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Reviews for The Draconian Sapphire

By : AxiaDrake

From ANON - Tif on March 22, 2008
Woot! Another chapter! Love it. Though sometimes I must admit all the stuff with the gods is a little confusing at times, I'm not very knowledgable on that stuff so I have to read it a few times. But even still it's a great detail for the story, another element, you know? I'm anxious for the next chapter!
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From CodyMThomas on March 20, 2008
SQUEE!!!!!! This chapter was SOOO flipping HOT! OMG! I love love LOVE this! woohoo! Uke Seto FTW!and in the shower at that... my fave!oooh you just GUARANTEED that I'm gonna be having a good day! THANK YOU!
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From CodyMThomas on March 20, 2008
Ok, I'm gonna be bluntly honest, but this is not a flame! I love you, and I would never flame you for any reason! I adore your story and I WILL continue reading it because I enjoy it so much, however, you just broached one of the few things I really have a near complete intolerance of. I'm sorry, it's not your fault, but I HATE Male pregnancy. There have only been two stories I've ever read with Male pregnancy and actually LIKED and one of them I still put down without finishing.

There's two things about it that just drive me up the wall, one can be worked around, the other cannot. First I just dislike it in general since it's unrealistic and then the author has to try and invent ways to make it plausible, (Most of the time they just ignore this part altogether though) this is the part that can be worked around with me, even if I dislike a genre, if it's written well enough I will still read it and possibly even enjoy it. I am a complete sucker for a well written story, no matter what it is, if it can pull me in, I love it.

However what I can't stand is the disturbing trend I have noticed of how a good story with a strong plot and well developed characters completely dissolves and falls apart into complete and utter silliness and stupidity in the span of a few short chapters the moment they decide to make a male character pregnant. I have lost a LOT of good stories to this, not just a couple, so please tread very carefully.

You have a beautiful story here, there's still soooo much you could do with it, don't let this new twist disturb that in ANY way. I'm not going away, I'm going to keep reading because I trust you as an author, so don't let me down! ^_^
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From KikiItemri on March 20, 2008
Oh...My...God! Uke Seto...*drool* That has to be one of the hottest things ever. Though, in a perfect world, if I was with him, I would gladly be the uke to his seme. XDDD Seme Jou is equally hot. *fans self* I am gonna have dreams of this scene. Thank you! Hehe. Okay that my fangirl episode is over...Zeus was awesome! I can only imagine Soloman's reaction to finding out he is going to be a great-grandfather. Let's just hope the heart attack from the shock doesn't kill him. Hehe. I can only imagine what a preggers Yugi and a preggers Jou will be like. I can't wait! Hmmm...you know, if you end up making Seto and Jou have a girl, it would make the joke of Asuka from GX being Seto and Jou's child even better. *gives you a Seto plushie* Update soon! I can't wait!
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From ANON - Celeste on March 17, 2008
That was so sweet. I love it that Seto is reluctant to sleep without Joey even though he is hurt.

Ooo I would love to see a preggers Joey. ^___^
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From melodyz07 on March 17, 2008
It seems also that there will be malepregnancy in the story since Yuugi is pregnant now^^' ( I though it will be only about Yuugi but since he is the "queen"^^... but from Alan was thinking... it seems Jou will also be "pregnant"...)
weeeeell... I don't like at all malepregrancy... but well if you find that it would be better for your story... it is ok I guess. I mean, I like your story and the plot (even if there will be malepregrancy) and I'll be reading it till the end.
So finally... I'm curious to see how all this is going on...^^
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From melodyz07 on March 17, 2008
Great chapter! I like how this story is going on^^
Love the fluff between Seto and Jou when they were in bed. This is sooooooooooooo cute.
As for Johfrit, I wonder if he is gonna get his soulmate back... I really pity him. And I think he is a great character in this story.

