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By : YamiKitsune
  • From tavia454 on January 27, 2008
    Yay! Another chap!!!!! Are shadows born of nightmares?! At least that's the impression that I'm getting...This is such an awesome story. Poor Yugi - he's been through so much! All three of them have. *sobs* Hopefully the Yami's will make things better though
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 27, 2008
    Yugi is so insecure. I can't believe his former friends are doing this to them. I still have no idea who is behind it. Unless it is Gozaburo but that really would be a weird thing.
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  • From tavia454 on January 26, 2008
    Oh wow, you put another chapter up while I was hiding under my rock?! Too cool - and now the Yami's are back! Yay! Time to kick some ass.
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 26, 2008
    The shadow is Zorc and Honda is the master. Anzu is the girl. Great chapter. I'm glad the Yamis are back.
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 26, 2008
    Great chapter. Poor Malik, I hope he isn't too badly hurt. The villains? One I think, is Aknudin, Seto's father from the past. The girl I have no clue unless it's Anzu. I think Aknudin could hace the power to take over Jou. Or else, it's Zorc himself. I hope the other items come back soon. having a possessed man in your life is not good.
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  • From TerraRydya on January 25, 2008
    OMG! I want more please.......
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 25, 2008
    I love it! Firstly, because it's here so quickly. Secondly, because it's just a great chapter. Your female villeins, has to be Anzu/Tea it usually is. Followed by Mia Valentine and Rebeca Hawkins. Male villeins Honda/Tristian, RexWevil, Bandit Kieth (usual suspects). Master could be Pegasus,Dartz,Sigfried(spelling)or Zork. Bah, as you can see, I could be very indecisive. So all I have to do, is wait(impatiently),to see what my author has comes up with (I trust it'll be terrific). Love that reunion scene. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! C ya.
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  • From on January 25, 2008
    Hmmm...I have to disagree with Read_right_time. Bring on the Seto/Jou. Rofl. *My name is maggiemay and I am a puppyshipping addict* Okay, on to the review. Very interesting plot and good fun to read. I was bored at 4 am and ran across this. Thank you for the addiction fix. As to who the bad guys are. Hmmm...

    I rule out Seto and Jou simply because Seto doesn't believe in magic crap and Jou is possessed so he's obviously unwilling. The bad guy is human, male and was with them throughout their adventures. Would be either Honda or Otogi. Mokuba wasn't really in their circle so I discount him. I vote Otogi because he is more apt to jealousy and covetousness. The girl - hmmm, Not Mai because Mai is distinctly a woman. That would leave Ribbon, (although not really in the series she is manga), Anzu, and Rebecca. Hmmm...I think I will rule out Rebecca because she is too smart to get involved with shadows. That leaves Anzu.

    So my guesses as to who the bad guys are - Anzu and Otogi (Duke). Probably way way off but I thought I'd give it a try.

    *cough* I KNOW this is gonna sound cliche or trite or something. But for the shadow to hide in Jou's heart...DUMB IDEA ON THE SHADOW MASTER'S PART.

    Will be a bit cramped in there with all the love he has for Seto all bottled up. it is the ultimate puppyshipper in me that says that when that shadow tries to hurt someone and Seto is there and would get hurt too...well lets just say that the shadow is history. LOL...Sorry I have this running scene of the shadow being all psycho and dangerous, spouting off that he's in Jou's heart and Seto rolling his eyes. "Oh is that where you're hiding? As the owner, I am handing you your eviction notice." And with a chibi-eyed and charming look Seto kisses our blond bishi and the shadow sort of poofs...just a scream and *Puff of smoke* shadow gone ...and when the smoke clears Jou's wrapped around Seto playing tonsil hockey. *giggles* *My name is maggiemay and I am a Seto/Jou Addict*

    Hey I'm dangerous at 4 am and bored.

    Great story
    Thank you.
    Maggiemay
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  • From tavia454 on January 24, 2008
    Oohhh! You so suck! That was totally evil! And...Oh please continue!!! Don't drop off the face of the earth like everyone else. Please?! Loved the scene with Bakura and Marik where they bump heads. *snickers* That was great! I'll email you so we can hook up. Later!

    PS Hope you know I'm just kidding about the you suck comment. It was the only thing I could think of when you dropped out like that. ;)
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 24, 2008
    I loved the chapter. Love the closeness between the hikaris, and the Yamis. Honestly can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon. Keep up the great work.
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 23, 2008
    Good chapter. I hope Joey is okay and it is not a trick to get to the hikaris. I hope one of them figures out what is going on and soon.
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  • From tavia454 on January 22, 2008
    I clicked on this story on accident thinking it was something else. Boy was I amazed! This is really great. I like what you've done so far and am looking forward to reading more. If you still need a beta, I can always be convinced to do some grammar nazi work for you. *winks* Good story - please continue?!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 22, 2008
    Neat chapter. Ewwwwwwwwwwwww another cliffie, I like it though. Love the "hakari" discussion the yami's were having. The less Seto/Joey,the better (sorry, can't stand them). Else wise, great chapter over all. Glad you got over block, hope to see more soon. Great story so far!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 20, 2008
    Yayeeee! A good, quick, update. What more could one ask for? C'ept more please. Great story. A pleasure to read.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 19, 2008
    Thankies for the quickie chapter. Glad your willing to continue, regardless of your beta situation. The chapter you wrote is really not that bad. I really only spotted one obvious error (typed since, when you meant sense) other than that it was a pretty well written chapter. Besides, if it's a good story, and is readable, most readers tend to overlook, typo, spelling, grammar, errors. Love your story so far. Continue...soon...please. Later!
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