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Reviews for Lion Heart

By : LeilaLogan
  • From smint45 on September 03, 2009
    This was an absoloutly wonderful story!!!!! I really loved it!!!! The way Atem and Seth were brickering was just too cute!!! And some of you senteces had me rolling on the floor laughing!!!! Like " Seth rolled his eyes and glanced over at Atemu, “Any word from Hikari?” In less than a second of the name ‘Hikari’, Atemu’s eyes focused and he looked at Seth attentively. Teana’s jaw would’ve dropped if it wouldn’t have been un-lady-like." or like seth complaining over the love sick Atemu ( " “Let me spell this out for you since you don’t quite seem to understand this yet. Those two are very obviously in love and the more we leave them alone, the more chances they get to actually get together. I’m sick of having a love-sick Atemu daydreaming the entire day and since Yuugi’s aura feels fine, you really don’t need to go check. Now stay put and be happy I even bothered to tell you this.” ") and Marikus antics!!! They were just to funny!!!1 I absoloutly loved everything!!! thank you so much to share this fic with us!!!!
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  • From zombiebait86 on November 24, 2008
    **hug** YAY! Great story love, sorry it took me forever to comment again ^^' the net at my house is dismal at best and I'm a ditz
    J-chan
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  • From dragonlady222 on November 17, 2008
    Good chpater. I'm glad Teana is gone. I was wondering if you would finish this here. I loved the whole thing. Keep writng! Too bad you are leaving here but I am sure I will see you on ff.net.
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  • From ANON - evil pharaoh atem on September 23, 2008
    noooooooooo say it isnt so!!! now what am i gonna read saturday nights after a long day of work???!!!?!?!?!?!?! i loved the story, and im sad to see it end, but im looking forward to how youre going to tie up all the lose ends.

    i cant wait for the next story
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 21, 2008
    I loved the chapter and Atemu's solution with Bakura and Mariku. Now they can all live happily, once the bitch is gone. Bakura and Mariku will never be true priests but they will be in touch with the people and help Atemu a lot.
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  • From ANON - evil pharaoh atem on September 14, 2008
    enter Zorc!

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  • From dragonlady222 on September 14, 2008
    Good chapter. I feel kind of bad for Bakura and Mariku being used like that. I hope they all make it through tiis.
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  • From tavia454 on September 13, 2008
    God Damn it! I'm just so awesome at remembering to review this. *snorts* Hell half the time I forget to even check this site for updates knowing that I can go for a week or so without anything being posted. You would think I would remember this - but no! *smacks self in head* I'm such an idiot at times. Well, anyways, I'll see you tomorrow!
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  • From siana on September 13, 2008
    How the hell did I manage that one! I missed a chapter...oh well two reviews in one comin' up... At first I thought it was a bit of a betrayal when Ryou and Marik stopped Atemu and Hikari but I guess it was just love. It is a shame that the evil was able to take hold of Bakura but at least he didn't use Hikari's friends. And What's this? the priest finaly show up! way to go. And Malik pretty? I swear I'll never get over that one...
    Can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 07, 2008
    Great chapter. I'm glad Malik and Ryou got away from whoever was guarding them. Zork better be careful or Mariku is going to turn on him.
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  • From ANON - evil pharaoh atem on September 07, 2008
    wow nice chapter. i feel bad for not reviewing to the last chapter. i just plum forgot. i sorry. i liked the other one two. joey and seto was my original couple ^^ i really liked how seto told joey that he liked him...well showed him. i cant wait for the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - hmmm on September 04, 2008
    ya know, its really not that hard to put a good disclaimer in your fic. Instead you make yourself look stupid by acting like a scolded child. Its for your protection so the creators don't sue your ass. Hell, you nearly do it in your profile, all you gotta do is say you don't make any money.

    Not hard at all...
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  • From Keara on September 02, 2008
    Woohoo they finally confessed and really Seth could you b nymore of a tightass if you tried *rolls her eyes* geese your a moron and Moond dear if you keep up with these cliffies your boyos are gonna go on strike trust me DragonDreamer had teh same problem with Ryou

    Now on a funnier note *she pulls out a vid that shows Bakura naked covered in blood blood drunk and esclaiming to the world I'm The Queen of Shebe Behold me in all my glory"* weee *ducks outa there before Bakura can kill her for this* enjoy teh blackmail guys mwahahahaha and update asap Moond *holds up a Kitten Yugi who holds his paws together ina pleading way eyes all cute and sparkly* or I wont stop the kawaii Kitten look
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  • From ANON - Cosmic Tomato on August 31, 2008
    Aw that was nice, a little fluff goes a long way it’s about time the two had a little ‘down’ time it’s just a shame Yugi had to almost have a breakdown (nicely written by the way) for it to happen.
    As for Seth just giving Jou a kiss to shut him, up that scene was great. I'm Happy Seth has finally acted on his feelings. I’ve also gotta feel sorry for Shimon, I mean he’s supposed to be the advisor to Atemu and he knows the least…what with being confused by Seth’s attitude and wondering about Atemu, I’m surprised the old man hasn’t gone crazy yet!
    I liked the way you hinted as to what was happening between Atemu and Yugi in the bedroom without being graphic, to be honest I really think any type of lemon would spoil this story. But hey I guess that’s just my opinion.
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  • From KirikouChan on August 31, 2008
    And talk about disliking AFF, I think half of my review just got swallowed -_-
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