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By : tavia454
  • From ShadowsOfFear on April 07, 2008
    I asbolutely love the story so far. You've done a great job protraying Yugis distress as well as the others. I can't WAIT for the next chapter. Please hurry??? Much love! -Cyn
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  • From tinkletimekelly on April 07, 2008
    Yup! Another great chapter. A great pleasure to read. Love it. Thankies!!!!!!!
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  • From siana on April 06, 2008
    Oh this is good!! once again you didn't disappoint, I'm glad to see Yugi awake and realizing his new 'master' wouldn't hurt him (such a shame he doesn't realize it's Yami). As for the Dr? I'd have let Yami at him the son of a b****. I hope it gets better for Yugi soon and that the people responsible for this suffer, I can't wait!!!

    I must just add that I like the way you introduced the other charaters, at least we know something about them...
    Next chappy please ^______^ Oh yeah enjoy the vacation and have loads of fun....
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  • From Shuman on April 06, 2008
    Love it Love it Love it!!! I'm so glad that yugi is aware now!
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on April 06, 2008
    Yes! This has just made my day. I love this story so much. I hope Yugi remembers Yami soon. and the others, I guess. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on April 06, 2008
    Yes! This has just made my day. I love this story so much. I hope Yugi remembers Yami soon. and the others, I guess. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 06, 2008
    Have fun on your vacation.
    I hope Yugi starts to remember his life from before and Atemu. At least he is no longer thinking he will be punished by him.
    I think a lot of people are going to suffer and die before the end of this. Excellent work.
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  • From Calcifer on April 05, 2008
    Oh the anticipation... I can't wait for the next chapter.

    It's really sad how Yugi's lost his memory, but it just adds to the story. And it makes perfect sense too.

    As for that last guy who owned Yugi, I'd like to thank him for his carelessness - by putting him out of his misery at a reasonable (and painful) speed as opposed to VERY slowly (and excruciatingly).

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From RayeMoon on April 03, 2008
    ::Whacks you with a stick:: >:-O Poor Yugi! Oh, my gosh, poor, poor Yugi! That's pretty bad. But I'm not angry, no, of course not. As horrible as the happenings are, the writing remains wonderful. Gods, I love your Atemu. When it comes to the thought of losing Yugi, he's so weak, so frightened, but when he sees that doctor and hears what he says, he's so fierce, so violent. I loved it! Nothing better than "his unholy eyes, his wild eyes". I love the imagery. Ohh, please have Atemu get his hands on every one of those evil bastards! (And let's not forget the other poor children!) I am confused as to why the hospital has one of these dicks, but I suppose your point is that they are everywhere. Great job! I wanted to cry with Yugi there when everything is in italics. I hope I misinterpreted it and he's not blaming Yami for not saving him. There was nothing more heartbreaking than him trying to imagine he was with Yami instead of that sick freak. Please, write more! It makes me sick, but I love it. Beautiful!
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 02, 2008
    Great chapter. I hope Yuugi wakes up. I know he is still hurt but he might feel just a tiny bit better knowing that Yami, Bakura and Marik are going to punish those involved.
    I was suspicious when that doctor wanted to be alone and not disturbed when he was with Yuugi. Most doctors want a nurse there to help them, they don't do anything alone. I'm glad yami got back in time.
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  • From alleycat88 on April 01, 2008
    I know I just reviewed but I read your reviews and wanted to tell you to just ignore certain people....
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  • From alleycat88 on April 01, 2008
    HI! Im new to the Yugi-oh genre and you are my first fic! I just wanted to say...WOW! this fic is very well written and it broke my heart everytime Atemu showed up. Im glad yugi is back....but the aftermath of what he went through will haunt him forever poor thing. I hope there will be a certain someone around to comfort and teach him to appreciate things....like *cough*atemu*cough* excellent first couple of chapters! Im in love and will now have to read your other stories if they are all as good as this one!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on April 01, 2008
    OOPSY! Thought I reviewed. Read it couple of times, on both sites(due to a lack of new "stuff"). Well done. Though kinda disturbing. You'd think that crap like that doesn't happen in this day and age. But, unfortunately there is evidence of it existing(slavery of the weaker). Those caught really should be shot and pissed on. Um, sorry for the little rant, but I despise those who take advantage of the helpless. I really hope you deal with them "strongly" in this fic. Can't wait to see what happens next. Later.
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  • From Calcifer on March 31, 2008
    ... death to all pedophile rapist doctors...

    Love this story very muchly! Update soon!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - Shekira on March 30, 2008
    *sniffles* thats....so....sad... poor Atemu. Again Iwish much pain and suffering for those bastards ^.^ thank you
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