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Reviews for Chemistry

By : ichosha
  • From Voidsenshi on February 11, 2009
    O_O
    T_T
    TT_TT
    mrow! It's getting so goooooooood!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From Sammei on January 16, 2009
    Nicely done! Seto and Jou with Jou in the position of power, though I imagine Seto will still eventually, er, end up on top. ;D This is an interesting concept, and I'm looking forward to seeing more! Not gonna lie, Kurasai is pretty damn scary. O_o If I had been Jou, I would have reported him anyways - that's pretty serious! I can also, however, understand his motives for not reporting him. And I enjoy Seto being a perv. XD I'm wondering if there will perhaps be classroom!sex later on. Haha. [Oh, and I think 'rice paddies" is with "d"s, not 't's. Just some constructive criticism from me, I hope you don't mind. ^_^; ]

    Great job!
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 09, 2008
    even though it wasn't real, that scene was SOOOO hot! Loved every minute of this fic so far, and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2008
    it did, it did!!!!!
    oh my, that dream *fans self*
    I'm so glad you made the smut a dream scene, because this story is too facinating to end with just two chapters.
    the boys have so much stuff to sort through regarding their feelings (both the emotional and sexualy needing ones XD)
    and, just to repeat myself, I'm amazed at how well you write their personalities...especially since you're writing them as college students instead of teenagers. there's a lot of fics around where the author don't keep their original character intact (albeit aged) but you do. it makes me a pleased reader. :3
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and I hope there's many to come)

    Ibe
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  • From KiraSahari on October 08, 2008
    Ok, 5 stars or should I say plus signs?! ha ha ha
    Glad you like my review, that makes me very happy too :)
    what do you mean with fanmix? If you are talking about how music makes you remember this couple, me too!!! ha ha ha :P
    I'm a fanfic writer too, well want to think of myself that way, long time ago I wrote a fic, was not yaoi and not from Yu Gi Oh, in Spanish, and I'm trying to start writing again, I love this couple, of course in Spanish because I can not do it in English :( well, the thing is that all my life I have been inventing stories in my head, never write them but they are here living in my crazy head (what a zoo!! O.o')and music always inspire me, this couple is stuck in my brain and some songs make me remember them all the time :P
    Love this chapter, I knew it was a dream!!! It was too soon for them, I knew it!!! ha ha ha I was so happy that it was a dream, they deserve a good relationship not just sex!! They need much more than just sex and don't think Seto was capable of just attacking Jou! Poor Jou, no shirt and wet pants, ewwwwwwwwwwww! And seto was so sweet falling sleep huging Jou's shirt, kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    Love this fic, you are great writer honey, love the way Seto was talking to Jou in his wet dream because that is exactly the image of Seto that he has in his mind! That wet dream was so hot he he he it shows all the passion that Jou can feel coming from Seto and all the need he has for the dragon :P
    Hope to read more soon, love your work, biting my nails here!!!
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  • From KiraSahari on October 07, 2008
    Love the fic. You know I share your opinion about portraying them, if you don't like it don't read instead of insulting the author, in my humble opinion in this case it doesn't matter, they are older and we hope that now they are more mature and wiser than before, people SHOULD accept that they have changed and are not teenagers anymore. The chapter was intense and I love th way you write, love your attitude because I feel the same, the most important opinion about your work must be your own opinion, you are just sharing, is nice when something you write is good for other people but if you are happy with your own stuff that is the most important. Take care, sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2008
    ooh, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
    I think you captured their personalities quite nicely.
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