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Reviews for Angel of Mine

By : tavia454
  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on June 06, 2008
    I liked it, but I have to admit I sort of skimmed through the torture bit. Especially after the ATM thing...bad mental images...
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  • From tinkletimekelly on June 06, 2008
    Can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From Kitsuko on June 06, 2008
    Please... PLEASE POST!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW THE END!!!!!!
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  • From AxiaDrake on June 06, 2008
    Absolutely amazing in it's grotesqueness...the chapter really hits home that the three darks are a force to be reckoned with and NOT to be messed with
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  • From Calcifer on June 06, 2008
    NOOOOOOO!!!! Cliffhanger! Aaaahhhh!

    I kept checking repeatedly everyday, and was overjoyed to find an update this time. ^^ I was so lookig forward to Atemu's vengeance, but at least we got to see a taste of what's up coming. Heh. Marik had his fun. And the psychological torture of seeing just what they did to that doctor was truly inspired. I can't wait to see what you guys come up with next.

    Once again, a superior chapter. I really look forward to what you come up with next.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 06, 2008
    Great chapter. I really love this story. Too bad Marik, Bakura and Atem are not available for the torture of all pedophiles. I can't wait until they get the big boss and free the other kids. Their anger will know no bounds. I'm glad his friends are there for them and so supportive.
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  • From zombiebait86 on June 06, 2008
    ....**blink**wait...what?!? EVIL! thats a mean cliff hanger T-T......X3 hehe you rock!
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  • From siana on June 05, 2008
    Heh heh I know WHAT was I thinking ^___^ *bows down to your superior story telling*

    The scene downstairs with Mokuba, Seto and Joey was priceless the thing is I can actually picture Mokuba doing that! I liked the little bit of humour before the nasty stuff.
    I think that now Bakura and Atemu know there are other victims it's gonna get messy and a 'nasty' Yugi nope can't imagine it but seriously I don't blame him in the least...
    It was also heartwarming to see Joey putting Yugi at ease with bringing him up to date just the sort of thing I think he'd do.

    As for the scenes in the apartment...EWWW THAT was nasty! and talk about descriptive *shudder* It's gonna give me nightmares (it's 1.25am here). But still they deserve everything they get, more of the same please...


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  • From RayeMoon on June 04, 2008
    Hot, hot, hot! Wow! I'm so sorry that it had to happen this way, the two of them being forced into it, but was it ever hot. I'm so glad that they two of them got to finally have sex and that Yugi realized it doesn't always have to be about pain and dominance. Aw, Atemu offering himself to Yugi to prove that he is not a toy and that he can be on top, too. That was really nice. Poor Yugi having to get fucked raw because the drug doesn't want to wear off. Was Atemu's time on his back the only one and the drug is now worn off? I guess it would have to be, you can't have them in bed for the rest of the story. This is so hot and I hope that they aren't plagued with too much more angst before the final revenge and some more lemony goodness. Love this story, tavi.
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  • From AxiaDrake on May 28, 2008
    Amazing lemon...so hot
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  • From CodyMThomas on May 28, 2008
    WOW that chapter was absolutely Beautiful! so much pretty loving, so much sexy and you even had Yugi on top! hooray! I can't WAIT to see what they do to the two they catch, although they are going to have to starts being sneaky, maybe using the shadow realm to dispose of the bodies, because lots of people dying (whether they are scum or not) tends to get noticed by local authority figures...
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  • From ANON - Sacuna on May 27, 2008
    Hahaha! That was awesome! I couldn't stop laughing after Bakura yelled at them to 'tone it down'!
    *Wipes tears from eyes* Anyway, sorry I haven't been commenting. I haven't been on in awhile. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cosmic Tomato on May 27, 2008
    Wow I can't believe you pulled it off! (I should have known) The way you managed to turn what was a nasty trick played by two creeps into something that would help Yami show Yugi how things should be done, even to the point of offering himself to Yugi so as not to hurt the boy by taking him again. Also the humour that followed between Bakura and Ryou after they had broken into the room was great I loved it!
    Now let's hope Yami and Bakura can get some answers in the most painful way possible...
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on May 27, 2008
    (O_O) Oh...my god. Awesome.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 27, 2008
    Really hot chapter. Things are really heating up both with Yami and Yugi and with the revenge. I hope they find out what they need to know before sending those scumbags to the Shadows. Great chapter.
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