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Reviews for Betrothal

By : KoalasRock
  • From ANON - flit on February 26, 2008
    er, did Yami mean to call Yugi "little sister"? The correct Japanese word for little BROTHER is "otouto," which is similar but obviously not the same.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 14, 2008
    Poor Yami. I think he and Bakura would make a great couple. Too bad Seto is in the way. He seems to have mixed feelings. He doesn't want Yami but doesn't want anyone els to have him either. It will be interesting to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - PainedExpression on February 08, 2008
    Ack! Now that you've gotten me hooked, I have to wait for you to write again!!! I hope you're a regular updater - waiting for story chapters is a pain. Anywho, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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  • From MishikoShinsei on February 03, 2008
    Great plot and twists and your characterizations are priceless!

    Loving this! Can't wait for more!

    'Ko
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  • From LuciferxDamien on February 03, 2008
    OMG This is soooo funny, cept for that part where Seto had to dump Joey. That was SAD. Sad...Very sad... But the funny came back after I read chapter two. Lol Yami is soooo emo, and Yuugi rocks. Oh and LOL Pegasus is their principal. Surprised the whole school isn't corrupt lol. LOVES LOVES LOVES!!!

    I've had days like Yami where god just took too much pleasure in screwing me over. I was in Japan last August staying in Kyoto, and I was going to Kobe for a day, but I forgot my umbrella, which I was so knew I needed, but I had a train to catch and the sky was clear so yeah. Anyway, I went book shopping, well overboard on book shopping. I just about died from how many books I bought. My train back to Kyoto wasn't due for oh another hour and a half, but I couldn't go anywhere with so many books so I went back to the station and waited for my train. And waited and waited...and waited...But the train never came. It was almost two hours late. I was so worried I missed my train, but FINALLY it came, and I got back to Kyoto. I got out of the station and caught a bus, but then it started to rain...and I had books, and forgot my umbrella... When I finally got back to my dorm, I wanted to die I was so tired and so pissed.

    Okay, back on point. I LOVE YOUR STORY. Love it love it love it love it. I haven't read past chapter two but I JUST had to give you a review, this story rocks so much. Lol you should make it a threesome between SetoxYamixJou. Ha, no you should totally do what you want, but that would still be awesome. I LOVES THIS STORY!!!
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  • From Racine on December 23, 2007
    looking good. can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 22, 2007
    I think if Yami finds out about Seto and Jou, he might just try to convince Jou to marry Seto, hurry up and do that so Yami can get out of marrying Seto himself. Eh. But I hope not, all the same. XP

    Oh god. Are they gonna corrupt Mokuba? Pleeeease tell me they're gonna corrupt Mokuba. xD
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 22, 2007
    Good chapter. Sparks should fly soon. Yami is going to have a fit. Too bad he and Seto can't work together and get out of this.
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 22, 2007
    Good chapter. I love it. Poor Yami and Seto engaged to each other and hating it.
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  • From ANON - clarissa on December 22, 2007
    good story but i think it needs alot more drama on yami's part and angst on seto's part. i also think its only right that since seto's still seeing joey that yami should get to flirt and kiss up to someone to. even when they get married and seto's still with jou than yami should have someone also its only far.
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  • From TwilightNaiad on November 30, 2007
    Chapter 3 made me laugh so hard my sides ached. Yami and Seto are fighting like cats and dogs. Revenge is sweet. I loved the pool scene and the iPod. I can see Yugi getting really mad over it. I felt bad for Seto that the wedding date is on his and Jou's anniversity. She is such a bitch. Chapter 4 I like how Yami went all James Bond. The mayo was hilarious. I hope that something works out for Seto and Jou so neither one feels really hurt. Maybe you could work it so Seto, Yami, and Jou end up in a threesome? Update when you can.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on November 29, 2007
    T___T Poor Jou. He holds onto his dreams but has to let go of his love for them. Mah.

    ...I loved the mayo on the pants thing. Nothing like misjudgements to get a relationship going! God, this story has got me drawn in so quickly. I really, really can't wait for the drama to get off the ground. *__*
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on November 28, 2007
    The "or else" scared me into reviewing. ._.

    Gah! I luff this. I don't know who I should be feeling bad for, so I'll just laugh at all of them ('cept maybe Jou). I want to see Kaiba and Yami married, definitely interesting. Kaiba should just push his aunt off the 32nd story if she's so sadistic towards him and his past relationship. Guess that's a terrible thing to say...
    I wonder how Jonouchi will react to finding out Seto and Yami are getting married. Can't wait to see that. XP T'is on my favs, I'll definitely be checking back from time to time for updates.
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  • From Auska on November 17, 2007
    Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! You seriously must update more quickly! If you don't, I will backtrack your IP address and steal your mailbox! Why? Because I can! If you wake up tomorrow to see your cat missing, I swear it was the dingo that ran off with my baby! Please, just update! For the love of god, update!

    Loving it, by the way. Hope to see more soon!

    Kuu!
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  • From sweetciel on November 14, 2007
    I am hooked! YUou officially have a new fangirl stalker. I hope that kaiba and jou work this out. Their doomed lo ve amke me sad :(...Great work though ^_^
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