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Reviews for Yami's and Hikari's

By : YamiKitsune
  • From ANON - Kiochii on November 27, 2015
    chapter 5 (chapter 4) Is missing for some reason D: -sobs- although I love the story but still I want the missing chapter Dx!!!! its like being taunted with delicious food yet not being able to eat it all.
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  • From shadowrealm818 on June 08, 2012
    Hi I'm really enjoying this story but I can't seem to access chapter 4. I'm not sure if it loaded properly when it was posted and I've tried refreshing the page and everything.

    Thanks shadowrealm818
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  • From manganime on September 12, 2009
    When are you going to update the next chapter!? thank you very much...
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  • From NAnderson on August 20, 2008
    yeah an update!!!!!!! (i cant wait 2 c the fan art 4 this by the way) and yes uve slowed down with ur updating, but u r still updating which is more then i can say 4 some people on this site... myself included lol... life can b such a pain, stopping the creation or good yaoi... stupid life... lol...
    Again poor malik gets the short end of the stick... and is it me or dose it feel like little ryou isnt getting enough camera time? and have i ever told u how much i hat chiffys?????? CAUSE I DO XP !!!! cliffys r teasing and teasing isnt nice lol. well u did update so u do get a cookie! and im glad to hear that ur already onto the next chapter. so same time tomorrow?... maybe same time next week?...... >.< ok, ok how about same time next month?.... pretty please with yaoi on top????
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  • From wiccacat18 on August 19, 2008
    THAT WAS A BAD ENDING TO A CHAPTER. It was too sad of and ending as well. I liked the rest of the chapter. Keep going I want to know what happens next.
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  • From dragonlady222 on August 19, 2008
    I really like this story. Sorry I didn't find it before. I hope Marik doesn't hurt Malik.
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  • From ANON - kate on June 24, 2008
    A very good chapter, I like the whole story so far.... Can't wait until the next chapter.... plz update soon, ne...!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - ForeverNever on June 17, 2008
    Yay! Great story! I love how you give each pair their shared part in it. This is just... not too long or detailed but not too short and plain (hope it don't sound wrong). It's perfect! ^_^ And even Bakura's growing softer. I like that. He's always last and it takes so very long for him and Ryou but I'm hoping it will be different here, if just a little. Not that I would want to interfere with your plans... ^_~ Oh, and make Yugi and Yami really sweet together, make it a chase, a game. And keep Malik a bit afraid of Marik and have him struggle into the last. :D
    Sorry, couldn't resist wishing. :P
    Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - debs on June 14, 2008
    awesome fic :) loving it so far ^^ update update!!!
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  • From zombiebait86 on June 11, 2008
    I know the feeling took me three months to find a new job after I moved out of my parents house >.< sucks! so many bills! still looking?
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  • From NAnderson on June 11, 2008
    YAY!! AN UPDATE!!!!! It feels like its been forever! Did u come down with a case of writers block or did life become a factor? lol. Yami and Yugi just keep getting cuter and cuter together. And can I point out just how funny the picture I have in my head of Malik jumping Bakura is??!!! LOL TO rich.... I love it. Well I hope ur not getting stuck anywhere in the plot. Go have a lemon (Yummy lemon) cookie and then get us out a new chapter! U love me, so u cant hate me 4 being demanding.... please remember that! lol.
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  • From wiccacat18 on June 11, 2008
    Thank you for the update. I love this chapter by the way. It is really starting to move a long now. I look forward to more of this story. I almost can't wait for Yugi and Yami, Bakura and Ryou, And Mailk and Marik to get together.
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  • From zombiebait86 on February 25, 2008
    .....Ryou'a ganna catch a could....well I have one right now so we'll be cold buddies.
    J-chaN
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  • From NAnderson on February 23, 2008
    more updates -yes- and im glad u like typing my name. Most people hate it because it's so long lol. And just a side note on the pain thing... well let me put it this way: Just as u r a review whore, i am an angst whore. as long as there is a happy ending! i love to see the little guys in tears- physical and emotional. And poor Ryou is still stuck in the tower??? Y?? I think u should have kept typing until he was out of his tower too. hump yes i am just trying to get a longer chapter out of u. So what? And for some reason im seeing the hikaris seeing each other and hugging and the yamis being very jealous and graby with the little ones. Sorry random mind going random places. And not having a story planned out is a good thing. It leaves the story open to anything, and u can do what ever u want with the story when ever u want. Now this review is going on way to long so let me say Love the story, UPDATE soon, the whole nine yards, u know lol. LaTer then!
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  • From wiccacat18 on February 22, 2008
    Oh I hope Ryou well get something to eat soon. This is a happy and sad chapter. Thank you for the update.
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