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Reviews for Rulers and Rogues

By : Khat
  • From ANON - IvoryRose777 on June 01, 2015
    So I'm really disappointed. Why, you ask? The answer is really obvious. Because I caught up and now the next chapter isn't up yet. *Insert dramatic sigh here*
    On the other hand I get to tell you how much I love this story without too many words. The characterizations are lovely, there's one problem after another which keeps me interested and reading even though I know the catchup point is approaching, and it's just so much fun. I'm already loving Jou and Bakura. I also enjoy the echoes of canon that come up from time to time. So much fun.
    I'm looking forward to the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2015
    You never fail to brighten my day with every update, no matter how dramatic their relationship gets within each chapter I absolutely love the dynamic the two have with one another, and how Yugi doesn't let himself get manipulated and even goes so far as to irritate Yami haha. I actually relate with the development of their relationship, strangely enough, so it's really very enjoyable to see how they've progressed as a couple :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2015
    whew! you had me worried there for a bit. i thought Yami would freak and do something absolutely awful and they would be on worse terms and likely regress with their relationship even further or something. speaking of which, i love your characterization of them. i i find their relationship unhealthy and unconventional but it can't be denied that there's 'something' between them and it is enough to make them stay and unconsciously readjust themselves and be - or at least, close to - what the other needed or is most compatible with. very excited for their journey. and i'll just express my sympathies to Jou. poor guy. enough said. may your muse always be with you! see ya next chapter
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  • From ANON - Venetia on June 01, 2015
    Glad that the hikaris are getting a little fight back...though that didn't work too well for Yugi. Seems that they just can't win. I was genuinely surprised that you do not put conscious thought into analyzing the relationship/chemistry between the characters. But maybe that is why this story is so great-because it is not over-thought and seems natural. Hope everything is going well for you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2015
    I almost screamed when I received the notification of you updating this fic. (It's around 3 AM in my country)
    I loved it! Yugi— he's such a trouble magnet, isn't he? Cannot wait to read the lemons! And, well, I hope things get better for the little ones
    Well, thank you for updating. Hope you'll update soon.

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  • From ANON - KMichelle on June 01, 2015
    Awww...I love protective Yami....and a thoroughly chastised Yugi. Your characters are so perfect. I feel so bad for Jou...he's fighting so hard but he has so little leeway. I can't wait to learn more. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2015
    Ahh....you updated!! Great chapter...I'm loving the rebellion from the Yugi and Jou
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  • From ANON - Nena on May 31, 2015
    Please, more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2015
    This... This story is amazing. It is so original! Many have done the dictator Yami cliche, but you have burned through that cliche and made it your own. While I admit that many stories can make me laugh or cry, this story has held my attention like very few before. It has even cut into my sleeping time! A very good job here. I am looking forward to the angle you take in future.
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  • From ANON - KMichelle on May 26, 2015
    Aw I loved this chapter...but it's such a tease! I can't even wait to know what happens now that they are stranded in the middle of the desert ;). The hikaris seem to be taking everything pretty meekly...except Jou but he doesn't really get much say in the matter thanks to Kaiba. I expect some difficulties with them soon. Can't wait to learn more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2015
    I love how controlling the Yamis are and how powerless the hikaris are. it makes me want to go off in a corner and giggle madly. I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in the past chapters, but omg can you blame me? I couldn't stop tearing my eyes off! It's exactly what I'm looking for, I've read a looooot of fanfictions but I usually just read through them if I don't like it, skip over stuff because I can't bring myself to immerse into them, it's been a long time since I've read like this. Addicting! I love your story, there's a few story whose title I won't ever forget and this is one of them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2015
    Your story is absolutely bloody marvellous! I so love the way all the characters interract, it's so entertaining and thrilling because I can never guess what especially Jou will say and what will be the outcome. You have an amazing imagination to put together such complicated plot together and that your characters are autentic and have little quirks which add to their depth. I love your ideas and I am happy it's such a long story because I can loose myself in it for longer. So I wish you have a hyperactiv Muse to help you write lots and lots and your university is not too demanding :-) thank you that you created this beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2015
    I find Yam's and Hikari's relationships very fascinating. It's like...it pushes the boundaries of what love is. Like they'd do anything for each other, they care for each other as all hell but won't admit it and they have weird as heck ways to express them. Mostly involving lashing out. Usually when you think of love, you think of two people, extremely dedicated and gentle with each other, willing to spend time with each other, forgive each other's mistakes, and accept the other's darkest parts. While there is some gentleness from Yami he doesn't seem too concerned with Yugi's boundaries/comfort. And there's no forgiveness on Yugi's end. And while there is some acceptance from Yami - right now it sounds like Yami's more about changing Yugi which I can see will cause a lot of major conflict in the future.

    But this kinda relationship fits them. Really. Because, I mean, it's Yugi's darker half And you can't take over the world and lead a bunch of psychos and survive in this kinda world unless there's something twisted about you. And what I love about your story is that the characters feel real. Yami's manipulative, yes, but he still cares. Yugi's naive, yes, but he's still stubborn. And possibly the sanest one here. (Also, how do you stuff these characters into this new world and new dynamics while keeping them so in-character?!) While Ryou seems decently content in his position, Jou is still fighting like hell and probably has the hardest counterpart in Seto. The dynamic between those two is ridiculously well written. Jou is irrational at best and Seto is so cold. But there is obviously a love/obsession on both ends. I cannot imagine Jou taking the constant humiliation so well.

    So, thanks for your awesome writing! :) And don't let us reviewers force you into anything; this is your story, and you should be the one to decide how it evolves. I, for one, know I'll love it no matter what.
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  • From ANON - lovelock8 on May 25, 2015
    I just got back from a family filled crazy day and am so excited you updated! :D What a wonderful chapter. I wonder what is going to happen now that they had to make a crash landing. I am still so interested to see where you will take it next
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  • From ANON - Venetia on May 25, 2015
    Glad that Yugi's sight has come back! Poor Yugi, I can't imagine him liking to be taken in front of everyone so callously. And Jou! Seto is very harsh with him...I am betting there will be some repercussions...hopefully he won't be pushed to have another heartbreaking break down. I am looking forward to reading an actual lemon between Yugi and Yami.
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