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By : affliction
  • From melodyz07 on January 05, 2010
    ahhhh What a nice ending :)
    A very hopeful one ^^
    I was kind of afraid...

    And Thank you so much for ending the story!!!!
    I can't believe that you really updated :D
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  • From melodyz07 on December 08, 2008
    Setoooooooo where are you??????? Go find Jou!!!!! He needs you nooooow!

    ^^'

    Anyway, it is a short chapter but I am happy that you have finally updated!!!!! I love so much this story!

    So that's real... Jou left for America...

    Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next!
    Please update!
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  • From KiraSahari on November 30, 2008
    OmG!!! I am so sorry that you have problems my friend, hope everything gets better in your life, have faith, you have our support, my heart is with you.
    Thank you so much for the last chapter, I was worried that you were never going to end this story, doesn't matter if it is a small chapter, just please don't stop, that is the only thing I am asking, don't stop.
    Poor Jou, he is suffering so much and is normal, he has a big trauma and he will need time to heal, just hope that he returns to Seto, it is going to be a hard trip but they can make it, hope so T.T
    Take care ok, tons of kisses and big bear hug!!!
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  • From melodyz07 on October 14, 2008
    Oh my God! what Mokuba is thinking about?
    man it is good that Seto had some sense and refused him.
    Mokuba have really some sick way to help his brother XD

    Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next!
    I hope that after he rest, Seto will go to search for Jou.
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  • From KiraSahari on October 12, 2008
    Why TBC????? Of course I want no, not want... I need you to continue the story, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee... but I must be honest, I'm so scared that Seto do something really stupid and hurt his little brother, I understand why Mokie said what he said but it is not the right path to help his brother, it will be worst for Seto, how can he damage what he so desperately have been trying to protect all his life??? that would be a bigger burden for him instead of helpėng... In simple words he is practically saying, ok to help you to forget a rape lets make you a rapist so you can heal or like saying you are traumatized and I can't help you because I can't understand a trauma, so I will get one and in that way I will be able to help you because finally I will be able to understand you and of course is better if you give me the trauma... O.o'In what way could that help him??? That would be another trauma for Seto! Hope they find the right path to return to reality and that they win the strength they need to find themselves again and to return to each other arms T.T Hope I explained myself correctly, sorry English is not my native language. Love your work, no matter how hard is for me to read some parts (my poor heart T.T), please continue.
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  • From ElisabethWay on October 10, 2008
    wow, that was an amaizng chapter!!
    Mokuba comes off so strong but I get the feeling he isnt really.
    And his relationship with Seto seems borderline pushing it O_o
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  • From melodyz07 on October 06, 2008
    Where Jou is going???????? To America???? without Seto knowing that? (how will he know by the way if Jou really do that?) * Oh God*

    And I can't believe what Mokuba intended to do for his brother... I am happy that Seto made him get back to reality. I like what he told him that "he didn't want from Mokuba to become like him and then blame him for his lame life". I love Seto's reaction and it is normal that he became upset towards Mokuba's decision.

    That was a great chapter!!! I really wonder what is gonna happen to Jou and Seto. Jou will really leave or was that just a though?

    Please update!
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  • From KiraSahari on October 05, 2008
    Love this chapter! Don't worry if you don't have the chance to update this story so soon, just please don't forget about it because I love it. Poor Mokie, now is his turn to be the rock to support his brother, I think it is true what Seto told him, to don't let his life go for him, because he was going to end alone and miserable but I understand what Mokuba was trying to do, the same things for a lot of time Seto did, get away for every distraction to concentrate in his brother and his company. Mokuba is very mature, he knows Seto will need to talk about his trauma to be able to get over it but our poor Jou needs a friend right now, hope his sister will be able to help him, he needs a lot ot love because he is blaming himself for something he didn't do, the only one to blame here was Dan! They will need a lot of help to get over their traumas T.T
    Hope you are ok, take care of yourself! Sorry any mistakes here! :P
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  • From melodyz07 on September 16, 2008
    Oh my God! Seto...Jou... *sobs* That's so sad! But I was expecting that. After this traumatic experience, I don't expect them to get back to their normal lives easily.

    That was so touching! I absolutely loved when Seto hugged Joey and began to scream that he didn't want to leave him even though the nurses were trying to separate him from Joey.

    I really do wish that something positive will happen to Seto and Joey in the next chapter. I am sure that Seto will try to get Joey out of the hospital (with money ^^) and take care of him by himself.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Please update!
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  • From KiraSahari on September 15, 2008
    Buaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! poor boys!!! My babies!!! T.T why the TBC..? Don't do this to meeeeeeeeee!!! Is so sad but is real, after that kind of experience is natural that they have big traumas, is going to be a long road to find sanity for both of them. I love this story, I really want to see them fighting their traumas, fighting for their love, is going to be hard, is going to be horrible but it is possible, they just need to have the courage to fight because is easier to let your pain consume you instead of fighting for happines, even if you don't know if your are going to be able to reach it. The brave one is not the one that has no fear, is the one that even when he is afraid he keeps going and he doesn't let his fears conquer him! I don't know if I said it right, sorry English is not my native language. Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From bakurahikari on September 08, 2008
    o.o...that...was amazing! YAY! DAN'S DEAD THE BUGGER!!! (and he dies as he lived, draped in the arms of another man...well...sort of ^-^)

    please keep writing, i love it more and more each chapter x

    lots of love,

    frazbo x (frazzle x)
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  • From melodyz07 on September 08, 2008
    Oh God finally all this is over! I was going to kill Dan with my own hands!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This monster !

    I wonder what is gonna happen next with Seto and Jou. I suppose that Jou will be affected for a while about this traumatic experience.

    Anyway, can't wait to see what is gonna happen next. Hope that the next chapter will be a little less darker (or maybe much less darker ^^). Jou really needs some vacations as well as Seto (*witnessing his love being raped in front of him must have been a traumatizing sigh as well*)

    Please update!
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  • From KiraSahari on September 07, 2008
    Do you know how amazing you are???!!! This chapter was great!! The best part is the way Dan died and I enjoyed so much!!! It was a great chapter, love it!!! But now comes a very difficult moment, how are they going to heal their psychological wounds. Poor Mokuba, to feel useless when someone you love needs help, is one of the greates pains that exist. Great work and I'm dying to read the next part.
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  • From TheUltimateToken on September 05, 2008
    Dan...Dan...Dan...
    What a sick bastard.
    Making Kaiba watch?
    Wowsers. Things got crazy fast.
    I hope things work out okay.
    Awesome chapter.
    =D
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  • From ElisabethWay on September 03, 2008
    OMG! AHH! Poor seto and joey! How are they going to escapeeee?
    I love how you kinda worked backwards with the storyline btw
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