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Reviews for For the Love of Darkness

By : Yugidarkangel
  • From 10hart1k on June 07, 2012
    cwl pls continue so is it gonna be marik who finds him ( is it marik ot malik thats the light i forgot
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  • From Yugi_Motou on March 15, 2012
    wow! i love this! you must update it!
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  • From tinkletimekelly on November 25, 2009
    Good chapter! Please continue soon!
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  • From KwaiiBaka on September 01, 2008
    You gotta keep writing. You just gotta! This story is well written, with a good plot, and CrossShipping! Everything a Yaoi fangirl could want! So pretty please, with lemons on top, keep writing? I love this story. Just. Love. It.
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  • From YamiKuro on August 27, 2008
    OH! I LIKE THIS! I like the twist that maybe Yugi could come to love Marik....maybe he could go dark? And help rule with Marik?

    And i think you should put MPReg! i would loooove that!

    And would you email me when you update? I want to make sure i get to read this story!

    the_vampire_lestat_sno@yahoo.com
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  • From HikariAi on August 10, 2008
    MAN, this story is so totally AWESOME... PLEASE update soon, ne...!!! ^_^
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  • From animekid on August 01, 2008
    alright a malik/yugi fic!

    there was an AU of this pairing years ago but I forgot the title name; it was really good and lemonly! *sobs*

    anyway as long as malik/yugi is a pairing (even with three some! *mmmms at the thought*) I'll continue to read it! It's a new interesting twist to all the bakura/everyone yugi/yami and seto/yami fics...>_>;

    keep up the good work
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  • From tinkletimekelly on July 31, 2008
    Nice! Quick update. Better, on the paying a little more attention to detail "thing". You know what I've noticed? Your chapter starts of really well, but by the time you try to finish/end it, is where you become sketchy/rushed. The first half of your second chapter is a great ending for your first chapter. Right up to the part Yugi is taken away on the dragon with his friends in tow vowing to rescue him. Your Second part of the could be the beginning of chapters 5,6,or even 7th, especially if you wish to include a mpreg. There is no way that Marik wouldn't "take"(um fuck/screw,take your pick) Yugi the moment that dragon's feet hits the ground, willing or unwilling, that's just nature(human or otherwise)bodies, instincts, will dictate that. That could be where chapter 2 begins. So there, you're trapped into a lemon, quite possibly rape weather you like or not. Foreplay is for the willing,striptease(lime suff)and such could be done in due time. Set your, "five years later", scene to "one" or "two" years later. That's where Yugi should be able to,or not,return Marik's "affections". Throw Yami in the mixture and play who's the daddy or he can have one from each(twins?). Though before that, there are those pesky chapter in between before things become"honky,dory". It's your story. Just mind the time line.
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  • From SilverKnightDante on July 31, 2008
    *gonk* ....*drools* I demand more~~~~....smutt perhaps in the next chapter? *evil laugh* You know you want to~! Nice job and you so should so go for a threesome. That'd just be hot.^^
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  • From ChibiBerry on July 31, 2008
    Aww..lol..he's beginning to like Malik, how cute. Thanks for updating, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I hope you continue writing, the beginning is gret so far, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. 8D
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  • From ANON - SilverKnightDante on July 30, 2008
    Nice job! Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From tinkletimekelly on July 30, 2008
    Um, because I'm fond of, Marik, and/or, Malik as a pairing, or threesome, with Yugi, I really want to see where your going with this. You've opened with an interesting idea, I truly hope you can carry it through. A small suggestion, if I may? Try not to rush, or hurry, your chapter along. A little more detail here and there, should make your chapter, "fuller", "richer". I don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say. The best(and sometime the worst(only because of my impatiens), example of what I'm trying to say is "esamas"'s work (search author under that name, I haven't figured out how to link yet, also found on ff.net same author name). If you could read any of her "stuff" (oops chapters) you might get what I mean. I really do want to read a "well" written fic. And this one has soooooooo many possiblities. Make your chapters worth waiting for. "Yesterday's Lessons'" has been faithfully updated on Fri/Sat(depending on time zones). And I'm "desperately" looking for fics to read in the meantime. I'm hoping this might be one. Other "authors/writers" to check out for style would be "tavi"(who's on Hiatus,sic), RayMoon,Catti,Klepto, Ocean, and a few others, who write well, in this fandom. Their links can be found in each others reviews. Or, you could ignore all the "above" if you wish. Just continue, I'll most likely check out the next,at least, anyways. C ya and luck to you.
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  • From ChibiBerry on July 30, 2008
    Oh, this is really interesting. I think you did a great job on the beginning. You should definitely continue it, I think the plot is great and would make for a really good story. Keep up the work, I can't wait read your next chapter. Update when you can! 8D
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