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Reviews for Pharaoh and the Thief

By : Jadelioness
  • From HavocTellenoi on December 31, 2007
    The end of Chapter 2 had me gasping in horror and clicking like mad for the next chapter to see how things were panning out and then we're left with chapter four and pinning for chapter five. It's a thoroughly enjoyable story line and rather interesting and it will continue, won't it? Please? So we can see how things pan out for the thief and the pharoah?
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  • From ChibiBerry on December 29, 2007
    Oh...i can't wait to see what happens next! Everything is so well written..and the plotline really is interesting...though i'm just wondering how Bakura is going to react when he finds out who the pharaoh is.. Please continue to update...this is one of the best stories i have ever read! I'm looking forward to your next update. Take care 8D
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  • From ChibiBerry on December 28, 2007
    Oh, i really like this so far..the plot is reallly good.. 8D thats why im going to go read more...
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 22, 2007
    Poor Bakura. No one has ever shown him kindness before. That is so sad. Atem is really feeling guilty about what happened. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - DesertRoseTemari on December 22, 2007
    Should log in to review...too lazy...

    Poor Atem feels so guilty. D: I'm glad Bakura didn't go complete and total ass hole on Atem and rub in the guilt trip, Atem really didn't need that. It's nice to see Bakura thankful for what's going on, especially since he's never had anything to be thankful for before now.

    ;__; Poor Bakura, I feel worse for him by the chapter. At least he has Atem to take care of him~. Can't wait for more. *__*
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 22, 2007
    AWW! This was such a cute chapter! And Bakura will have a conniption if he finds out who he thanked. this is a great story please continue soon!


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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 18, 2007
    The part where Bakura is considering how to properly climb out the window amused me. I'm glad he decided to stay instead of falling to his death from a window, a dead Bakura is no good to the fanfic.

    Maaah. Atem is so good to Bakura, I love it. xD

    I feel bad for Bakura, he's had such a sucky life. I'm sure it can only get more complicated, although likely less traumatizing, from here on out, but at least he gets a nice soft bed for his troubles. I can only imagine how Bakura is going to act when he finds out who Atem REALLY is. Mwaha. :D I'm getting more and more excited for chapters to come out with each one.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 16, 2007
    Bakura's gonna be in quite the bind when he realizes just who Atem is... OOOOh I can't WAIT for the next chapter, PLEASE update soon!
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 16, 2007
    Good chapter. I hope Bakura finds out it was Akhenden and not Atem before he kills the wrong innocent person. Atem must be feeling really guilty about what happened to Bakura. He seems to really care.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 10, 2007
    Oh gods, poor Bakura! That had better be the Pharaoh or Bakura is in BIG trouble! Atemu if my angsty bishie loses his hands I'll never forgive you for it!
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 08, 2007
    I'm glad Atemu was in time. I hope he saves him. Good chapter.
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 07, 2007
    The Pharaoh to the rescue. I don't imagine Bakura will appreciate that when he finds out. *-* Can't wait for more chapters, I really wanna get into their interaction~.
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 03, 2007
    Poor Bakura caught as he was trying to do the right thing. I hope the man gets the amulet or the money for it. He really needs it. Good chapter.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 02, 2007
    Oh dear, Bakura has a conscience! He he he! That's so cute! Ah the things that Pharaoh's eyes can make you do eh Bakura? This was a really great start, I look forward to reading more!

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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 01, 2007
    *__* I like it thus far. I can't wait until the next chapter, I hope it really starts delving into the storyline soon.
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