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Reviews for The Heat of Your Touch

By : affliction
  • From KiraSahari on June 17, 2008
    OMG!!!! that was soooooooooooooo hoooooooooooooooooooot!!! After chapter 3, I think in some way I can understand them, they use to have sex but they never had real intimacy, they love each other but they never share each other, sex was just a requirement in their relationship, they never give themselves completely, that was missing, they were too afraid of doing something wrong that they didn't do anything at all!!. They not only have sexual problems, that is just one part of the problem, the real root of the problem is that they don't have good communication and it seems thay need to trust each other more deeply. All that wasted passion. You don't think love, you feel it!!!. They really need to let go and don't think too much just feel. Maybe it's rough but I think they are finally making love to each other, is so ironic, maybe it's a little bit scary for them right now, but I think they were sexually frustraded, they need to burn down first all that pent-up desire and then maybe they will be able to find a more balance sexual life, because right now they jumped from one extreme to the other. They need to open up and know each other better, because their relationship is not going well either, bad sex was a consequence of that. It's a very interesting story, because is common that couples think that bad sex life is a sexual problem, when the problem goes more deep than that, please keep writing, I would love to read more about this one.
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  • From LadySilver on June 16, 2008
    NEAT STORY!! i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!
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  • From melodyz07 on June 16, 2008
    Me too I want to know what happen to Seto^^ (even though I have an idea...)

    Anyway that was HOT!!! UkeSeto is always great (especially with a seme Jou)

    Continue!
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  • From KiraSahari on June 16, 2008
    I would love to read more!!! What is going on with Seto? Well, I hope he is really Seto!!!!!... The sex scenes were HOT!!!
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  • From melodyz07 on June 16, 2008
    That was good^^

    It would be great if you can continue it into a story, to see how the relationship between Jou and Seto will improve from now on and how they will get more and more comfortable with each other.
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  • From Fluffyfangitl89 on June 12, 2008
    ohh,i love it!! heheh, da hottest thing ive read in a long time!! it had me blushin madly!! lol, im silly dat way..its got meh wanting ta read/see more setojou!!! and i had just got hooked on SessKagura...*sigh* 1 of the few strait non-yaoi pairings i lik...i dont feel lik read da story i have been now!! meanie!! lol, hyped up now..srry...well ill hav ta read dis again, right b4 i start typing up "Milk and Honey" maybe dat'll inspire meh ..
    lol^-^
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  • From mkay3223 on June 12, 2008
    Will you be continuing this or is it a oneshot? I really hope you make it a story !
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