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By : YamiKitsune
  • From tinkletimekelly on February 06, 2008
    Okay! Yup. I liked it. Your chapter, that is. It works/fits. Given what is, generally known, as Yugi's personality(his aversion to killing/death), I think the memory you created for him "perfect". The worst thing for Yugi is knowing he hurt someone, so remembering his part in his mothers death(even if it was accidental)would traumatize him enough to create a shadow. Well done. Okay, so now, I wanna know what happens next. Can Yami help, or make it worse? Can hardly wait for next chapter. Later.
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 05, 2008
    Hmmm quite a good update...well done
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  • From tinkletimekelly on February 03, 2008
    Good chapter. A pleasure to read. Just waiting on the next chapter. Later.
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  • From tavia454 on February 02, 2008
    I so loved that chap! But I don't think it worked that time. Some of the errors are still there. *scratches head* Sorry! I'll do better next time. Until then, great chap!
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 02, 2008
    Yes, much better now...thank you...and bad shadow taking Jou away from Seto...bad shadow...
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 02, 2008
    Very cute. I don't know who I want to win in your struggle.
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 02, 2008
    Pretty good so far...the last chapter #10 was a bit confusing...but meh...pretty good anyways
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 01, 2008
    I hope this will help Ryou to tell and to heal and get rid of his shadow. I hope Yugi tells his secret too. I understand about crazy work weeks. I am working 60 hours a week now. It's not easy.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 01, 2008
    I loved the chapter. I hope Malik will explain to everyone what is going on. Ryou needs to tell Bakura what his uncle did. Maybe he can let go of some of the pain and get rid of the shadow. Anzu is a bitch and I hope she gets what is coming to her. I hope I can keep up a little better.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 30, 2008
    Good chapter! I like where you're going with this. Hummm, wonder what "deep secrete" Yugi could have, strong enough to create a shadow. Guess I'm going to have to wait till next chapter to find. Later!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 29, 2008
    Good chapter. Not that sloppy, pretty clear. To bad the mutt was found, kinda hoping you'd loose him (well till later, or preferably till the end). Not that's gonna happen though, too many people like seeing Kiaba with a pet. Well, still a great story none the less. Can't wait for the next chapter. C ya.
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  • From TerraRydya on January 28, 2008
    Evil! I love it/ excellent I can't wait to read more
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  • From on January 28, 2008
    Hmmm so I wonder what pain caused the shadow. Yugi's from when Atemu left him? Or Yugi's from when ALL of his friends left him? Or perhaps...YAMI's from when he left Yugi? Oh now that would be intense...The Master of Shadows battling the His own Shadow.

    *grins* Still no Seto/Jou smexin' but I have hopes for at least a smooch or two.

    Maggiemay
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  • From on January 28, 2008
    Anzu eh? Okay sounds good. Honda? Hmmm...he's sort of a ball-less character to me. Don't think he'd have the cajone's to try to go against Atemu and the rest.

    The shadow...hmmm...Did I speculate on that before? I dunno. But lets try this. Seto had a dark creature in his soul and Atemu banished it. Now, since the only critter that has come close to beating Yami, and who controlled a god card, is Seto, could it be Seto's dark shadow that got banished? Just a thought there. It would also explain how it could reside in Jou's heart. He tends to be a loyal pup.

    That is one thought...

    Another, well...Could the shadows be Born of Pain and Betrayal? Could the shadow actually be born of Yugi's loneliness and pain? Who better to defeat Atemu and the others then the shadowed parts of their lights? And if the pain MERGED (fused I think is the correct Duel Monster term for combined monsters) into one shadow IT would be a powerful critter.

    Well those are my thoughts.

    Maggiemay (not 4 am but still jonesing for Seto/Jou)
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  • From redconvoy on January 27, 2008
    What are Honda and Anzu up to? oy! I hope Yami puts a stop to them quickly!
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