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Reviews for This Is My Story

By : nikki7716
  • From Yukita on December 10, 2007
    lmao. I love it. Ryou is hilarious, and smexy. lol I absolutely love it.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 10, 2007
    You poor thing. D: Personal experience? Some people are so mean. T-T I'm suddenly very happy again I'm married and that never happened to me, and if I'm lucky, it never will happen to me.

    Raar.
    Dartz scares me with the dove name calling. Ah! What do you say when someone asks if you've been thinking about dating them? That would be weird, I'm with Ryou, spit out the nearest posistive word and continue the conversation.

    What exactly does Yugi want Ryou to smother himself in? ._.

    ...HolyfuckBakurakissedRyou.
    8D
    About time! I love the way Ryou acts, it just makes me smile. xD Knocking on the door one minute, walking away passively the next, although Bakura has a really good idea of how to make people passive. Really, really good.
    I'm sure Ryou will be even more confused about what's going on in his life when he actually gets to thinking about the kiss. Someone kissing you then wishing you luck with your current date-person-thing has to be confusing. Gah, Bakura confuses me. xD I'm very interested in how all of this is helping him figure Ryou out.

    Blame stupid spelling mistakes on my fever. Damn cold. I've re-read it but I'm sure there's something. -_-
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 10, 2007
    I do not seeing this ending well.. -_-' Ryou you are an idiot for humoring him, Dartz is obviously the controlling type and if you give him the slightest encouragement it will be almost impossible to pry him off of you and your sexy ass. But hey, at least Bakura gave you a good memory for the night, even if the bastard is playing some insane mind games. Now go break the news to Dartz that you are completely in love with someone else, and you'll have to break it to him HARD sweetie or he won't take you seriously. Then go offer yourself to Bakura in whatever way he wants to have you! I think he's just teasing you to see how serious you are... and because he loves playing mind games.

    Hey Bakura!

    Bakura- Hmm?

    Cody- You. Ryou's Ass. NOW!

    Bakura- *Smirk* In time.

    Cody- Do you want to lose it to Dartz?!

    Bakura- No, it just seems to be coming to me all on its own.

    Cody- Lazy prick Bastard... -_-'

    Bakura- *Smirk*


    Please update before I go mad! Or bash Bakura over the head!

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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 08, 2007
    *__*
    I am so fugging glad I got bored and decided to read this ficcie.
    Poor Ryou! Ohmigod, if I practically asked someone on a date and they just walked away without a word, I would die. D: Bakura's lucky Ryou's so shy, if someone walked away from me then a week later said "I'm figuring you out," I would have a serious problem with that and would probably voice it. Maybe. If I didn't run out of the bathroom in mortification before that point.
    This ficcie was so inspiring when it came to telling your crush you like them...at first. Then Ryou got the bravery and said it. After that, I'm just glad I'm married because I'll never be able to tell another person I'm crushing on them without thinking they'll walk away without saying anything. xD
    AJjkasjfakjsfa. I'm prone to rambling. ._.
    Basically. I love it so far, even if Bakura has scarred me for life when it comes to crushes (thank god I read this AFTER I got married or I'd be screwed). And I can't wait for the rest. And for Bakura to finally figure Ryou out so Ryou doesn't die of embarrassment.

    ...And Yami so totally ruined Yugi's little innocent mind. X3
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  • From jin1377 on December 07, 2007
    good story!btw...are you gonna make it more...hot than on ff.net? this is a lovely story and i hope you'll update soon!!! pwease? first review?
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 07, 2007
    OMG! Bakura you are an ASS! How dare you leave my darling Ryou hanging! 'Figuring him out' for WHAT exactly, what in the hell is there to figure out?! He's cute, he's sweet and would probably drop his pants and bend over the nearest available surface for you right this second and you're 'figuring him out'?! BAKA BAKA BAKA Bakura you get back in there and bang that bishie right this minute and don't you dare come back until you have!

    Nikki, this is a lovely story, please continue it before I have to beat Bakura within an inch of his afterlife!
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 07, 2007
    AWWWWWW! Ryou was blushing! that's so cute! and you added Dartz too, he's almost NEVER featured as a character! this promises to be enjoyable, don't give up on it!
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  • From IvoryIllusions on December 07, 2007
    Oh my god! xD Seriously, what the hell! Bakura, what is wrong with you?! When a lovely gentleman asks you out, you don't fucking smile and walk away! AHH! -Jumps him- Seriously, Bakura is such a fucking weirdo! Ryou, go beat him down and -make- him date you!

    Hehe~. As you can see, I am absolutely loving this story! The second chapter was even better than the first. I really like how you didn't just jump them right into a relationship! For some reason, Bakura is taking the time to get to know Ryou (in his own very fucking weird little way!) and Ryou is, well...probably very freaked out by that. Haha. I think alot of good things are to come from this story! I really like how Ryou had a word count. What a cutie. *__* I am very excited to see what Bakura's thoughts are once he learns a little more about Ryou! I just hope Ryou doesn't get too restless and depressed waiting for an answer to his question. -heartheart-

    More soon, I sincerely hope! 8D
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  • From IvoryIllusions on December 07, 2007
    Ch. 1!

    I really like it so far. ;D It's alot of fun to read! I like how Ryou couldn't even hear Bakura when he was talking to him. Hehe~. It was very cute! Malik and Ryou used to date? Psh, at least they got over that so Ryou could get onto bigger, better things! ;D Like Bakura. Yum! Well, next chapter! I really liked the first one!
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  • From Kaitlyn on December 06, 2007
    AWWW!
    im giggling right now, but im not sure if its from Ryou's inner diolauge or the general cuteness of it all.
    Word Count: 26, right?
    Ryou. The adorableness on his cute cuddlyness meter couldn't get any higher.
    :3
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