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By : Marajohuiki
  • From Calcifer on June 23, 2008
    Aw man. I feel so bad for Jou. He's so neglected. Amazing how you didn't describe him, he didn't speak, and he was never directly addressed by name, and yet, it was so clear who you were talking about. Excellent writing.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 23, 2008
    I think I have it. Mokuba is the light half of Seto's soul and without him around he is truly dark. He is mean and vicious in his dealings with other people and companies. He uses people for his own pleasure, like Jou and then kicks them when they are down and leaves them without a care or a thought for their welfare. Yugi and Yami don't seem to be so separate and Yami seems to care about others as well as Yugi.
    Good chapter. I love the story.
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  • From barrie18 on June 22, 2008
    So this is the Kaiba that we are faced with. The one that Moswen describes in the end of the Claiming Rite. Very powerful stuff.

    Can't decide yet, whether or not I like your AN explanation that Mokuba and Kaiba are 2 halves of one soul. Because if that is the case, then there can be no redemption or saving the elder brother because he is only filled with an empty darkness, whether a carry over from the ancient past and/or the Gozabura past is yet to be determined.

    Ironically, if you look at it from your story line. . .Atemu was Seth's soul vessel. Which would further develop why there was nothing left inside of him when Atemu died. (once again this is from your story line, not out of my head)

    There are so many parallels, and possibilities here that I don't even want to put them to paper and second guess you. But what I am seeing on the surface is the modern day Pharoah ( the CEO), the current slave (Jou - not even the general politness of servant is used here) and a little brother who is new to the mix, whose future role is still undetermined at this stage(and not in a sexual manner - which I am very glad about).

    For better or worse, your story is getting me to think. . .

    Looking forward to the next update. . .
    bahen








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  • From RayeMoon on June 20, 2008
    Wow. What a beginning this story has. I like how you precieve Yami's character. His utter belief in being responsible and protective of Yugi, his despair and anger at their current situation, his love of Yugi for Yugi's insistence that it will get better, and most of all, Yami's pride against asking for help. So believable. Oh, dear, the poor boys! Oh, my, what happened to the Friendship Gang? How come you can only get Joey's whereabouts if you ask while on your knees? So many questions and only two chapters in. I must admit, I was a little disappointed you ghosted over the seme-Yugi lemon, but it was still hot in its implications. Yami taking on a completely submissive pose and just begging for it, that was very hot. I'm looking forward to most of this story, Marajohuiki. And you're the only one on my side for Yami/Sentoryou in mine! Thanks for your support, I really pissed the others off. Oh, well. Please keep up your writing, it's great.
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  • From Calcifer on June 20, 2008
    Please say Jou is with Kaiba. That would make my day for certain.

    Wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what you've got planned next!

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From YamiKuro on June 19, 2008
    I LOVE IT! You have to post more! Its awesome! Poor yami...
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 18, 2008
    Good chapter. I hope Jou is with Seto and not back in a gang or in jail. Seth kind of betrayed them back then, maybe he can help them now. Like with a job or a place to stay for a while. I love this story.
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  • From MishikoShinsei on June 18, 2008
    Well, seems like you've sucked me into another one.

    And I thank you.

    More soon, please.

    'Ko
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  • From barrie18 on June 18, 2008
    Nice beginning, but lots of questions that I hope will be answered in time. First off being "Why is a job out of question? Are they running from something or someone?

    A team of duelists died. . . interesting. . . and no mention of Seto Kaiba. The someone who is being avoided?

    I see the vessel and soul theme is still carried out in the present time, without the two participants really knowing why, so when Seto does turn up, will he be villan or victim between these two. Or for better or worse the victim who becomes the villan.

    If you are planning to make Yugi harder, I can't see him wanting to 'share' Yami. To me a harder Yugi is not a generous one.

    Hope the next update is soon
    bahen






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  • From Calcifer on June 16, 2008
    I enjoyed reading TCR, and this promises to equally brilliant. I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 15, 2008
    Poor Yami and Yuugi. Maybe they can find Seto and ask him to help.
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  • From barrie18 on June 14, 2008
    OK, so the vessel and the soul are together as promised. Just hope this doesn't mean that Seto is going to be the complete villian in this part of the story. Interestingly enough, I found that your writing style has changed (at least the way I'm reading it) from the previous story to this so far. This time you seem to be more pragmatic and matter of fact in style. Well I guess that's what modern times are, where as we tend to romancify the past and supernatural occurances.

    Hope you update soon. By the way, Happy Birthday from an old fossil.
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