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Reviews for Big Lie, Small World

By : Oceans11
  • From BlueSeptember on July 17, 2008
    Yes, I figured that the two of them would end up together since you're the one writing this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and, perhaps seeing some sparks fly!

    ~Blue September~
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  • From tinkletimekelly on July 15, 2008
    Honestly Aff. should really should have a better alert system. Love this fic.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on July 15, 2008
    Sorry for the earlier lack of interest in this story. Time and frustrations (hopefully temporary) had me skim and dismiss this chapter. Only your authors note at the top of next chapter reminded of that edge you gave Yugi and eventually Atemu in "Carry On" where redemption, was done slowly but surely. Which is thing I like best about your writing. Should of known better. Annoyance at the amount of time,I don't have, that skimming for something to read takes lately, has nearly missed this. Now I'll be looking forward to each and every update. So hurry up with that chapter 3.
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  • From Calcifer on July 14, 2008
    ... Dang. And this is why ya shouldn't play: 'cause you'll get caught, and somebody's gonna get hurt.

    I love the way you've captured their emotions.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From Roxas13 on July 14, 2008
    well thats one way to get a leech off.

    Look forward to more. ^_^
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  • From Kytrin on July 14, 2008
    Wow... I honestly can't tell how this is going to turn out. The suspense is incredible. On the one hand they have both obviously been very bored with each other for years. But on the other, the whole discovery of the affair has brought out deeply buried emotions. They are sitting on a fence... and could tilt either way at any moment. I can't wait to see what you do next. Well done, and I look forward to the conclusion. I'll keep my fingers crossed it turns out well.
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  • From ChibiBerry on July 14, 2008
    Oh...that was pretty bad..I loved that you wrote in both of their perspective view..it makes the story reall interesting that way! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update when you can, you're doing a wonderful job so far! 8D
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 14, 2008
    I feel bad for them. Adding a little excitement may have been a good idea but ot this way. I hope they can talk this out and settle things.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 14, 2008
    Poor Atemu. That must have been a blow. I hope it helps their relationship.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on July 08, 2008
    Nice!
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  • From ChibiBerry on July 07, 2008
    Wow..that made me feel...so sad. Please continue this, I really want to see what happens next! You're getting off to a great start, I hope you'll update soon/ 8D
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  • From Calcifer on July 07, 2008
    ... I can just imagine Yugi's face upon discovering just what Atemu meant when he said, 'I'm outside'... Heh. Burn.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From severuslover on July 06, 2008
    Amazing writing!! heh I'm speechless right now. This was so profound and well described, easily one of the best things ive read on the site. I'm sorry if this review is short and unhelpful but I'm stunned right now. Cant wait for more!
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  • From BlueSeptember on July 06, 2008
    Not usually a big YY fan, but I really do enjoy the way your write them together, and Yuugi in general. It sounds like a very interesting beginning and I want to see where you take it.

    ~Blue September~
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