And by the way, I loved how you are interacting religions in this story; I mean Johfrit and Boris being christians and having to follow the orders of the Christian lord and Jono and Seth following the rules of the egyptian religion. That makes the story complicated but rich and very interesting. I like that.
But I want to ask you; what is actually the religion of Seto and Jou? I mean, ok they seem to follow the ones of Jono and Seth but they are they live in the modern world where the Egyptian religion is not practically followed anymore. And they don't seem christians so they believe in what actually? They were atheists before all this happened?

I really do like this story. I hope that you will continue it till the end.
Update!
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From KikiItemri on March 17, 2008
Okay, I couldn't stop laughing at Yugi's reaction to finding out he is pregnant. I had to stop reading for a few minutes cuz I was laughing so much. So Joey, Jono, and possibly the others are gonna get pregnant too? That would be so awesome. XD I can only picture a pregnant Joey eating double the amount that he does now. Hehe, I can't wait to see how the others react to Yugi being preggers. Now on a completely non-chapter related note...*bounces excitedly for the lemon* I can't wait!! Oh, just as a random thought, if you need any info on pregnancy or how people feel/think/act when they are preggers, feel free to AIM me or e-mail me. I just had a baby at the end of January so I should be able to give you any info you may want or need. Just thought I would offer since researching things can be tedious sometimes.
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From Lionessmon on March 16, 2008
Brilliant I love possesive Seto. The Lemon with Yugi and Atemu was very good and in my opinion you did keep with the purity of the action. Pregnant Yugi will be fun. Keep up the great work and post soon. Also I am Irish so if you need any help with the Gaelic language I will be happy to help.
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From CodyMThomas on March 15, 2008
"Cody_Thomas - Never try to prepare for what I have in store, cause it is ALWAYS gonna be what you least expect."
awww at least let me try! :D I like the fact that Yugi and Atem finally got through that! oooh I hope you update soon!
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From melodyz07 on March 15, 2008
That is so interesting. I didn't know that Johfrit has his own soulmate also... I mean I though he was for Seth and Seto...but that makes sense after all. If Jono has his own soulmate, why Johfrit doesn't have the right to have his own one? I wonder what is gonna happen next. And by the way, I loved Seto's reaction when he knew that Johfrit was the one kissing him. I really do love his reaction. It is so funny. And it is so sweet to know that he only sees Jou^^ But I wonder if he is gonna change his mind later on. And if Johfrit is gonna make some pressure on him... I mean he is not an easy guy and it seems that he always get what he wants.
As for Boris, he is from one of Seto's past life, right? Obviously yes, but I was a little bit confused because Boris doesn't look like Seto and Seth.
And I wonder if the yakuzas are gonna appear again.

Continue! I hope that you are gonna be able to update weekly
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From KikiItemri on March 12, 2008
Oh man, I absolutely love Johfrit. Too bad he's not a cannon character. I would love to see more of him everywhere. XD Awesome idea on getting the other soulmates back. Too bad they don't all look like Seto and Seth. That would have been totally awesome, but the idea of a female Seto and Seth i very hot for some reason. Also, you did a great job on the Yugi/Atem lemon. I don't usually like the pairing too much, but I actually enjoy how you portray it, and having Yugi be in charge was amazingly hot. I am so addicted to this fic. Keep it up! I can't wait to see more. :)
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From ANON - Angela on March 10, 2008
Hey all, if anyone is reading this an is wondering what's up with our girl Tatiana...well she wanted me to let you all know that she's going to updating as soon as she can. In fact she's going to try for this Wed.

Ta,
Angela
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From Lionessmon on March 01, 2008
Brilliant, Seto will be surprised and not too happy about it either, not at first anyway. Great work I love the detail you put into your characters backgrounds an how they managed to live together without raising suspicion. Keep up the great work and post soon.
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From ANON - Silver Venice Itemri Ishtar on February 28, 2008
YOSH!! I love it! Joh is in love with Seto!! HOW SWEET!!!

I love it, and look forward to more!
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