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Reviews for A Series of One Shots

By : nikki7716

From LadyDraculea on March 02, 2008
It's fine, I don't want to be a bother. Other people enjoyed it and that's what is important, right? I'm going to try and write my own little oneshot, and I know it's not going to be easy, but I thought I'd give it a shot. I think you do a marvellous job writing these for people, I know that I would never be able to do that. *bows*

Lady D
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From BlackGargie on March 02, 2008
LOL~! I swear I've never laughed so hard reading a YuGiOh hentai fanfic. Bakura and Marik are just full of surprises! I can't stop laughing at the part where Bakura cried his crocodile tears, and Marik's attempt to boo hoo his way into Malik's heart at the ending was fucking hilarious!

Don't worry about Yami. I'm fine with you writing him as a badass, just don't overdo it...much :D
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From sweetciel on March 02, 2008
The clueless bakura was soooo cute ^_^ I was cheering on ryou's knowledge and muttering things like 'yeah make 'em wet' under my breath. That was one of the best ones thus far. You RAWK!
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From Wicabeth on March 02, 2008
;.;!!!!!!!
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From LuciferxDamien on March 01, 2008
And of course instead of going to bed, here I am again, this time it being 7 A.M. But that's when fanfiction are best right?

Story 26: Ok, I don't really know who these characters are, because I am shamefully behind on my Yu-Gi-OH! as in haven't even seen half of Battle City shamefully behind *cry*, but that was really hot. I liked it when Pegaus showed up, he always makes thing even better lol. They so should have threesomed it out LOL.
Story 27: Oh wow...Yuugi is awfully vicious when he wants something... I don't blame Mariku and Bakura...I'd be terrified too if someone was all happy go cheery after something like that, wanting to do it again...Though, I would have taken the money, I love money far more than it is healthy to...
Story 28: That. Was. Just. Hot. I love Seto office sex, and taking it from his personal assistant no less MmMm! That is one of the hottest things I have read, it made me blush even. ME, blush!? Absurd as it is, it did indeed make me blush, and a little hot under the collar, well, if I was wearing a collar lol. (P.S. I have a god complex, hence my undying love for Seto Kaiba, and Seijuro Hiko from Rurouni Kenshin) I love how nonchalantly he shoos Roland away after they're done lol.
Story 29: Lol Friendship Cult. That sucked for Tristan, it was all just a day dream. But omg was that one kinky day dream lol. And I hate it when I'm having day dreams, or dreams in general, and they get interupted at the BEST part, that is why phones are the epiphany of all evil.
Story 30: OMG Seto is my hero, and you for the idea, he fired the cleaning staff cause he didn't write in his diary...I wish to someday become as rich as him. Oh Yuugi, Dark Magician slippers LMAO. Oh Yami you evil, evil genius, RECORDING IT?! Seto would KILL you if he found out... Ok, that was hot, and funny. I loved it XD!!! I liked that it was written in the diary form, that made it really interesting and funny, to Seto's, but mostly Yuugi's, reaction to things. LOVED LOVED LOVED!!! But like you said in your A/N, it is sad when authors write their fanfiction that way normally... But in that format I LOVED IT!!!

That was an extremely entertaining batch of fics. I really need to catch up on my YGO... Good thing the second season is on its way w00t! Well, I'm off to go play Harvest Moon, which has to be the oddest addicting gam ever...
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From tinkletimekelly on March 01, 2008
Love Yami/Yugi, be it in love, hate, lust, it's all good. Another nice one shot thanks for writing
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From AgateFluorite on March 01, 2008
How about Yami/Seto Uke Seto please Thank you.
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From LuciferxDamien on March 01, 2008
I don't think reviewing at 4:30-5 in the morning is such a wise idea...especially when it feels like my eyes are bleeding slightly... But here goes anyway.

Story 21: This one I absolutely loved. A threesome between Seto, Seth, and Joey!!! It's like my ultimate yaoi dream...Hot boys and hot sex, what's not to love?
Story 22: There really isn't enough TristanxDuke content out there. I really liked how the whole Dungeon Dice Monsters battle between Duke and Yuugi was a farce so Duke could be friends with everyone. Lol That part where Yuugi walked in was particularly amusing, and it almost seemed like Yuugi knew what was going on. Really loved it because I really like the TristanxDuke pairing.
Story 23: Ooo dark...and twisted. I do loves me a twisted and dark Bakura...but I guess he's usually like that isn't he? Lol Anyway, loved it all the same, blood play is fun.
Story 24: When I read the title I knew this one was going to be good...And Pegaus as the host...BEEP! Bakura rocks, that is all I have to say.
Story 25: It always seems that there is some sort of loathing or revolting, or otherwise something at least one of them do not want to do when Bakura and Mariku are involved lol. Awww, that was so sweet, and Mariku is an evil genius, a very hot and sexy evil genius. One of the best Valetines stories I've read. So Cute and hot!!! Wow, that's kind of a hard combination to get isn't it? Cute AND hot? You must have mad skilz.

Ok sign me up for the mailing list for this story, and any others you feel like sending me: Okumiya-sanAndShigure-kun@hotmail.com I really don't care if people see my email lol.

