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Reviews for A Year With You

By : firelilly
  • From affliction on June 10, 2008
    Nice fic. I enjoyed it. When other chapters?
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  • From smalvina on June 09, 2008
    very sweet story
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  • From MishikoShinsei on May 24, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this concept and story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - Asmodes on May 24, 2008
    I like where this is going-keep up the good work! I'll be watching! ^_^
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  • From on May 20, 2008
    Yeah no problem I will be your beta. Here if you want to send me any chapters before you post them my email is master_of_lord_of_the_rings@hotmail.com. I really like how the story is turning out. after you finish this story you should write a prelude of what happened to make Jou go to Kaiba... Just an idea. So yeah keep writing and sending it to me i will fix it up and if you don't mind i might change some of the wording or add a little bit. I will always send it back to you so if you don't like what i changed you can change it back. Hope to hear from you soon
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  • From wiccacat18 on May 19, 2008
    Ya thank you for chapter two. And your welcome for the info. I know what it is like needing a bata so that is okay. I remember two things: one spelling and grammar are only one part of writing. And two the second part of writing is what you write about. It is okay to worry about your spelling and grammar but always remember the bigger reason people read your work is because of what you write about. I not so good at spelling or grammar my self but others kept reading my work because of what I was writing about.
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  • From ANON - rukia on May 19, 2008
    This is great. I just can't wait to read more. PLz update faster if you can.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 19, 2008
    Interesting start. I'll be checking up on this fic to see how it's progressing.
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  • From melodyz07 on May 19, 2008
    Sweet chapter^^

    I loved the last paragraph when Seto revealed to Jou that he likes making him angry. That was cuuute^^ especially Jou's reaction.

    I liked also what Seto said about Jou's green room. That was sweet^^

    What is good also is that Seto said many times to Jou that he doesn't feel pity for him because he and Mokuba has passed through difficult times in the past where they were almost poor. That's really true and usually writers don't talk about that fact. But it was good that you mentioned it.

    Anyway, it seems that Seto really liked Jou for buyng for him all these stuff.

    I'm curious to see what is gonna happen. Update!
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  • From AxiaDrake on May 14, 2008
    Not bad...It definitely is going to have some promise
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  • From girlo on May 14, 2008
    Intrigue!
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  • From melodyz07 on May 13, 2008
    I like the beginning of this story^^

    Poor Seto...we really can feel him lonely but his deal with Jou is a great opportunity to make the blond fall in love with him.

    Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next. Please update!
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  • From wiccacat18 on May 13, 2008
    I like it. It is a good idea that I well be happy to see grow and become something great. Oh and about spelling and things like that. Don't worry about it so much. I find that forgetting it well I write helps me to write better then ever. If you need a bata there are a lot of them on yahoo.com as well as at fanfiction.net. Little-dragon group has a few bataes that are really good (they are on yahoo.com).
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  • From on May 13, 2008
    Hey,
    I am more than willing to be your beta. i will warn you though that i have not beta before so what all would I have to do?
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  • From rukianeechan on May 13, 2008
    This seems like a real good start... PLZ continue. I just love it when seto plays cat and mouse!!
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