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Reviews for Angel of Mine

By : tavia454
  • From tinkletimekelly on May 26, 2008
    Read it there (ff.net). Read it here. Loved it (chapter) both times. Nice work "ladies". C ya!!! tinkletimekelly
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  • From Calcifer on May 26, 2008
    *drool* lemony goodness...

    Heh. I'd love to see what you're gonna cook up as vengeance on those two guys in the apartment. I very much look forward to the next chapter!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From RayeMoon on May 20, 2008
    Hi, tavi. Thanks for your review on my story. I'm glad to be back. I've caught up with your story. I'm really, really glad that Yugi is home, his memories intact, safe if not sound. Or, at least, somewhat safe. Oh, please, don't have him raped again. Poor Yugi, he's just now starting to return to normal after everything that happened to him. And poor Atemu, having Yugi being so sexy around him, so attempting to seduce him because he's been trained that way. And now he finds Yugi kneeling on his bed, pleasuring himself. I do hope he didn't leave. And something tells he that he didn't, considering that you ended the chapter there. At least let them have some erotic experience together, even if they don't have actual intercourse. And I'm a little confused on the bit with the drug. Unless--and I think you mentioned this somewhere--that the two freaks are there watching, somehow. Why else would they have bothered spiking the spiky-haireds if they weren't going to watch the action?
    Oh, oh, please have all of these bastards just die in pieces. Please? Jaa!
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  • From CodyMThomas on May 19, 2008
    I am! I am! I'd LOVE some fluff! although Yami fingering Yugi until he comes would be billions of awesome, I don't think that's quite what you have in mind... Either way I HOPE you update soon, you have no idea how much I love this story and how badly I can't WAIT to see those two die... you know they boys are gonna have to be careful, all these dead bodies popping up and their only connection is Yugi... it's bound to raise some suspicions...
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on May 18, 2008
    I thought they were going to drug them to sleep so that they could sneak in the house and kidnap them, it never crossed my mind that they would slip that kind of drug into the drink. I'm liking the way this is going and I can't wait until the next update.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 18, 2008
    Wonderful, I'm glad that psychiatrist got his punishment. Now they need to catch those two possibly as they are voyeuristically watching Yugi. I'm glad Atemu had enough precense to call Bakura and to leave the room. I can't wait for the mayhem to commence, but fluff is nice.
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  • From Calcifer on May 18, 2008
    Fluff! woohoo! Everybody loves fluff. And then gore will be a lovely contrast.

    Another superior chapter. I love the build up. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - Cosmic Tomato on May 18, 2008
    Noooo! Yugi can't turn himself over it'll break him, don't you dare!
    It was a good chapter though, poor Yugi those two guys coming for him can't be good.
    Even the thought of someone spiking a drink like that turns my stomach. (It's such a shame that things like that do happen in real life...)
    I'm glad the so called 'Doctor' got what he deserved, knowing Bakura and Marik they didn't hold back...

    Okay then I've got the nuts, chips and the Bacardi now bring on the fluff and gore!!!
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  • From AxiaDrake on May 18, 2008
    Such a teaser...and good update
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  • From zombiebait86 on May 14, 2008
    **waits for Yami to get the bad guys....has popcorn waiting**
    J-chan
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  • From siana on May 12, 2008
    Yay finally!! Yami has confessed his feelings for Yugi, the way that whole part was written you could almost feel the anguish the pair were going through...

    Please, Please PLEASE tell me that that monster is NOT going to get hold of Yugi again, I think that would finish him...as for the Doctor, Let the retribution begin. (Three yami's + revenge = funtime...bring it on I can't wait!!)

    Can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From AxiaDrake on May 11, 2008
    Simply amazing update...well worth the wait.

    And if I have been a guess of your behaviour...that doctor is SO gunna get it
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on May 11, 2008
    Finally! Atemu told him he loved him! Yay! And now he's gonna kill the bastards that did that to Yugi! I know this is only a story, but I still want to see them pay.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 11, 2008
    Wonderful chapter. I look forward to their revenge on those bastards. Whatever they do it will not be enough!! Happy Mothers Day.
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  • From CodyMThomas on May 11, 2008
    GAH! god damn that was a good chapter! I adored it! and I sense a Yami scheme coming about, a very manga-esque Yami scheme at that.,, ooooh I can't Wait for more! I am so Totally hooked on this story!
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