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Reviews for The Not to distant future

By : YamiKitsune
  • From tinkletimekelly on February 29, 2008
    Oops! Sorry for the late reviews. These chapters(14-17) slipped under my NOTICE. Really, aff.net should get some sort chapter/update alert system. Son, used my lap top and my `highlighted` fics disappeared. Still trying to find stories I`m tracking. Okay, so, about chapters(14-16, haven`t read 17 yet) were well written, and enjoyable. You did manage to bring the whole the whole thing together. Great that the shadows were, the ancient versions of `the group` well done. The destruction of Anzu and Honda was `pleasing`, to say the least. Now I have to go read your finally. Let you know what I think, Later.
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 25, 2008
    Well done...it was a good ending...and sequels are fun
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  • From on February 25, 2008
    Nice ending my dear - ONE mild complaint - WHAT the RAH happened to JOU and SETO. *sobs* Okay anyway - Sequel - well you sent Anzu and Honda to the shadow realm or are they just outright dead? - okay so if Atemu and Akeifa are tied that way - perhaps they can be annoying. A shadow anzu could be a true pest.

    Maggiemay
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 25, 2008
    I loved the whole thing. I don't know about what to put in the sequel but it looks like Marik and Bakura had some sort of relationship in the shadow realm. Having them all involved with each other would be too complicated though. I wonder if they would be able to adopt children or maybe have some of their own.

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  • From AxiaDrake on February 24, 2008
    Yeah it was cool..so its like all three incarnations of them, and you have Malik just the way I have always invisioned him, as three separate people. The child Namu, Marik (malik) who was the one running around Battle City, and Mariku the spirit that did the finals.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 24, 2008
    I loved it. I'm glad Malik survived. The littler version of him is so cute. He was smart to make his new shadow a child. I can think of lots of ways for them all to be 'together' excluding Namu because he's a child. Seems like they are all getting a second chance. Wonderful. I am sorry to see it end too.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 21, 2008
    Good chapter. I'm glad to know who the shdows are. Honda and Anzu will die now. The shdows aren't really the enemies they are part of the others. Great twist.
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 14, 2008
    I liked the chapter. I bet it is something from Atem's past maybe his evil side. I hope they find them quickly and get rid of that bitch and the shadows.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on February 14, 2008
    HI YA!
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 14, 2008
    I liked the chapter. The shadows have taken control of the lights. That is not good. Poor Joey, but at least the shdow left him.
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  • From tavia454 on February 13, 2008
    Uh-oh cliffie! Damn it! *sighs* I'm so impatient when it comes to reading, but I'll get over it. I just hope that the yami's will be able to rescue their lights before its too late!
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  • From tavia454 on February 13, 2008
    Holy shit! I made it back on to aff!!! Whoa, and I almost thought I wouldn't be able to find it, it's been so long since I've been on here! Lovely chap! Poor Yugi, he really got the shit end of the deal as far as parents go! And Yami needs to be more supportive! Poor kid, he's all screwed up!
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 08, 2008
    Good chapter. Poor Yugi. I hope he will tell Yami and Yami can take away some of his pain. He didn't kill his mother on purpose, it was self defense. Grat work.
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  • From AxiaDrake on February 08, 2008
    Thank you for the update...and I think once Yugi understands that what he did was in self defence he will be light again
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  • From dragonlady222 on February 08, 2008
    I would love a story of Yugi's and Ryou's past. I hope I can keep up. RL is a pain in the ass. Poor litte Yugi his mother sounds mentally ill. His father is an ass.
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