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By : nikki7716
  • From CrimsonMaiden777 on December 27, 2007
    Yaaaay! I love this story! I also love how Bakura is cocky...but not too much so. I can't really explain it. I just love everything! XP
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 27, 2007
    YOU SLEPT WITH HIM?! *Slap* Ryou you Idiot! Yuck! Fuck Bakura a few more times to get that image out of my head! Go! Right now mister!
    Ryou runs off and curls into Bakuras' embrace
    Bakura-- Thanks Cody :D. Aww does my Ryou need punished?
    *Nod*
    Bakura-- Well then, I'll just have to punish you until you're sorry for what you did and beg for my forgiveness...
    Cody-- Oh this I GOTTA see!

    I really liked this chapter even if I did get violently nauseous at the thought of Dartz' paws on my Ryou-chan. Yas I think Dartz will definitely seek revenge, he's a rich, narcissistic megalomaniac, and he'll probably go after Bakura too... blaming him for Ryou's lapse in what Dartz perceived as perfect love and faithfulness. Not to mention Ryou humiliated him in public and took a direct shot at his manly pride in bed. Oooh I can't wait for more, thank you for the pretty! And I can think like Bakura because I used to have a friend who played mind games, and I was the only one who saw what was really going on, and figured the stupid things out first. So I guess prior experience has helped me once again. update soon!
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  • From DesYamimi on December 27, 2007
    Oh damn it ended!
    GREAT Story, nice and sexy
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  • From DesYamimi on December 27, 2007
    Mimi is amused, what will happen next?
    Update soon I COMMAND YOU!
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 22, 2007
    HE HE HE! WOW! It's like you took it from the conversation I wrote and turned it into a beautiful lemon! Woohoo! Ryou got Bakura for Christmas! Well our Christmas anyway, I don't think it's christmas in the storyline. And somehow I KNEW Bakura was gonna do that. I think I'm figuring out his thought process. and it's kind scary. God Bakura, you're going to destroy him at this rate, and Ryou I think he wants you to take some more of that lovely initiative and dump Datz's ass before he'll sweep you away again. and God Ryou, don't even bother feeling guilty. Dartz ISN'T worth it.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 19, 2007
    Bwaha! Ryou finally snapped, I'm glad he started yelling. Poor boy deserves a good scream fit every once in awhile.

    FINALLY! Bakura took the initiative! I guess Ryou and Yugi have something to talk about now. And maybe Yugi's suggestions will be taken more seriously. :D
    Gah! But Ryou better strangle Bakura for being such a mysterious bastard. My head would have blown by the point of that note. I can't wait to see Bakura's weird logic to all of this. xD
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  • From Kaitlyn on December 18, 2007
    YES WRITE THE ALTERNATE ENDING! and even if you dont wanna post it here, send it to me!!!

    ...
    ok so I read Ch. 4 and had something to say like, Dartz is weirding me out a lot. Especially with the whole necklace thing in Ch. 5. But once I finished Ch 5 I totally forgot what I was going to say about Ch 4 abd the only thought in my head was
    Hot.
    Damn.
    *squees*
    FINALLY! SLASHY GOODNESS FOR ME!
    SLASHY GOODNESS FOR ME!
    SLASHY GOODNESS FOR KAITLYN *mumbles "and all the other readers"*
    SLASHY GOODNESS FOR MEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
    But I dont like that Bakura just up and left!
    he better have a damn good reason too. like his cat was about to be eaten by nomadic dolphins or something.

