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Reviews for The Heat of Your Touch

By : affliction
  • From bakurahikari on September 02, 2008
    aww, poor Joey and Seto :( ...that Dan is a meanie *mumbles*

    as i have said before, love the story, please keep it up ^-^

    lots of love,

    frazbo x
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  • From melodyz07 on September 02, 2008
    Oh my God! I can't believe that! I went for only two weeks of vacations and I came back to see that four chapters have already been updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Oh man things have turned on in a dramatic way... poor Jou and Seto. I really do feel very sad for them. I can't believe that Dan has even been able to catch Seto.

    I really wonder what is gonna happen now. I do hope that there will be a happy ending.

    I loved the last four chapters. Very sad and deep.

    Update!
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  • From KiraSahari on September 01, 2008
    I usually don't read this kind of stories but I'm going to stay with you until the end, I want to know how are you going to end it. I admire the way you handle the psychological stuff, is hard to read some parts because the story is getting darker and darker, but at the same time is very interesting how you write your characters, the way they think and how they react. Very interesting story that talks about 3 sick minds, Jou, Seto and Dan, sick because of different reasons but they are sick in different ways and levels. I think Dan must die or they will never have peace, he is not going to leave them alone. Seto and Jou still need to talk a lot and help each other to fight their demons, now more than ever after all this caos comes to an end. I have a big problem because your story is hard to read but I can't stop doing it. Great Work, can't wait to read what is next.
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  • From ElisabethWay on August 27, 2008
    No!!! Dont hang out with Dan!! AHHH!!!!!!
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  • From TheUltimateToken on August 26, 2008
    Nooooooooooo!
    I hate Dan!
    He gets in the damn way,
    of their already messed up relationship.
    Ugh!
    Cannot wait till the next chapter.
    =D
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  • From bakurahikari on August 26, 2008
    *twitches* nooo! joey must stay with setooo!! *cries* you've made me sad now :L

    nah not really, i love your story!!

    lots of love

    frazbo x
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  • From KiraSahari on August 25, 2008
    I love you an I hate you, I love to hate you and I hate to love you because you always left me bitting my nails!!! And what I understood about Mokie being seductive is that he was trying to seduce Seto to make him put down his defences but not as far as... you know!, so I think I got the seductive part, I didn't miss the line!!, that means he was playing but he was playing very hard so they are close but not that close!, Does that makes any sense?? @.@ Sorry, English is not my native language, don't know how to express better the idea, but I think I understand the sexy part, anyway love your work, you are killing me here, this chapter was very heavy, has a lot of psychological stuff O.o' that is very interesting, how love in someway can be turned into hate! Our mind is somethig wonderful but it is scary at the same time, humans have sometimes terrible reactions to suffering. Excellent as always, keep the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter.¢¾¢¾¢¾
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  • From bakurahikari on August 24, 2008
    oh wow...that was a really intense chapter, i feel really bad for seto and joey (that bloomin dan, i'm gonna kill him myself :L)

    please keep it up, your fanfiction is brilliant! ^-^

    lots of love, frazbo x
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  • From TheUltimateToken on August 22, 2008
    I.
    Love.
    This.
    Fucking.
    Story.
    =D
    and Enigma.
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  • From KiraSahari on August 17, 2008
    I love the chapter, Mokie is so funny, I don't think their relationship is wrong, they just trust each other a lot and they are very close. I understand if you don't like incest, I don´t like it either but in this case I didn't feel it like incest, they didn't kiss or touch each other in an improper way, Mokie was just trying to convince his brother to trust him, it simply was another version of pouting and batting eyelashes ha ha ha. Love the way Seto and Jou need each other so much, was so sexyyyyy!!! Great chapter, NEED TO READ NEXT ONE!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee... *puppy eyes* *pouting* *batting eyelashes* ha ha ha :P
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  • From bakurahikari on August 17, 2008
    lol the mokuba and seto scene made me laugh xD it was also very spicy and lemony fresh!

    muchas love *huggles* x
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  • From ElisabethWay on August 16, 2008
    Once again, awesome chapter!
    I kept waiting for something odd, and then it was over and I was like, wait, what did I miss? Kaiba and Mokubas relationship didnt seem odd, me and my sis are that way, there just real close XP
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  • From KiraSahari on August 13, 2008
    The only way I am going to forgive their suffering is if you give Dan 100% more suffering!!! My poor babies!!! Don't be cruel and save me from my misery, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love the way they are finally trusting each other and having better communication, great chapter!!! Need more so write faster because I'm dying here!
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  • From melodyz07 on August 13, 2008
    Are you kidding me?!?! this chapter was everything but boring!

    Actually it was GREAT ! (like all the previous chapters ^^). Have I ever mentioned how much I love the depth and maturity of your story ? ^^

    And that without mentioning the HOT lemons that you always write.

    I enjoyed reading this chapter!

    Great plan from Seto. I haven't expected that from him.

    Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next!

    Please update!
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  • From bakurahikari on August 13, 2008
    *sniffles* that was such a feiry and passionate chapter, i loved the pervertedness of it, i hope that they take down that bastard Dan! he is even pissing me off! *laughs*

    please keep writing, i love this story to pieces xxx
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