. Boys, girls, maybe even the camels. lol

    I also read in a manga that Malik's were cut into him, scars, from the initiation. He didn't have them before it, but after it he did. Even when in bed. He would have washed it off otherwise, I'm reasonably sure. LOL It's just that if it's kohl it makes it so much more fun to pick on him about. LOL

    Ch3

    Baku and he paired, hmmm. Interesting, especially where Baku rubs his shoulders. LOL Hawt!!
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  • From Mystralwind on September 13, 2008
    I really like how you got into Malik's head. Fear and bravado, that's him. Perfect characterization!

    Baku, yep.. great mocking his fear. lol Loved it.

    Well, onto ch 2.
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