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By : tavia454
  • From AxiaDrake on April 20, 2008
    Still an amazing story, and always look forward to your fare...
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  • From ANON - Johny Depp on April 20, 2008
    only one word can describe this story:
    A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
    and only one word can describe it's author:
    K-I-L-L-E-R
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 20, 2008
    Yami, you are WORLDS stronger than I could EVER to be able to resist temptation THAT strong... I'm sorry, mostly nude Yugi draping his naked ass over my lap to be spanked...dear gods you have a will of Steel!


    Thank you thank you thank you for lovely updates and lovely mental images! I adored this chapter!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 20, 2008
    Poor Yugi. Those memories are really making it hard. I hope haveing Atemu there to reassure him and no punishments for accidents will help him to unlearn all those stupid lessons. I'm glad he is keeping himself under control. Yugi is not ready for that even when it is with love.
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  • From zombiebait86 on April 20, 2008
    Great chapter ^-^
    J-chan
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  • From RayeMoon on April 18, 2008
    Oh, gods, is this getting warped! Oh, poor Yugi! Gods, Tavi, you make me cry. Poor Yugi! I can't hardly continue reading every time he calls Atemu master. And the scenes of memories, gods, they're so horrible. Makes you really appreciate your own life, where that stuff doesn't happen to you. And Atemu, how it must be to know your precious light thinks you're nothing but a raping, beating bastard and so far gone that he not only expects it but almost wants it! This story is so good, but so very dark. I do hope there's some light coming. Not that there hasn't been some already. Yugi is safe and home now, though I about fainted when Dr. Johanssen took him home. It's it scary how that stuff happens? How no one thinks to question an 'authority' figure? Where were the guards?
    Your punishment scene made my stomach churn, but at the same time I was thinking, yes! How wonderfully, horribly great. Exactly what he deserved, to have to skin his own penis that way. Poetic justice is there ever was one. I hope every single mother-effer in this story that hurt Yugi or tried to hurt Yugi goes down in the same bleeding, screaming way.
    Dr. Moran, did I miss something? Where did he come from? I'm sorry, I've read every chapter, but he just seemed to appear. If he's as bad as I think he is, I hope he dies, too. But the person I hope dies most is the brother from Ch. 5 that left Yugi to die. He's even worse than the first master. Oh, and the kidnappers. Everyone! Let them all die screaming, please, Tavi.
    Now that the bloodlust is out of the way, oh, I hope Yugi gets better soon. At least enough to know that Atemu is NOT his master and is in no way related to those asses of before. I just want to cry when Yugi begs him for rape. He's so mixed up inside that he thinks he wants it, deserves it. This story is unrelenting in its heart-jerking darkness. But don't think I'm critizing it. It's exactly what it's been made out to be. Dark, bone-chilling, stomach-churning. And yet, you've set it up so beautifully for the light at the end of the tunnel, no pun intended. It's wonderful, Tavi. I hope you continue it (as I know you will). Jaa!
    P.S. Maybe a happy one-shot, to ease the tension? :-) Just because I'm a little worried about you, what with your father's death (and your friend's). I hope you're doing better, I really do. You asked me once if people get over it. Unfortunately as well as fortunately, they do. They must. And doing so is in no way a betrayal of your father (and friend). Remember, I'm sure he would have wanted you to get better. I think it might be too late, and I'm going to warn you in advance in case you don't think you'll be able to handle the bittersweetness, but I'm posting a non-sexual one-shot for you to read, whenever you think you want to. I hope I do this right and it helps. Jaa, again.
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  • From Calcifer on April 14, 2008
    So that's why Yugi never spoke. Also, it's kinda depressing how Yugi can't seem to grasp the fact that he neither has no needs a master. His mind is really screwed up. I hope he gets better. Update soon!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 13, 2008
    YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! *Happy dance* Thank the GODS that man died a slow and very painful death! Only they should have tried torturing some information out of him first, then they could have gone straight to the source... but hunting them down one by one will be quite fun too, really make the others sweat as their numbers decrease and they don't know who's doing it or who will die next, probably even turn on each other trying to find someone, ANYONE to blame since the Yami's are the only witnesses. Yugi might even be able to point out a place or two where he was held. Oooh this story is soooooo good and you gave us such a nice long chapter this time thank you thank you thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed your trip! I can't WAIT for the next one!

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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on April 13, 2008
    That bastard deserved every bit of what came to him. I was mesmerized by this chapter, and I'm really glad Yugi is finally home. Now the process of regaining his former memories can begin. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 13, 2008
    Poor Yuugi has suffered a lot more than anyone should. I don't think that idiot rapist/pedophile suffered nearly enough. I hope the rest of them do. Yuugi needs a lot of help, I hope Atemu is up to it. Great work.
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  • From FlightOfTheShadow on April 13, 2008
    Damn straight rapists deserve to be ripped apart by the shadows and made to beg 'till they wet themselves. Those people are the worst types of humans- so glad you dealt with him accordingly. I hope the same thing will happen to the others that hurt Yuugi. *Hugs plushie* Don't cry Yuugi-chan!!! >_
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  • From tinkletimekelly on April 13, 2008
    That is exactly what should happen to those who prey on the "weaker" or "innocent" of our society. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of them. Hope Atemu and Yugi can find their way to each other. All in all it's another great chapter. I really am looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing. Later.
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  • From AxiaDrake on April 12, 2008
    Such sweet...sweet revenge...made my day!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2008
    oh, my, god!..............................
    I DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!! science I started reading this I couldn't stop till I finished what was written if you leave me hanging I'm not responsible for what I do!
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 07, 2008
    Hopefully not that scuzzy doctor, the shrink, the guy who tried to kill Yugi, the one who whored him out, anyone who raped or beat him, and the guys who caught him. They ALL should die slow, horrible, and absolutely excruciating deaths brought about in the most creative ways possible. (I have EXTENSIVE knowledge on the subject of torture should you need any help.)

    And I'm so glad that Yugi is finally awake! I know he's kinda out of it, and doesn't remember anyone, and it's really really horrible and tragic that he's been broken and 'trained' so thoroughly, but this tiny little part of me is just on a repetitive SQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEE! about Yugi thinking of Yami as his master! OOOH I LOVE that tiny little thought so much! It's my little silver lining through all of this until some serious punishment starts getting meted out in very large doses!
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