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Reviews for Running

By : mariklover23
  • From FrozenDreamz on May 10, 2008
    at some points you didn;t use the right tence*past present future*
    but overall this was a really good fic
    4.75/5
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  • From Calcifer on March 29, 2008
    Hmm... not bad, but it could use some work.

    And the last bit there with the sex was a bit unrealistic: No lube, no prep, and no pain? Not likely.

    Another interesting concept: your summary said 'oneshot' and this thing was five chapters...

    But it was a good idea. You just need a little more practice. And a good beta reader.

    Keep it up!

    ~Angel
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  • From DesYamimi on December 22, 2007
    I'll have to agree w/ J Chan
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 22, 2007
    And?!? This is evil!
    J-chan
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