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Reviews for Love Under a Silver Moon

By : ScarlettRose
  • From Moonbunny87 on June 03, 2010
    My first impression of this was how quick paced and interesting Marik and Bakura's scene was. Descriptive and a great story opener... However I don't agree with how Ryou acts. Your writing style in smooth and I generally like how your characterize everyone but perhaps you could work on Ryou a little? One he is a male, and just because he likes guys and is pretty doesn't mean he automatically thinks and acts like a girl, two I really don't like the message your sending. No one should keep quite about a rape threat. I'm sorry if this comes off as blunt or even rude but if nothing else I don't think you are doing your own writing skill justice by falling back on the overused Feminine Victim Ryou cliche. I can tell by what I've read so far that you can do so much more. Please keep writing.
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  • From hsosborne on January 29, 2009
    love this fic, and a prequel AND a sequel would be awesome *greedy*
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  • From BraziliaH on November 13, 2008
    Just because it'll be apsolutly amazing, and fun as well, you should make a sequal with atem (yami) being one of the oldest vampires coming to japan, meeting with those four, bonding with them and bringing little yugi in the mix, and yami's presence becomes a threat to the general, so the general gets together with some others at his level, and those who may or may not have drove yami out, depending on how you want to add him, and bring forth a war.

    If not, oh well...

    I loved the and I'm glad i got to read it completed, as many authors don't finish their work, one should write for their pleasure, even if no one like it, and i hope to read more of your work in the future.
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  • From ANON - -Shiki Senri, Ichijo's Lover- on November 13, 2008
    Loved these chapters too!! ^~^
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  • From ANON - -Shiki Senri, Ichijo's Lover- on November 13, 2008
    okies, this chapter could NOT have been given a double chapter. it deserves its own. anyway...I LOVED IT MORE THAN ANY OTHER CHAPTER!! Sexy fighting, blood licking, tendershipping moment, the parts that scream ROTLMFAO! i loved it all.
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  • From ANON - -Shiki Senri, Ichijo's lover- on November 12, 2008
    Ok, chapters 5 and 6 were great and judging by the 'Sire' thing about draining blood and replacing it with vampire blood and this line > “Yes, we were together as humans, but he ran away from me when he was forcefully turned to become a bed slave to a vampire general. I tracked him down and made him turn me. We then combined our strengths and freed him, to be together again.” i take it you have read Darren Shan's Cirque Du Freak? it sounds a lot like what Mr.Crepsley did to Darren, but this might just be a co-winky-dink. anywho, LOVING IT! Now for the next chapters...*digs nails into desk and takes wood out of it while reading* "this is the shit right here!" ^_^

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  • From ANON - -Shiki Senri, Ichijo's Lover- on November 12, 2008
    OH. MY. GOD. I. FUCKING. LOVE. THIS. STORY. But seing as i have only read up to chapter 4, i would say chapter 4 is my FAVOURITE so far. SO FAR!!! This story makes me happy...^_^
    GOOD JOB! :D
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  • From zombiebait86 on November 11, 2008
    SKEE!**hug** Nice finish
    J-chan
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  • From DarkNecrofear on November 10, 2008
    I could so see Ryou there on the ground on top of Marik kissing him like that ^.^ hehe and he finally got his little revenge on those guys, go Ryou, though I didn’t find that at all dark of Ryou as they did give him such a hard time.

    I am sad to see this story end so soon, I was hoping for a few more chapters –sighs- but on a good note you are doing more of my most favorite pairing, YAY! And let’s not mention that YOU have inspired me somewhat as well for future chapters for my fics, so thank you and gratz on finishing your first fic/story, I think you did really well and I loved it lots, hoping to see another update of something from you soon, Later (Hugs)

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  • From CodyMThomas on November 09, 2008
    Absolutely AWESOME ending! I loved it all the way! And down the pipeline... I want all of them! They sound great! *huggles* thank you for finishing this story! I love you I love you I love you!

    Here's a helpful hint for the morning dizzies: Set your alarm for 3-5 minutes before you normally get up and keep fructose tablets and a bottle of water on your bedside table, it works wonders, seriously. Chew one and lay still for a minute and then get up SLOWLY. Sip some water and sit on the edge of the bed for another minute or two and then you should be fine. (Had to do it for years, got sick of passing out on the way out of bed or hitting my head on random things when I fell.)
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  • From YamiKuro on November 08, 2008
    Thanks for the thanks! I loved this story, and am both sad to see it end, and happy Ryou got his revenge on the bastards from earlier :)

    I want to read all the others! :) Especially the sequel and camping :)

    Loved it, and looking forward to more! (and my foursome)
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  • From YamiKuro on November 03, 2008
    I love it. YEAH! THEY'RE VAMPIRES! WOOTWOOT! :)
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  • From CodyMThomas on November 02, 2008
    *SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!* ^_^ two lemons in one chap, angsty Bakura, AND two new baby vampires! I LOVE you! Sooo much love, so happy, thankies thankies thankies! You just made me very very happy! I loves you forever and ever and ever!





    Ah Hypoglycemia, it's a bitch isn't it? I have it too, ever since I was a kid, and it sucks soooo bad! I have a severe case, don't know how bad yours is, but I can't WAIT to hit my late 20's so my metabolism slows down, but hopefully not to the point I become diabetic. *Kicks Pancreas* stupid thing!

    And have you noticed that people are jealous of Hypoglycemia for some reason...

    "You have to eat all the time and never gain weight?! and when you start getting sick you have to eat SUGAR? I want THAT disease!"

    Do you get that too? It makes me wanna slap them and say:

    "Ok you can have it, along with the 6-7 meals a day even if you're not hungry, giving up caffeine and severely monitoring your sugar/starch/carb intake, major weight loss when you get sick (my record is 27 pounds in two weeks because of the flu), the near impossibility to gain weight back without adding ANOTHER 1000 calories to your daily 6-7 meal diet, being cold ALL the time, having little to no energy, becoming an absolute monster to be around if your blood sugar drops too low, and the shaking/dizzy/fainting/nauseous spells because you forgot a meal and it's been 4-5 hours since you ate. Take it, with my blessing!"

    I will never understand why people think it would be fun to have it, I think they are all crazy!
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on November 01, 2008
    Oh wow! Those lemons were hot! I am so glad Ryou was okay and it's about time they got changed. lol I can't wait to read how they adjust to life as vampires. I'll be waiting for the next update!
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  • From zombiebait86 on November 01, 2008
    O.o fuck........
    J-chan
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