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Reviews for Pharaoh and the Thief

By : Jadelioness
  • From ANON - Crimson2006-Rose on January 14, 2008
    Wow, damn! That was hot! I really loved that lemon. I wonder what the aftermath is going to be; especially when Bakura finds out the truth behind who he just slept with. To be honest, I was sort of expecting for someone to come rushing in there because of all the noise they were making--haha, but that would have ruined the tender moment at the end, so I'm gald that it didn't happen like that. ^^

    Anyway, this story totally rocks and I hope that you can update it again soon!

    BTW, sorry I'm not logged in, for some reason, it won't let me review that way... ^^;
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  • From Rosebud on January 14, 2008
    Oh, I loved, loved this chapter. Things are heating up between the two of them! Bakura’s awkwardness is simple adorable. I like that he has all those conflicting thoughts; even if he doesn’t let them show. And you do so well to draw the plot out. Often people drag on the content, or have them get together prematurely. But you move at a really nice pace. ^^


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  • From Rosebud on January 14, 2008
    Aww~ I really enjoyed this chapter. The tender moment between Atem and Bakura was very heartfelt. I also thought that it was cute how defensive Bakura got. I’m hoping for a lemon here in the near future *crosses fingers* XD.

    These two are so awesome together. There really needs to be more fic’s out there with them as a couple. This ones so nicely written too; it’s a real treat! ^^

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  • From Rosebud on January 14, 2008
    Wow, chapter three was really interesting. I liked that Bakura didn’t recognize the Pharaoh—though I anticipate his reaction when he realizes the truth.
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  • From Rosebud on January 14, 2008
    Oh, such suspense in this chapter. Poor Bakura; they put him through hell. I really hope that it was Atem that was standing there at the door.
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  • From Rosebud on January 14, 2008
    Wow, so I just got through reading the first chapter and I have to say; I’m glad that I clicked on this story. It really is a delight. I love your style, the plot is intriguing and the characters are well developed—overall, I’m hooked. XD Wonderful job, you really are talented.

    Hehe, well I’m off to go read the second chapter; I’d just thought I’d share my admiration for you work! ^^

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  • From CodyMThomas on January 13, 2008
    SQUEE! wonderful! go steamy hot lemons! please update again soon before I go mad! Bakura is gonna be PIIIIIIIISSSED when he finds out who Atem is.
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  • From ANON - rukia on January 13, 2008
    OH MY GOD..........This story is lovely...It's a real beauty.......and what will happen when Bakura finds out who his lover really is?.......PLZ don't let it be a sad ending ......and update fast

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  • From dragonlady222 on January 13, 2008
    Good chapter. I hope they stay together even after Bakura finds out who Atem is. I love it.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 13, 2008
    Aww, that was sweet :)
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  • From DesYamimi on January 13, 2008
    SO DAMN SEXY!
    Is there more
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 12, 2008
    great chapter, but is this ch. 5 or 6? If it's really ch. 5, then I feel like something is missing. It's just going from them being cute and awkward to each other to suddenly making out! But, it's a good chapter nevertheless.
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 12, 2008
    I loved this chapter. Bakura is going to be shocked when he finds out whp Ate, really is. Great job.
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  • From trabeck89 on January 02, 2008
    I LOVE IT!!!!I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
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  • From DarkPharaoh84 on December 31, 2007
    Ooh, I wonder when Bakura will learn the truth, and what his reaction will be? Keep it up.
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