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By : nikki7716
  • From Epsilon on January 13, 2008
    Aww, poor Malik!
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  • From hsosborne on January 13, 2008
    awwww...
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 13, 2008
    Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Ryou is in quite the sticky pickle... although at this point I think I'm rooting for Malik. Come on Ryou sweety, you gotta face the truth...


    And as for no reviews it's nothing like that from me my dear, my internet stopped working so I have to steal my Aunts, and I'm in the process of moving, so I'm kinda busy,*Look up: Has too much crap and no where to put it* I just got to read the chappies today infact. Gods I miss this place! *sigh* well, I'm off to read the rest and then I must go back home and keep packing. I'll be back online in a few weeks. I'll miss you till then!
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 13, 2008
    OK with how bakura had started acting and how malik and Ryou interacted, I can't say I'm all that surprised, and only 2 more? *Tear* but it's such a good story! yes! bigger series! yes yes yes!
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  • From rukianeechan on January 13, 2008
    This story is beyond beautiful....It's so emotional.......and I can't predict where you are taking this story..........PLZ continue. you are a real talent and I just admire your work.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 11, 2008
    I don't know who I want to hit more right now, Bakura or Ryou, but since I'm against Ryou-abuse, I guess I'll be smacking Bakura. Why must I always ask for brutal murder...?

    I understand Ryou running off to Malik, no matter how much I wanna shake him for it. But...argh! Bakura confuses me all the more. Damn him and his enigmaness. Boys can be so much trouble, I never did understand them. You and your damn twists. D:

    Is it just me or do my reviews get shorter and shorter? But. Raar, I love this fic, I just have trouble reviewing sometimes. Your idea, with the other views and stuff. :D You should do that.
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  • From hsosborne on January 07, 2008
    woowww..great chapter! and, I gave you the idea for the update heads-up? *pointpoint* no one else asked?
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 07, 2008
    Uh Ryou I said have sex with Bakura a FEW more times, not go and bang like bunnies in the springtime fresh out of prison with an endless supply of spanish fly. you need to assert SOME control in this relationship, or you'll never really be happy. And Bakura STOP using sex as an excuse to try and get out of answering all the personal questions and let the beauty get to know you before you lose him! You mistreat my Ryou I will kill you in several painful ways! I am mostly Italian and German, with a nice dose of Irish, Scottish, French and Polish thrown into the mix, and I help run a working replica torture exhibit at renaissance faires, trust me you do NOT want to piss me off!

    I'm so glad you updated, this story makes me so happy! update again soon please!
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  • From Kaitlyn on January 06, 2008
    ...Ryou doesnt want to have sex...
    HAS HE GONE INSANE! i mean this is Bakura!
    gosh. *disappointed* haha.

    speaking of sex, you write lemons so well i swear! i mean you make it personal not like...
    "and he fucked me with his rod of delicious man meat." haha.

    you never planned on having Dartz get revenge? he must be very uncaring about being dumped so harshly then. i wish i could find a boyfriend (ex) like that! i get all the crazies...

    my email: blood-red-eyes@hotmail.com
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on January 06, 2008
    xD I never thought of Yugi demonstrating, but you're probably right, he would.

    Gasp. Bakura, kinky? Who would have known? -Insert sarcasm here.-
    Ah, but poor Ryou. D: Bakura's being a meany again. Gah. Bakura's character is so frustrating to me, I know he's just this way but I want to slap him upside the head for making Ryou worry so much! Anyone else and I'd let him have his way, but I'm so protective of little Ryou. T-T
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  • From hsosborne on January 02, 2008
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do
    you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?
    the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
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  • From Kaitlyn on December 29, 2007
    yay! awesome ending for me!
    awesome ending for me!
    finally Ryou drops that freako Dartz, and in a public place too. that makes it all the better!
    I loved the "so why dont you just kill yourself line." that was bloody brill.
    and that ending was so adorable. i usually hate cute...but i cant resist!!
    im just a bit worried for Ryou about what will happen when Dartz finds out about him and Bakura...

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  • From tavia454 on December 28, 2007
    God this is great! I about laughed my ass off at what Ryou yelled at Dartz! He still should have given him a swift kick for good measures. And Bakura is still an indecipherable ass - as always. But his so sexy when he's like that! Great chapters - sorry, I didn't realize that this one was up the last time I was on here. Which was a couple of weeks ago. But anyways - great chapters!!!!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 27, 2007
    YAY FOR RYOU! I love it when that boy loses his temper. It was about time, I don't know how he standed it for so long. The fact that his losing-of-the-temper led to hot sex with Bakura doesn't have anything to do with my happiness, though. Of course not. I'm just entirely happy that Ryou stood up for himself.
    Yeah.

    D:
    Poor Ryou needs to have lots more smex with Bakura to get the images of Dartz out of his brain.

    Yay for Yami calling Yugi away before Ryou and Malik were exposed to intimate hickeys. Ha. You know one day Ryou'll have to ask Yugi for sex advice, if only for curiosity's sake. But Ryou ought to bring Malik along if he does that so if Yugi goes way out of line, there's someone to at least be scarred for life with.

    I feel kinda bad for Dartz, it's not his fault he's such a freak. But I'm rooting for Bakura, so Dartz'll just have to deal with the pain. Bakura's actions make more sense now, damn him for not coming out and saying what he wanted. But hey, I'm with you, I don't care what Bakura says or doesn't say, I'd totally go along with it just because it's him. xD
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  • From AxiaDrake on December 27, 2007
    So cool...I love this story
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