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By : tavia454
  • From ANON - Rae on March 08, 2008
    Just for refrence I hate you! Which oddly is a good thing. It means that your story is good...I guess I'm just freaky like that. But I want an update!!! I want to know what happens!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on March 08, 2008
    Okay, I'll admit, you had me in tears during this chapter. A feat that hasn't been accomplished in a long time. What got me hardest was the scene in the bedroom Yami sitting by the window, Yami, as sick as he was, trying to go out, Yami admitting his fear that Yugi wasn't coming home, losing hope. The chapter was so sad. Christmas, worst time of the year for families with resent "losts".
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  • From ANON - cosmic tomato on March 08, 2008
    Aww I just had to do it didn't I? I must be turning into the world's biggest sap!!! I shed a couple of tears during this chappie...the interaction between Atemu,Bakura and Marik was so well written and to add the doubt for the reason they hated him just made it. I loved the talk between the old man and Mokuba.
    I hope they find Yugi soon, I know this is supposed to be 'dark' but please don't torture the poor boy too much...
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 08, 2008
    I love it. Poor Yami and Yugi, just as they were realising that they loved each other. Well, Yami was realising that Yugi loved him. I hope they can get him back.
    Sorry for the late review. My first day off on working eleven in a row. Sixty hours a week doesn't leave much time for anything. Darn RL getting in the way. Great story.
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  • From LeilaLogan on March 04, 2008
    Okay, so against my better judgement because I know this is gonna be a dark fic and I hate angst... I still read the first chap. As long as you don't make me cry or bite my fingernails in suspense of what you're gonna be putting the chars through next, I think I'll keep reading... when you do make that happen I'm sooooo outta here *pouts*

    Well, Yuugi's an idiot for running out like that. He needs to read the script; then he would've known Atemu loves him back XD but nooooo, Yuugi didn't read the script first. Now see what happens when you don't do that?! Tsk, bad main character! Bad! No cookies for you *nods*

    All my craziness put aside though, good job on the first chap and although I'm sure I'll regret putting this down later when the fic goes angsty, update soon! Talk to you later.

    Moony
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  • From YamiKitsune on March 03, 2008
    you bet your ass i'm ganna review this!!! ^-^ I didn't see who the author was until I finished reading! I LOVE IT! ^-^ hehehe. Yugi torture. Just as good as Malik or Ryou torture~!
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  • From ANON - cosmic tomato on March 03, 2008
    Hey it's another 'going to be a story' from the pen of Tavi.

    I'm glad your not giving up on fts I'm enjoying that immensely...I know I haven't reviewed it yet but I will I promise.

    as for Yamiyugi...Here's a challenge for you...Instead of trashing other peoples stories why don't you try and write an 'original story' yourself, you will find it's not that easy, and I doubt you will find anything original to write, I think everythings been covered...
    Take my advice, if you don't like a story do what I do, keep my mouth shut and don't read any more, see it's simple.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on March 02, 2008
    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ! A new fic. Can't wait for more. Later
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  • From HannaFO on March 02, 2008
    Nice story... I hope Atemu will find Yugi in time!!
    Please continue!??
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  • From DarkAmorpheous on March 02, 2008
    What the heck is with you? For a Yami and Yugi fan you bloody well love to torture them!!! Gods does everyone on this site fantasize about rape, sick cults and kidnapping? If so, I don't know what the fuck I'm doing here, it's getting beyond a joke. Do you know how many stories I have read where and this is so cliche, Yami and Yugi are in love with each other but too afraid to say anything, Yami stays because of Yugi, they start to get close only for someone to either kidnap/rape Yugi, Yugi then gets returned and he's not an innocent Hikari anymore, the light is gone from his soul, he and Yami admit their feelings but they can't do anything because Yugi is too broken, they can't make love. This is so cliche and so pathetic, for gods sake will someone please write something original, you know think up an original storyline.
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