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Reviews for When the Sun Goes Down

By : EmeraldRains
  • From ANON - Wildcard on March 05, 2010
    I have to admit, I'm skimming pretty much everything except the Otogi-Seto-Mokuba scenes. Those are fantastic. I love reading about the two CEOs 'friendship' and Mokuba crushing on Otogi. It makes sense, Otogi's ridiculously attractive and he and Mokuba even have the same sort of skin/hair! And face, even. XD Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From strangeliou on April 03, 2009
    Everyone has problems =O! But I can't stop reading! and now I just HAVE to know what happens next! Please continue!! I don't particularly like angst fics, but yours are damn good ^^
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  • From icarusdescending on March 27, 2009
    So I have to admit, I'm only actually reading the parts of the story that have to do with Mokuba, Seto and Ryuuji, but those parts are AWESOME. I love Ryuuji's snark about "I'd love to have Seto here too but one step at a time" because it's so totally him, and Seto coming in at the end, or possibly watching, was perfect! Can't wait to see what happens next! Great job on the characterization, you're spot on.
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  • From ANON - violeteyes on March 14, 2009
    wow, this is really good! I love that you have a steady and consistent plot that allows for lots of great characterization without getting too confusing or going off on any tangents. You're very talented, I hope you keep posting!
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi-chan on March 08, 2009
    I love this fic! I'm dying to know what happened to jou and what kaiba is going to do to otogi! Tis bookmarked and hope to read more.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 07, 2009
    Good chapter. Poor Jou. I hope they can free him from his enthrallment. I feel bad for Mokuba, he is the innocent in this. I wonder what Seto is going to do to Otogi.
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  • From zombiebait86 on February 06, 2009
    @.@ wow, **intranced**
    J-chan
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  • From setoswifey on February 06, 2009
    This story is so addicting. I just love your writing style. I am dying to find out what happens next.
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  • From icarusdescending on January 31, 2009
    I have to admit, I'm kind of skimming all the parts except the Seto-Mokuba-Otogi parts. If this ends up with Seto/Otogi, I will SCREAM with joy. Seto/Otogi/Mokuba might just earn you my firstborn children. XD
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  • From dragonlady222 on December 15, 2008
    Great chapter. Sorry for the3 late review. I kind of lost aff.net for a while. A threesome with Yami, Yugi and Jou sounds good. Mokuba is thining the wrong brother.
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  • From CodyMThomas on August 28, 2008
    Ok the Ryou / Malik scene was so freaking hot! then Bakura had to go and ruin it. *Beats Bakura to a bloody pulp.* stupid ass! How dare he trample my Ryou's precious heart?! And poor Jou he's going to get a kaiba sized beating for no reason. *protects him* more more more! this is a great story, and I'm sorry the you have had such a rough time lately. I hope things get better for you!
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  • From dragonlady222 on August 27, 2008
    Poor Jou. Now he has two people angry with him. Poor Ryou. Why is Bakura so mean to him? I hope Yami doesn't hurt Jou too bad. I'm sorry for your loss.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 18, 2008
    Poor Mokuba. I hope Seto can get over this and stop hating Mokuba. I wonder what is going to happen to them. Good chapter.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 13, 2008
    Good chapter. Great story.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 13, 2008
    Good start. I really like this.
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