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Reviews for Angel of Mine

By : tavia454
  • From Calcifer on June 26, 2008
    I almost laughed out loud when the guy saw Atemu in The Room. I knew right away it was part of their vengeance. *smirk* that guy definitely deserves what's coming to him.

    It was pretty mean (and funny) the way Bakura and Marik decided that Atemu would be the bait without consulting him first. XD

    Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From tinkletimekelly on June 26, 2008
    OOOOOPS! I read this at 1:00am on the 24th. I swear I thought I commented. S'pecially about the part were Atemu ripped off a guys balls and stuffed them in the guys mouth while said guy was screaming in pain. Then above all, left the entire mess for Bakura and Marik to clean up. NICE! Must of erased it, when head hit keyboard in sleep. Can't wait to see what you have in store next.
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  • From ANON - Kanki on June 26, 2008
    Oh em gee. Please tell me that you're going to finish this~! I thought it was going to be stupid at first (no offense, but angsty stories usually ARE dumb) but then I was like, "This is AMAZING." I love how you two portray the characters. I love how there are bits of humor sprinkled in with everything. The sex scene/s between Yami and Yugi was/were fantastic, by the way. Good job. Also: This is my first review to any authors on this site, so feel special! Keep up the good work, please!
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  • From ANON - EternalDragon on June 25, 2008
    Your story is good, but in chpt 14, that ball ripping scene was really contrary and counter productive to your point of having to keep that guy alive for whatever plan those Yami's have. How exactly is someone whos bleeding profusely from having an organ ripped out going to live?
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  • From ANON - kate on June 25, 2008
    Yay an update.... This story/chapter is really good.... Yes he is finally getting what he deserves....
    plz update soon, ne...!!! ^_^
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  • From AxiaDrake on June 25, 2008
    Shoving the creeps 'you know what' into his mouth was definitely a stroke of genius. Good update, though when you switched scenes it did leave me thinking, "Did I miss something?"
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  • From ANON - Snickerdoodle on June 25, 2008
    KJFU&*#^RYHFRI!!! I'm sooooo happy with the update! I've been checking everyday and today was my lucky day! I loved it, and OMG I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT OUR TRIO HAS IN STORE FOR ALL THOSE LOW LIVES!!! I can't adequately express how much i love you right now! Please update soon!
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  • From CodyMThomas on June 25, 2008
    YES YES YES YES YEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!! Woohooo! Go Yami! Best desecration of a pervert EVER! Thank you GODS! I am SOOO happy they are finally getting some blasted payback on these assholes! I hope you update this soon it's such a great sotry, i love every single second of it!

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  • From CodyMThomas on June 25, 2008
    I MISSED a chapter?! how the HELL did I miss a chapter?! I've been reading religiously! but hey, means I get to read two today! Ok this once was incredible! I mean, super scary WHOA incredible. A single angry yami is a terrifying image all on its own, but to have 3 of them in a super deluxe pissed off frame of mind... *shudder* I would pity those two if they weren't bastards who deserved every second of this. now off to the next chapter!
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 24, 2008
    Great chapter. I am glad Atemu did that. Bakura and Marik were having way too much fun at Atemu's expense. I hope those other kids and that little lady will be okay. I hope Yugi will be alright with going back to that place.
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  • From siana on June 24, 2008
    Oooh this just keeps on getting better and better, but what I want to know is how the hell do you manage to keep the humour when they are torturing someone? It beats the hell outta me…
    The thought of Yami in a thong all tied up…ooh the imagination just runs wild *snicker* (slaps wrist) And that last part, remind me never to cross you and catti, you two are evil, good ain’t it…*grins* more of the same please.
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  • From ANON - CandyCaneLane on June 20, 2008
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! I AM SO LOVING THIS!!! I check everyday to see if there's been an update! I WILL DIE IF THERE ISN'T MOAR!
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  • From ANON - snickerdoodle on June 09, 2008
    I don't even know what to say. I haven't been on AFF in so long and i had a sudden wave of nostalgia and really wanted to read some YGO fics. I used to come here all the time to read and i found this gem! Literally stayed up all night and read from beginning to chapter 13. I'm in love! It's written so well! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS! I can't wait for more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Diayma on June 08, 2008
    very good! There's something about Yami, Marik, and Bakura getting revenge on the same person that is imminently satisfying. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Crazy Physco from funny farm on June 07, 2008
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
    THIS IS THE FIRST FANCFIC THAT I HAVE GOTTEN HOOKED ON!!!
    AND I MEAN HOOKED!!!
    I HAVE A FISH HOOK IN MY SIDE!!!!
    THAT IS HOW HOOKED I AM ON IT!!!
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