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Reviews for A Series of One Shots

By : nikki7716
  • From LuciferxDamien on February 08, 2008
    Ok, for starters, this is going to be a loooooooong review. After reading the Yumieshipping one, I finally decided it was time to review, that story rocked by the way. I love reading these, and they have really helped me get out of that notch of I guess 'perferred' and 'normal' pairings, not that I still don't love them to death. Now I want to write a whole bunch of fics with crazy pairings lol. You have also proved to me that you can do ANYTHING with the Yu-Gi-OH! characters, which is why I love them so much. Hope you don't mind, but I'm going to do a review of each of the fifteen stories I've read now:

    Story One: I love the Pharaoh and Bakura together, its so wrong lol. That aside, I really loved it, nearly made me cry at the end.
    Story Two: Now that one was just kinky, and I loved it, every word of it. I think I found a new pairing because of that one.
    Story Three: That is an interesting pairing, never thought of those two being together before, and especially not Ryou on top lol.
    Story Four: Also an interesting pairing, submissive Mariku, thats just hot.
    Story Five: That was just sweet, I also love those two together.
    Story Six: Ha, that was just pure love, I loved it soooo much. Though I would have liked to have seen where it could have gone.
    Story Seven: Ahh... Bunny 'costumes' and a nice romp to go with them. I really like that pairing, Ryou has a special place in my heart.
    Story Eight: Ok, now this one was just plain HOT! I think SetoxJoey is my favorite pairing, cause it would never happpen in the show, and that's what makes it so nasty, and nasty is good. Oh that, and office sex!!! I'd love to be Joey for a little office romp LOL, then again what girl wouldn't?
    Story Nine: Pegasus and Seto... It's kinky, hot, and just plain wrong, and that is why I love it. Lol Seems like I have a thing for the totally wrong pairings. This story was kinda sad... Hot, but sad. Poor Seto... And poor Pegasus...Sad...
    Story Ten: Okay hands down this is my favorite, so far. Seriously, that has to be the HOTTEST thing I have ever read. I read it, reread, reread it again, and oh my god is it HOT!!! I don't know what it is about it, but GOD I LOVE IT!!! Totally dig that pairing now.
    Story Eleven: Lol Sex ina closet, how Bakura. To me, that just seems like something he would do, then again, I think he'd have sex just about anywhere.
    Story Twelve: This one was just KiNkAy! Totally love Yuugi's dark side, and I don't think that is what the Millennium Rod was ment for...LOL LOVED IT!!!
    Story Thirteen: I love SethxSeto, and that is sad, sad ending...sad. Then again, the desert does entail sad things to happen. Loved it all the more.
    Story Fourteen: Ok, AtemuxYuugi takes the cake for sweetness. But once again, desert means SAD, still loved it though, and I really liked how you changed the format of your story and did a POV back and forth between the characters.
    Story Fifteen: Loons a funny word... Ok, so yeah, this rocked. It was totally random and out there, and all over the place. Everyone doing naughty things to everyone else, so hot. Loved how the Yamis were like 'kill me' a the mention of princesses and magical ponies, lol I totally agree with them, princesses and magical ponies are scary, like cheerleaders. *Shivers* But yeah, sex galore LOVED!!!

    I have fallen in love with your stories and definately plan on checking out more of them. And as for what people think about lemons, and under age and all that unsavory stuff, well, if it were me, I'd write the raunchiest, nastiest, most unsavory fic, just to spite them, but hey, 99% of what motivates me is spite. You keep doing what you're doing, and NEVER let anyone tell you it's wrong, or anything negative like that, for they, have no idea what they are talking about and are asshats (Best insult EVER!). Hope you have fun in England, I'll be leaving for Japan at about the same time, and hope to GOD I can get a story out before then, curse my OCD.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on February 07, 2008
    Bwaha. I'm back. Sick as a dog, but back. And what a thing to come back to. xD Poor Bakura was so desperate he turned to the power of the vacuum cleaner. He should just be lucky that didn't backfire. At least Marik and Yami made it up to him! Next time, they should take Bakura with them wherever they go~.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 05, 2008
    Poor horny Bakura! but the vaccuum cleaner is damn lucky and so are those other two! I was laughing the whole time! Kudos!
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  • From sweetciel on February 05, 2008
    Yes yes yes! This one was very hot. Started off funny as hell, then dropped off into the den of yummy smut ^_^ I love you. The only person i duel is my little brother...it's sad.
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  • From Diva937 on February 05, 2008
    I'd have to say the Yamishipping one is my favorite so far too. I can just picture Yami, and Bakura's faces when they walked in that door...
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  • From BlackGargie on February 05, 2008
    Wohoo~! Glad to see another threesome here. Three horny 5000 year old yami-s sure has a whole fucking lot of pent-up sexual frustration to be desperate to go for a vacuum! XD Dang, I'm beginning to swear like Bakura too! LOL! A note to any sexually frustrated person: Do NOT try this at home if you don't want your cocks to be ripped off by the suction. Bakura is a professional. XDDD
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 04, 2008
    lol...a vacuum...wow...that was pretty interesting...but cute...somehow...really cute
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  • From tavia454 on February 04, 2008
    *snorts* I knew better than to drink and read your fic this time! That was fan-fucking-tastic! Those three are sooo hot together! But the vacuum...? ROFL! That was freaking hilarious! I'm never drinking another thing when I read - I'll just end up spitting it all over the comp - and then what am I going to do?
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  • From Wicabeth on February 04, 2008
    Mmm.. That was hot.. *drooooools*

    Oh god.. and the vaccum part cracked me up XD That was awesome
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 02, 2008
    Alright I'm getting married to a great author! I hope you don't mind sharing me with the 5 other people who have also claimed me as theirs, I give my love equally and I don't play favorites, I love hugs and cuddles too much to put up with drama! And YAY more lovelies! I missed reading your stuff SOOOO much! and I get a few more to read too!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on February 02, 2008
    Oh dear. x: PegasusxJoeyxMr.Ruggles... scary thought.
    Pegasus has (had) such an advantage in bed with the mind-reading thing. That could be awesome--...or really, really bad if you're thinking about how terrible the sex is.

    I won't be able to review again until the end of the week, as I'm going away to take care of my aunt for a little while. u.u Sorry, but I'll be back. Have fun in Paris!
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  • From BlackGargie on January 31, 2008
    *gasps after being hugged by the death grip* Great work as usual, even though I'm not exactly a big fan of Pegasus/Joey, but the way you write it seemed to match pretty well
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  • From Wicabeth on January 31, 2008
    I'm both scared and curious of Mr. Ruggles being included 'next time' XD

    WOW! Have crazy fun in Paris! =D
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  • From DBZVelena on January 30, 2008
    I love the seto fics. they're very good.
    So I got another kinky request for you.

    Seto and Mokuba having sex, then getting caught by Joey, Seto's b/f.

    Good luck with that one :p
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  • From BlackGargie on January 30, 2008
    LFOL~!!! It means laughing fucking out loud! This is just HILARIOUS! They can just conversate like that so casually while fucking each other. LOL!!! Normal people would've been too busy enjoying the sex to even talk about anything! You've just brighten up my day~! XD
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