I am reeeaaaalllyyy behind on your stories...but you see the problem is, that if I start, I just won't stop, and then...then it ends up being about 6 or 7 in the morning and I have fanfiction overload, which of course the only cure for it to read MORE fanfiction. Vicious cycle isn't it? There's almost 20 more of these that I need to read, but since it's almost 6 in the morning I should probably go to bed, or play some more Harvest Moon. Damn that game is addicting... Anyway, I think I'll read some more of your fics against my better judgement, whom I keep locked in a closet lol. Oh the eye bleeding/hurting thing stopped, guess fanfiction cures that too, who knew?
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From LuciferxDamien on March 01, 2008
Ok, I know my last review was ubberly long, so from now on, I will do reviews in fives. It' been awhile since I've reviewed, and thusly, I can't remember which was the last chapter I reviewed XD. Hope I don't repeat, or miss anything.

Story 16: I really liked how Yuugi manipulated Yami an used his pent-up sex drive against him. Hilarious and interesting way to end the story lol.
Story 17: I really enjoyed this one. I'm a sucker for SetoxJoey. Lol I'm surprised Seto didn't absolutely kill Yami and Yuugi for interupting him and Joey, too bad you ended it before they got into a foursome.
Story 18: SetoxRyou is one the more interesting pairings I've read, and I've come to like it. Lol I could feel the rage coming off of Seto when he found out Bakura was there, almost like he wanted to break the bed posts to get free and strangle him. And kinky, Ryou liking Bakura watching, I like kinky...
Story 19: Lol Ok that, I did not see coming. I've always imagined Yuugi to be the obedient little uke. Kudos for making him seme with Yami.
Story 20: Lol This one was just plain hilarious. If it weren't for the fact that Ryou had those big chocolate eyes, that no one could say no to, especially when they were tear filled, I think he would have rather slid down a razor into a pool of lemon juice, then rolled around in some salt for a few hours then wear that stupid hat and ring that stupid bell, and certainly would prefer that painful expercience to dressing up like that and making money for someone else LOL. Then Mariku got forced into it...Aww...I do so love seeing the big bad yamis forced into servitude by their hikaris.

Ok, so I really loved this batch of stories, off to read another batch and review. Loves!!!
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From CodyMThomas on March 01, 2008
Seriously, you are trying to warp me, oh well I could use some warping, and yes, I shall now venture over and read 'this is my life'. I've just been too busy lately to read ANY new fanfics, but I make exceptions for you because I love your stuff. see you soon sweety!

Oh that's right, I almost forgot... ^_^

You fucking BASTARD! you hurt my bishie! I'll teach YOU some respect!

Cody Strikes Yami on the base of the head with a heavy blunt object, instantly knocking him unconscious. Lashes him to the backyard wall spread eagle, very close to a fire ant hill and binds his balls and dick tightly in an ace bandage with chunks of ice against the skin. As Yami wakes up from the pain she carves "Defeated King" into his chest with a rusted razorblade before carving detailed geometric patterns all over his flesh, taking EXTRA care on the palms of the hands, soles of the feet and face. She then douses him with a bucket of salted ice water (The salt melts the ice but it retains its temperature and the salt burns like hell) before taking up a thick rubber whip and dealing so many harsh blows to his stomach that he throws up. (stomach acid also doesn't feel very nice on open wounds) takes the butcher knife Yugi dropped and sodomizes the putrid pharaoh with the sharpened blade, puncturing colon and small intestines, Pours a trail of honey over Yami directly to the ant hill, removes the blade, then walks away to leave him to die from blood loss, blood poisoning, infection, and being eaten alive by fire ants.
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From sweetciel on March 01, 2008
Wow. That was the first time i was upset at an interupted suicide attempt. Poor yug :( Somebody needs to kick yami's ass *growl*
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From LadyDraculea on March 01, 2008
O.O Oh dear. Not quite like I imagined it. I actually couldn't bear to read through it all. I never imagined Yami abusive, just possessive. Dark doesn't mean evil, not like this... I was hoping a possessive obsession, "You're mine, only mine." and so such. Never hurt Yugi. Others who threaten him? Sure. But Yugi? Never. I guess I should have elaborated better? Thank you anyways. I've never had someone write something requested by me.

Lady D
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From BlackGargie on February 29, 2008
Gah~!!! How could you do this to poor little Yugi~?! Boo hoo hoo hoo~! *cries a river* Now my imagination of the perfect Yami is ruined...~! T_T Nah, just kidding. I've always thought Yami could have a violent side. You picture him well. Keep it going!
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From AxiaDrake on February 29, 2008
This one..was one of the darkest I had seen in a while, and such a complete departure from the norm.

As for the Seto/Jou story

MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From TheUltimateToken on February 29, 2008
You deserve all the praise I give! =)
I probably come off as some creepy crazed fan.
LOL. Oh well! It's worth it! Anyway...YAY! Number 200!!!
WOOT WOOT! Loved this story.
Not enough people go into the harsh Pharaoh side of Yami.
I'm glad someone requested this because it rocked my socks.
Me?! Request?! Hm...I feel like a kid in a candy store.
Uh...How about some more sadistic events from Bakura?
How about Bakura/Duke or Bakura/Seto? One or the two.
Gotta go read "This Is My Life" Seto/Joey now!!!
Keep up the EXCELLENT WORK!!!
=)
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