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Reviews for Whispers in the Dark

By : BlackGargie
  • From ANON - Zena McClain on November 17, 2016

    I would make it where Joey or Tristan go into labor and after they just deliver the baby or babies that Illust comes into the cell that there in and takes the babies away from their mother and decides the babies are suitable to be sacrificed or given to be raised buy a bad seed and that Yugi gets mad enough to unlock a secret type of power that you mentioned to Yami when he gave him the millennium puzzle and mentioned that he had a limited low level of magic but with the magical properties rising from the Earth that his body and the babies is there enough to be used against Illust and her assistant just enough to push them outside the cell and have one of the other pregnant Mother's close the cell door and Yugi destroying the set of keys she used to open the cell and she mentions that they were the only keys to open the cell but it didn't matter cause they could always make another set of keys and Yugi replies that it's better to keep her out and away from those that end up giving birth to their babies without her telling them weather there going to be sacrificed or taken away to be raised as a bad seed and that it's best for them to wait until their rescue butt as Yugi says this his babies get incontact with Yami while he is sleeping the images he sees of his babies are a bright silver ball of light and he knows that they are his children while in his sleep he hears their voice telling him the location of where Yugi and the others are at and that Malik and Tristan or Joey have given birth already and that they were fine and healthy but you hurry and that Yugi destroyed the only set of keys to keep Illust and her partner from checking taking the babies to be raised as a bad seed and that they need to hurry with every second of every day the monster in the abyss get stronger as every time he takes a host he deserves their life energy and their power and get stronger and closer to getting to be reunited inside his body and that before he does Yugi and the others will be the last sacrifice so he is strong enough to be revived ( Yugi's babies call the monster in the abyss this and because I can't remember how to spell his name and that they do not know what his name is. )


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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on November 17, 2016

    When you said it was creepy about Marik type of voice, I was impressed the way you put The Way Marik voiced his emotions towards the traitors of the clan I can't remember what you called Seth and his twin Seto and the others. I know that the monster that the bad seeds are trying to bring back from the abyss is not the same as the Shadow Realm is the round that Seth and Seto and the others live in Sky City is the real Shadow. So what is the round that Seth and Seto really called?


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  • From ANON - ZenaMcClain on November 17, 2016

    Why not have Seto or Mailk that there love is just like Seth and his mate love each other, why can't they have the same kind of love they have? But in an angry kind of waste probably make it in bold letters.


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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on February 22, 2009
    This story realy drew me in right from the begining. I read it all in one sitting, no breaks.
    The happy ending was very appreciated and fitting.
    Great Work
    =^-^=
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  • From zombiebait86 on May 26, 2008
    YAY!**hug**poor kats labor is a bitch >.< though my sis cheated and only had a 2 hour one
    J-chan
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  • From smalvina on April 01, 2008
    Love your story
    great ending
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  • From trabeck89 on March 14, 2008
    I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was one of the best stories I have ever read!
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  • From KikiItemri on March 02, 2008
    Oh wow. I loved this story! I read it all within a few hours and I was hooked after the first few chapters. You did an awesome job and I would love to see more fics written by you. I have to say, your details about giving birth were amazing, and I know since I just had a child a month ago. I was totally able to relate to them. A sequel to this would be awesome! I'd totally read it if you wrote one. :)
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  • From ANON - Korbin on March 01, 2008
    Oh, sweet joy! There's the happy ending I was hoping for! Ah! Such a beautiful story and you did very well with it, very well indeed. I look forward to reading more of your work if you decided on posting more. Thank you for sharing such a lovely tale with us. ^_^
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  • From HannaFO on March 01, 2008
    Awww so sad it has to end... Great ending though :D I´m so glad they get to stay with they're beloved XD Thanks for all the time you put into it :D
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  • From ANON - Celeste on March 01, 2008
    That was a wonderful ending to your story. Love this story so much. ^__^
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  • From ANON - kinkou on February 28, 2008
    *SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* That was evil to do... right at the heart-rending part. Man I can't wait for the epilogue. This story was very well done. Congrats ^_~
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 28, 2008
    Oh my goodness only one chapter left? -wriggles in excitement- This chapter was by far the best you've done! Joey's labor and Yugi's breakdown were especially touching.
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 28, 2008
    Wah! You left it like that...grrrrr
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  • From HannaFO on February 26, 2008
    Noooooo.. very mean way to end it.. and here i spent almost 6 hours reading the entire story in one sitting :D please update soon!!!
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