    Bakura: I'm hot. I don't need a reason.
    Kaitlyn: *death glare*

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  • From wiccacat18 on December 14, 2007
    More of this story NOW. It is good and I would like to read it all the way to the end if you don't mined.
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  • From tavia454 on December 14, 2007
    Okay...*taps foot impatiently* that was just plain evil. Evil I telll you. Yeah, I know how to spell. ^^ anyways...that little asshat Dartz needs to be kicked for his bs! Bakura needs to step in and show him his place! And that's my thought on the subject! *nods*
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  • From tavia454 on December 14, 2007
    *snorts* Ryou really needs to tell that Dartz guy to get a clue! *mutters under breath* Had a guy do that to me one time...it was the last time I saw him, he ended up with a plate of spagetti all over his new outfit! Did I mention how much I hate guy with ego issues???
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  • From tavia454 on December 14, 2007
    Ah, that was just as great as the first chapter! Which btw, I'm still laughing about!
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  • From tavia454 on December 14, 2007
    Holy hell that was freaking hilarious!!! I laughed my ass off! And believe me that's a lot of ass to laugh off! ^_^; I think I have a new respect for the Bakura/Ryou coupling. Normally I'm strictly Y/Y (don't ask...something about short men with attitude problems :) Still better than anything with Kaiba - who I have some serious issues with (damn arrogant men). I really like the start of this one!
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 13, 2007
    *Groan* ...RYOU Why didn't you LISTEN?! High pressure, pushy, controlling boyfriends are almost IMPOSSIBLE to get rid of once they get in! Can't you see that Bakura is being SARCASTIC?! You tell him you like him then you run off with that pushy bastard. For crying out loud, even I'M not this dense and that's saying something! Get your act together before you end up doing something you really regret!
    Bakura, it really hurt to see Ryou run off with Dartz, right? Why don't you just tell him you like him, so he'll leave that asshole?

    Bakura- Ryou can like whoever he wants. And they're cute together. Nice necklace, bit girly but whatever you like... *Pushes Ryou against the door and kisses him senseless*

    Ryou- *Melted*

    Bakura- So what do you want for Christmas Ryou? I just came by to see what you liked...

    Ryou- Bakura...

    Bakura- Really? Well I'll see what I can do, I hope your boyfriend won't mind. *Smirk, starts walking away* Goodnight Ryou...

    Ryou- *Grabs and pushes Bakura against the side of the house and starts kissing him senseless* Wait, not yet, I haven't told you everything I want for Christmas yet...

    Bakura- Have you been THAT good this year?

    Ryou- At the moment no, but I don't really care. Why, do you think Santa will punish me?

    Bakura- You're being awful naughty...

    Ryou- Maybe he'll let YOU punish me instead...

    Bakura- Maybe he will, but we'll have to see. *Kisses Ryou senseless and goopy again* Goodnight Ryou-chan...


    Cody- BAKURA GET YOUR ASS BACK THERE RIGHT NOW AND FINISH WHAT YOU'VE STARTED!

    Bakura- *Smirk*

    GRRRRRRRRRRRR

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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 13, 2007
    Dartz scares me. xD He sorta reminds me of an ex-boyfriend with how obsessive he is, but at least my ex-boyfriend didn't think he was going to be with me forever on our second date. ._. Poor Ryou. He needs to dump Dartz fast before Dartz gets even more involved. Besides, Bakura is in his apartment (gah, that stalker xD How'd he know where Ryou lived?) and Bakura pwns Dartz any day of the week.

    :D I imagine Yugi and I would agree when I say Ryou should just jump Bakura and do things I'm not allowed to type about with a younger sibling moping around somewhere.
    But Ryou won't. T_T
    So Bakura just needs to hurry up and jump Ryou. :D

    Argh.
    I need the next chapter. I wanna know what Bakura's doing there!

    ...A guy practically drooling over you and thinking you'd be together forever at the second date didn't happen to you, too, did it? D:
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  • From Kaitlyn on December 12, 2007
    Wonderfully inspiring...*blush* thanks. =)
    wow. I don't like Dartz, he reminds me of those dominating gay guys who treat other gay guys as if they are secretly girls, or something (my uncle dated a guy like that one) I really hope he doesn't keep dating Dartz, because that kiss between him and Bakura was *trys to find appropriate word for such hotness* amazingly fantabulously wonderful, and very very overdue.

    Only 8 or 9 chapters?? Are you planning another story too? because if not *grabs pitchfork in a threatening manner* Ohh and by the way if you make a bomb come down and kill everyone that would be the funniest frickin thing I've ever read. You should make an alternate ending like that. Perhaps Bakura and Ryou are about to orgasm and BOOM dead. haha. =)
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