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Reviews for My Snow White Angel

By : nikki7716
  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 20, 2008
    Ohmigod. O: Nu! Stupidstupidstupid Marik, how could he? Poor Ryou's gonna be devastated.

    x: I'm glad the fact that I just review counts, because they get shorter and shorter...
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  • From AxiaDrake on January 19, 2008
    So sweet...I love the nice Marik, though I love how the Fan Fiction world has called him Malik, to help with the differentiation of it
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  • From rukianeechan on January 19, 2008
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! I'm speechless!!!!!! Can't Malik and Reyou plan to kill bakura instead of dyeing for each other....... I've never hated Bakura this much ....PLZ update fast...and just please don't kill Malik he is so sweet in this fiction..madly in love and hopelessly trapped and we all know how hot is that....I just wanted to see him doing some crazy shit and there we have it.....suicide ....but I hope he fails....
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  • From rukianeechan on January 18, 2008
    You don't write a lot and yet you hit all the right spots....Specially in the last chapter, it was heart breaking and tearful.I just love how you play with Ryou's emotions...It's just so like him.....and yet not what I expected him to be.
    Plz update fast.........your stuff is surprisingly original.

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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 17, 2008
    T-T So sad! Bakura ruins everything. It's hard to overthrow someone who can overpower you. Poor Ryou feels so useless and unloveable. I hope Marik can make things right.
    x: My reviews for this fic are always so short...and unhelpful... and un-good. Forgive me for that.
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  • From hsosborne on January 17, 2008
    wow angsty
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 16, 2008
    Gasp. I disappear for a few days and I missed reviewing a chapter. x; That makes me feel terrible.

    Well! It's working out well, though. Bakura's a dickhead, but Marik's still there loving on Ryou. I wonder how Marik plans to resolve the situation. Poor Ryou, being the middleman sucks.
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 15, 2008
    "That's it, he's DEAD! Korage, Pain, Sic 'em!"

    *Cody's evil muses grab Bakura and tie him so tight he starts bleeding.*

    "You are going to BEG me for death before I let you pass out from the pain, and you will NOT be getting away this time! Pain, I want my whip, my barbed steel flail, and the branding irons, Korage, prepare the water torture and Pyramid Torture, I also want a poison box, testicle clamps and the lever with weights, LOTS of weights. Let's show this bastard what it REALLY means to hurt someone."

    *Evil Muses grin wickedly and start setting up. Bakura groans.*

    "And this is just the beginning, I have a whole ROOM of things I can do to you, you're going to regret that you were ever BORN! NO ONE hurts my Ryou-chan!"
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  • From zombiebait86 on January 14, 2008
    got laid oh ya! Actually its quite cute, but for some reason feel like I've heard it before >.< maybe i dreamed it? oh well ^-^
    J-chan
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 13, 2008
    YAY! go Marik! see I knew if I just tied that bastard up tight enough then Marik would be able to have some fun! don't worry Ryou, I'm not letting him go anytime soon! have fun with your boy toy!
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 07, 2008
    Awww! Yay Marik! *Ties up Bakura* and now this asshole can't interfere. I told you to run you arrogant prick bastard, gotcha now... :D and are we gonna have FUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 06, 2008
    Yay for Marik!
    But this means Bakura's gonna be his usual asshole self in the next chapter. D: I know he's a jerk and that's why I like him, but poor Ryou~. Ryou needs luff and attention. At least SOMEONE'S giving him love and attention. -Forces a cookie into Marik's hands.- :3
    *__* I saw the l-o-v-e word.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 01, 2008
    D: It's not often I want to kick my favorite character, but right about now I could totally kick Bakura and then hope I can run fast enough to get away. Which I probably can't. But it'd be worth it, that jerk.

    Oh well. I knew he was an ass hole anyway. But poor, poor, POOR Ryou. T__T I hope Marik can do something to help him.
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  • From AxiaDrake on December 31, 2007
    This one seems far more realistic to what Bakura would treat Ryou, and it is wonderfully done..
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 31, 2007
    GAH! IRK...PAIN! Massive, copious, unending amounts of blood and PAIN! I will maim, kill, slice and dice Bakura into tiny unrecognizable pieces and feed him to the crows! GRRR no hurting my Ryou chan or keeping him from food and/or happiness! *Blasts Bakura off the face of the earth.*

    ^_^ no need to be jealous, I only get to do it a few times a year, but man do have fun when I do, (I can't travel to all the fairs we go to) I love watching people get ill and pale when we describe or demonstrate how each torture is performed. I also love watching the craftsmen make new ones to add to the exhibit. and I don't love how sharp and pointed everything is. (I'm a natural clutz) I always end up spilling SOME blood. but it is fun. we have over 30 working replicas. If you're ever in Las Vegas the second weekend of october go to age of chivalry and find the Adrian Empire, that's where we'll be.



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