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Reviews for Lies

By : hello2030088
  • From Calcifer on May 13, 2008
    English isn't your first language? Lies. You did an amazing job with this.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ImmuneSys on February 05, 2008
    First fic, really? Wow, color me impressed. Great work--honestly, it's not obvious that English isn't your first language; there are a few small technical errors, but they're fewer than in some fics I've read by native speakers. The story itself overshadows any errors there might be, anyway. Really, this is an adorable and awesome and sad puzzleshipping fic, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Great job!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on January 25, 2008
    Wow! I don't how I missed this. If this is your first effort, I can't wait to see, what your "next" effort looks like. Good Luck with your writing. Hoping to see more of your work. And welcome to the site "puzzleshipper", your sorely needed.
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  • From dragonlady222 on January 25, 2008
    My that was so hot. A first fic should not be so excellent and I would not be able to tell that English is not your first language. You did much, much better than some native speakers.
    Your story brought me almost to tears. It was so joyful with their happiness and love and so sad because they had to part.
    Great story.
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  • From tavia454 on January 24, 2008
    That was really hot! Nice for a first!!!
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  • From Sacuna on January 24, 2008
    *Is speechless*

    . . . wow. Just wow!

    *Is never speechless for long ^_^*
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  • From blackberry on January 24, 2008
    OMG!!!It was great.It was one of the bests.Plz keep writing but I read only puzzleshipping
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  • From RayeMoon on January 24, 2008
    First fanfic? Oh, honey, that was so beautiful, I was sure you had more. That was...so creative, and hot, and loving. Beautiful. I love how Yugi is on top. I love a seme-Yugi over Yami. His game was wonderful. And there's another word to describe this story. Sad! Aw, poor Yugi. Am I right in assuming it's alluding to the fact that Yami leaves at the end of the series?
    Oh, please, write more stories. You have me hooked already! Jaa.
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  • From AxiaDrake on January 23, 2008
    Nice..and sweet at the same time...well done
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