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Reviews for No Loaded Gun

By : Oceans11
  • From ANON - V-chan on May 27, 2011
    I must say, I kicked myself for never actually getting around to this story now that I actually have. It was absolutely lovely. Your writing work is splendid in a sort of...grand simplicity which I find difficult to explain, but have always appreciated immensely. (And...if you've seen your fellow writer's works on here, I doubt that you're too surprised I find fanfic another oasis in a desert of poorly written works. xD There are some good ones, yes, even _very_ good, but..most are...bad, when put politely. "Melts the eyes" would be more accurate for some.) The way you portray the psychological aspect of what's happening adds so much more depth and realism, I think.
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 30, 2008
    I loved the story. I thought I reviewed it here too. So I reread it and loved it all over again. Great work.
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  • From Klepto on April 13, 2008
    *claps* Excellent one-shot there! I enjoyed it. ^_^ I was afraid you were going to kill one or both of there for a moment.
    I don't know if it was your intention, but Blonde and Red kept becoming Honda and Jounouchi for me. XD They certainly bantered like them.
    I now wait for the next part of "Carry On". *grins* Thanks for the tide-over.
    >^_^
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  • From ANON - Kaimei Tenshi on April 03, 2008
    Wonderful story. The plot was fantastic, and the writing was far beyond what you usually see on this site. I enjoyed the passion shared between Atemu and Yuugi, and the deathscene was enough to make me cry...
    Anyway, thank you SO much for the great read!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 30, 2008
    Very interesting piece. I like that you went outside of the box for this story, it certainly was an individual in a sea of one shots where Yugi and Atemu are randomly in an awkward situation that allows for underlying attraction to show through. Well done.
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  • From Sacuna on March 29, 2008
    I loved it ^_^ It was fun and made me smile. That warm and fuzzy feeling.
    I like stories when Yugi is a bad ass with crazy tendencies. >_
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  • From tinkletimekelly on March 29, 2008
    Two words. WOW (and I don't mean "World of Warcraft), and AWESOME. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From wiccacat18 on March 29, 2008
    I love the ending you put on this. But it was sad and happy at the same time. I like how it went but to some point I wish you had did a little background story at the start. I would have help to know somethings before hand. Other then that it was great. Thank you for the story.
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  • From tavia454 on March 28, 2008
    Oooohhhhh! *snarls* That rat bastard got what he deserved! And that was waaayyyy to realistic for my tastes! Only the idiotic powers that be nowadays would put someone in prison for ridding the world of garbage like that! Loved the story, but ya gotta admit that's true. Yugi should never have gone to jail - hell he should have been a hero. *nods* Such as life though (and art imitates life so...I guess). Hell of a short story though, would have liked to have read the rest of it too. It was great, not much provokes me anymore outside of RL issues. Rock on!!!
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